Across the Heavens

Come on, author! I have been reading it since you wrote it until now

The book is quite interesting. As the protagonist's sister, Han Xue's martial arts talent has completely surpassed that of the protagonist, Luo Feng, Hong, Lei Shen and everyone on earth. This is very unreasonable. Even Han Xue is very abrupt as a heroine. The author just forced Han Xue to keep up with the progress of the protagonist and ignored normal logic. On the one hand, it is difficult for the protagonists in all major dungeon worlds to see progress, and the various life and death training of the protagonists still require years or decades of hard work. This shows that the practice of Chinese martial arts is bound to be difficult. What about Han Xue? In 3 years, there is almost no training time, not much life and death training, and the progress is much faster than the protagonist's nearly a hundred years of training, constant adventures, and constant improvement of opponents. This is almost insulting to any character in the entire novel. In the words of the book, what does this say? It's not that the protagonist's talent really transcends the sky, but that Han Xue's talent surpasses the entire novel. This setting is really, really awkward! And it's still the kind that can't be rounded. If Han Xue only has "extraordinary" talent and can barely match "Once Upon a Time", then it would be acceptable. But the actual situation is, "I, Han Xue, rely on talent to make a living! I can level up by killing a few monsters! How can I be like my stupid brother who fights life and death?" It's not consistent like this. It is really unwise to use the stupidity of the characters in the entire novel to set off the character of Han Xue. No matter what, the characters in the novel have their own shining points. How can I say that the character of Han Xue is just an emotional training machine by describing his sense of existence in a large way? In fact, the other plots do not have much flaws, except the character Han Xue is really awkward. I hope the author can rein in this character in the future! In the process of reading, readers will unconsciously compare the characters in the book. I hope the author can handle the character description well and not let a certain character ruin the book. Finally, I wish the author will write more smoothly, come on!

Can the protagonist speak in a different tone? It's very rude and disgusting. I don't know what other people think. Anyway, I feel disgusted every time I see this place. What age is it? People with a little bit of quality will instinctively reject people who call themselves Lao Tzu, right? He gives the impression that he is like a big guy who picks his feet, which is really hard to replace.

Many book friends don't understand why Devouring Starry Sky is chosen as the main world, and the worlds traveled through are small worlds. Let me explain it here. Although the swallowing force is very high, it is still within the acceptable range on the earth. Although the force value of the small world is not high, the martial arts is very subtle. On the one hand, it will allow the protagonist to adapt to the world of warriors more quickly, and on the other hand, it will allow him to develop a more comprehensive understanding of spiritual practice. In order to create my own martial arts in the future and find a different path of cultivation from the predecessors, it will be possible and more convincing. The background of the protagonist is that thousands of ordinary people like us need a process to accept, become familiar with, participate in, and even dominate the cruel world of spiritual practice, whether it is physical or psychological, it requires a process of transformation. As the saying goes, if a poor person accidentally gets a hundred million, he doesn't know how to spend it, let alone an ordinary person stepping into the world of spiritual practice? The author wrote this book more because he wanted to write about how a grassroots person can transform into a real strong man, whether it is the external force value or the gradual inner strength! The various travels in the world are just the surface, and the growth of the protagonist is the core and essence. Of course, ideals are beautiful. As a newcomer, my writing power is limited and I may not be able to fully express my ideas. Many book friends may not agree. It doesn't matter, whether you like it or not, it's all a slap to the author! In addition, regarding the world of time travel, the later stages will not be limited to small worlds, there will be advanced worlds, top worlds, and even higher worlds! If you have any suggestions, please tell me here and I will seriously learn from them! Thank you!

Some people have been struggling with the degree of integration, and as long as they can explain themselves, any book in Meng Entering Shenji is not a new cultivation system; Xu Gongzi Shengzhi does not trust other people's systems at all, he always plays in his own system, and his logic is self-consistent; the leader Jing Keshou also has his own nine-level transcendence system; ten-step human cultivation of the universe; Chen Dong's one-person battle against the sky... In fact, the so-called classic is written There are always some people who can see a similar feeling in his books, even if the soup is changed without changing the dressing, the taste can still remain fresh and refined. This is a master... The author just wants to write some of his own thoughts and ideas, but is worried that he is not sure (actually, he is afraid that black fans will spray without brains and orphans will lead the rhythm. This kind of person does not need to be used to seeing Yongfeng. The darker, the more popular. Is it possible? ...), So as long as you don't be too ambitious and have your own system that is logical and self-consistent, you can play how you like. Once you have written your own ideas, you don't need to cater to the readers, but the readers will come after hearing the news. Think about which master from the starting point is not like this. There are also so-called masters who are used to eunuchs, and no one has ever sent a razor blade. I can only say that this book cannot be boiled water, and your own taste and recipe are the exclusive secrets. Fang, with this, there is no need to worry about finding readers. The author should work hard. It's time to plan a new book. This is actually just the beginning of this book. Once you get the hang of it, the next few million words won't be too difficult at all. Don't pay too much attention to what the masters say. I especially can't stand the writing methods of some so-called masters, so when I see them, they directly filter out, do not learn from others, and create their own reputation is the way to go!

