Taking a Concubine at 100 Years Old: Awakening the Supreme Heavenly Spiritual Root

The plot is very interesting, just..., It would be better if the small things were told in a novel and the big things were told in a big way.

The protagonist is so useless. What you wrote about the best spiritual roots is even worse than useless spiritual roots.

Over the course of a hundred years, the protagonist's status as a modern time traveler, improvement of martial arts and moral character, combat experience, accumulation of resources, accumulation of power, and other adventures all seem to be meaningless. The woman's physical qualifications alone were able to bridge the gap caused by these factors over a long period of time. It can only be said that such a protagonist relies solely on qualifications, and the rest is ordinary.

Brother, it is not fashionable to hold back on literary trends now. You are already more than ten years behind in writing and handling of the heroines. Please learn more from the excellent works of the same period. Being overconfident and unconventional will only lead to defeat.

The author wouldn't keep that woman in the end, right? If you don't kill, it's not enough to vent your anger.

The author wanted to write a brilliant heroine who could compete with the protagonist, but when I saw it on the shelves, the protagonist was still suppressed. The poor performance of the book is probably because of the heroine. She has lived for more than a hundred years, not to mention how smart she is, she must be smarter. Being old and not dying is a thief. The current protagonist is not only suspicious, but also like an old monster. This wisdom is not added at all.

I force myself to write like this. I can't stand it anymore. I won't read it anymore.

The protagonist's IQ is very low, at least lower than that of the heroine. The heroine puts forward everything first, and then the protagonist thinks carefully: Yes, what this little girl says makes sense.

The protagonist is such a waste. Xinyue'er has no cultivation. Why is his fighting skills equal to that of the protagonist? I don't know what the author thinks. The protagonist wants to make peace with Xinyue'er in the future? Sb right? Why not kill Xinyue'er directly? Why don't you kill that scheming girl and keep her for the New Year? Xinyue'er is such a femme fatale. I feel sick when I look at her. I don't care whether she is pregnant or not. I just kill her when she is born. If I don't write her to death, the more I watch, the more disgusting I feel. I feel that the protagonist is just a useless character.

When many people read the title of the book, they mostly come to read about geniuses. Doesn't the genius stream mean that no one is as talented as me? Now there is a genius heroine who is just like the protagonist in every way, and is even better than the protagonist in other aspects. What's the point of reading this?

The writing of this new moon is too exaggerated, and it really doesn't look like a human being. The protagonist has a foreign spirit root and a second spiritual root, and the other party must be exactly the same. The protagonist breaks through, and the other party also breaks through. The protagonist wants to kill her, and she immediately thinks of killing him. From beginning to end, as long as the protagonist has it, this woman must have exactly the same thing, except for the jade pendant. What is the meaning of writing like this? Can't read? What this woman wrote was purely to make up for the word count. Since she is not allowed to die, go to the world of immortality and leave as soon as possible. This character is probably the most important factor affecting the performance of this book.

The speed of the cultivator's boat is about three thousand miles per day and night, or 62 kilometers per hour. Can this speed really make a group of innate rowers unable to keep up? Especially when it is said that more than a thousand innate masters cannot even run 300 miles a day, which is a speed of six kilometers per hour. I think if you don't need a boat, you can just bring a tree stump and use Qinggong to run on the sea. If you run out of internal energy, resting on the tree stump for a day will not exceed a thousand miles.

According to the theory of yin and yang, people who are extremely yin and yang will only attract each other, and eventually live a life without shame or impatience, and cannot become enemies.

I thought I had to create my own immortal magic, but in the end I didn't need gifts from others.

What is the setting for this opening? Unreasonable.

I suggest the author change the title of the book, it is not worthy of the name. 1. Concubinage. In fact, the male protagonist got married as a wife, but they fell out later and said that Xinyueer was a concubine. 2. The Tianling Root is what the protagonist has from the beginning. What awakens after getting married is actually the spiritual consciousness.

What controls the plot at the beginning. .

Don't worry, I successfully persuaded many people to quit. The plot is also good and the writing is okay

What about the protagonist's son? Why is there no blood induction?

This spell and auxiliary professional level are really convoluted and uncomfortable to watch.

I'll give you 2 monthly passes. To be honest, this book was too long-winded in the early stages. Now is the climax. Can you update it twice a day?

The protagonist also had his body taken away from him, right?

Can I give you two monthly passes to update two more chapters?

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