Gods and Gods

It's a mess. The world of tomb robbers has created heaven and earth. The third and fourth levels, acquired, innate, and fake elixirs have all come out. Don't you think it's a bit too outrageous and a drama? Or is the protagonist too invincible and can only be transformed into a magic weapon to strengthen the powerful character to suppress his combat power?

It's a hodgepodge of chaos, and the main character is a little ant, but he's responsible for everything. What's the point? Do you think you are writing an orthodox fantasy novel?

What the hell are you writing, a hodgepodge within a hodgepodge, a messy plot, you wouldn't have it so messy if you wrote Zhu Tianwen,

This book is very messy. It doesn't have an overall framework. It's all about what the author thinks of. One of the core parts, the strange blood, only appears in the first few chapters and disappears later. The main character is the failure of the final ascension. According to the author's own theory, the most is level 3 or less than level 4. He participated in the game of level 7 or 8 boss. After participating in the game, he ran away at the beginning. The boss didn't care about you, and then he opened a new map by himself. There is no logic at all.

I click on the novel now. The first step is to read the introduction, and the second step is to read the comments. This can save me time.

1. As a little Karami, participate in the big boss's game 2. If you have a grudge, the big shot plots against you, and it is understandable that you can't defeat it. Little Karami plots against you, but he doesn't take revenge even if he has the ability, and he talks about cleaning up his own karma 3. The combat power rises too fast, and the combat power collapses. 4. The two clones are much stronger than the main body, and they are not afraid of the clones seizing power.

What exactly is the protagonist's golden finger or talent, and what effect does it have? It's written in a vague way, and it doesn't say how the protagonist's abilities come from. It's uncomfortable to watch.

The preface does not match the postscript. In the beginning, White Ape said that his bloodline was mixed, but later he said that he had the bloodline of Mountain Ape, and its purity was not low.

The only problem with this book is that the main plot is not clear. First of all, the origin of the protagonist is not explained, the source of his abilities is not explained, and the purpose of the protagonist is not explained, which makes it very confusing.

I have read over a hundred of them, hell, there is no such thing in a perfect world. Even if you have to ascend to the top of the sky before time travel, you will be an immortal (according to the setting of level 6), but after rebirth, you will be playing against level 7 or 8 in a few pictures, and it is still a set of suppression systems. This is not the author's stipulation and it makes sense as written. I would not dare to brag like this even if I was drunk and fainted. At most, I would brag to my friends I don't know about which slice of my family I can eat to my heart's content. 😂😂

The first level of Qi training, the second level of innate foundation building, and tm all heavens and worlds are divided into nine levels.

Too much is not enough. Is it appropriate to write so exaggeratedly in the Dharma-ending era?

Too complicated! If you are a novice, just write honestly! Even a great god cannot hold so many systems!

The way you write it makes me suspect that you are copying.

This is a waste of a good introduction.

It's written mechanically, I have no idea what I'm writing.

At the beginning, it was fun to rob the tomb, and then ran away from the Seventh Generation of the Black Mountain Old Demon, and then started to talk about the Immortal Buddha. But at first, the book friend just wanted to see how you offered the tomb of the king. What are you talking about about the Arhat Buddha? The protagonist has already dealt with the Immortal Buddha, and how can he pour tombs of this level? You don't need to look at the back to know that after the protagonist has left a place in heaven and earth and pretended to be awesome, he has to pretend to be awesome in front of Chen Yulou and others to save them from falling tombs to break the curse. Because the protagonist is so awesome, some snake gods and monsters conflict and fight with the protagonist again, and the protagonist has to start pretending to be awesome again. Because it is not revealed from the beginning how many powerful inheritances the protagonist has in his mind, no matter how powerful the opponent is, as long as he conflicts with the protagonist, the protagonist will think of powerful skill formations in his mind. Isn't this the starting point author's favorite copywriting?

They all have bad reviews. It doesn't seem like a good book.

"I've told you a long time ago that if you want to practice juggling, practice juggling, and if you want to practice martial arts, practice martial arts. You always like to mix them up. It's a miracle that you can survive to this day."

What kind of disorderly behavior is there? Write it down as soon as you think of it.

A little Kalami still has everything. Just write on the show.

I read the book titled Shengui and thought it was a weird genre. Who knew that apart from the weird blood that appeared at the beginning, the rest of the book had nothing to do with the weirdness. There was no central line and the plot was messy. I wrote whatever I thought of.

The core game, Goldfinger, has no introduction at all, except for the appearance of a paper man at the beginning. It's messy and mixed, and it feels like a hodgepodge forced by intelligent AI based on various Chinese myths, stories, movies, and TV shows.

Aren't the gods deceitful? ? ? ? ?

I feel like the author is very serious. He keeps writing even if he doesn't have a monthly ticket.

Such a good hand, but you play it poorly

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