I was recommended this book by Qidian, and after reading the introduction, I found the background setting of the main world of "Swallowing Starry Sky" that I liked very much, and there were also some other worlds that I was more interested in, so I subscribed to this book. Originally, I rarely complain and I haven't posted much, but today I still have to post a complaint (there are a lot of complaints, so I don't want to complain) First of all, the author's setting of national martial arts is actually a bit forced. The setting in Swallow is that China and India are stronger because of ancient martial arts and ancient yoga. As the number one master of the earth age, Hong must have been exposed to and practiced ancient martial arts. Later, you mentioned that Hong had practiced Neijiaquan. The problem is that Neijiaquan itself is a national martial art. There is no doubt that Hong's talent is very strong, and he had been a killer for a long time before the Great Nirvana (if I remember correctly, I inferred from the original work that Hong was born in the 1980s and 1990s). However, you told us that Hong had practiced Neijiaquan for decades and also experienced the Great Nirvana period. In the end, he did not realize that the national martial arts had an impact on himself. The amplifying effect of the body (there is no mention of other Chinese people who have practiced martial arts here) Then there are the author's changes to the settings of Devouring (you can add some settings, but you can't change the settings casually). After all, Devouring is used as the main world of the protagonist. Even if it is a small setting, it is easy to cause problems if you change too much. Moreover, the changes are still Devouring, which I like very much. Let me talk about some of the settings you have changed, the author. : 1⃣️The setting in Swallow is that February 1st and August 1st are the times for the actual combat assessment of warriors every year. It has actually been tacitly acknowledged that these two days will not conduct the quasi-martialist assessment. After all, after a quasi-martialist succeeds in the assessment, he needs to practice the "Gene Energy Cultivation Method" to have the strength to participate in the actual combat assessment. Unless, the author, you change to the protagonist because your physical fitness is much higher than that of a quasi-martialist, and you are specially approved. The actual combat assessment was added, not to mention that the protagonist's younger sister was taken out alone to participate in the warrior actual combat assessment designed by the protagonist himself. This episode was really embarrassing to watch 2⃣️The original Devouring book mentioned that everyone has the same method of practicing gene energy, which is the "Gene Energy Cultivation Method". However, after the protagonist passed the quasi-warrior assessment, no instructor gave him the "Gene Energy Cultivation Method", and then the protagonist passed the After the actual combat assessment, the Ultimate Martial Arts School actually directly gave the Daoyin Technique. Maybe the author confused the Daoyin Technique and the Cultivation Method, but the original book is very clear. The Cultivation Method is given to all would-be warriors for free, while the Daoyin Technique needs to be purchased by yourself (it cannot be transferred to other people, and violators will be severely punished by the Earth Alliance). The Daoyin Technique can increase the speed of practicing the Cultivation Method, so the Daoyin Technique and the Cultivation Method are two different things 3⃣️This book mentions that Han Dong signed a contract with the Extreme Martial Arts School after passing the martial arts assessment, and then moved into the Mingyue Community of the Extreme Martial Arts School. As a result, the author set up that Han Dong was only a free warrior who joined the Extreme Martial Arts School in name only 4⃣️In the original Devouring book, it is set that Thor's physical power is higher than that of Hong's, and that Thor's nine-fold thunder sword is only seven times more powerful at most. The author changed Hong's world-destroying marksmanship to Eight times the power, and the protagonist Han Dong is also stupid enough. He can save a lot of money by selling monster materials to the extreme martial arts gym, increasing the contribution value, and then buying cheats. 5⃣️Swallow In the original work, when Luo Feng was the Realm Master, the golden-horned behemoth was much stronger than the average immortal god. It could not even hurt the enemy even if it blew them up. Later, it was still possible to injure the immortal body with the help of Wu-killing wings or expensive venom. As a result, Han Dong in this book injured the peak immortal of the feudal lord with one shot 6⃣️The original book mentioned that Kedi fell in a secret realm of the universe (related to the Zerg tribe) when the world lord was at his peak. The Lord of Chaos City reminded Luo Feng that life-saving measures were very important, and also Luo Feng is required to self-destruct before being controlled by the soul. At that time, he can reverse time and space and resurrect. From this, it can be seen that Kedi has fallen and cannot be resurrected. It has little to do with the enemy's treasure. Otherwise, the Lord of Chaos City will definitely remind Luo Feng that the treasure can prevent resurrection. The original work also contains several plots of reversal and resurrection. Author, why do you think you have to go to the place of death to be resurrected? 7⃣️In the original work, Luo Feng snatched the wings of another venerable and fused them into the new top treasure, the Four-Wing Killing Wu Wings. However, Luo Feng only mastered the second form of the wings, which is to control a side of time and space, after he became a venerable and a galaxy lord. As a result, in this book, the author arranged for a treasure that can block space and confuse time and space to appear (it feels stronger than the domain treasure), but it was only set as an elementary treasure, and it can be used in two forms at the peak of immortality. Then you might as well change this treasure into a secret pattern weapon similar to the air-locking arm. There is another I won't go into details about other settings changes. In fact, many settings do not affect the plot of this book at all. I don't understand why the author changed these settings. You said that you reread it many times when writing about other worlds, so do you have to read it a few more times when you are devouring the main world? Although the author is definitely prone to problems as a newcomer, Tomato's The logic of the book is relatively strict, and the data quantification is also good (after all, he majored in mathematics in college). This is one of the reasons why I like to read Tomato novels. Therefore, the settings you have changed may easily conflict with the original work later, or the content you wrote may contradict yourself And I believe that many people have watched Swallowing the Stars. , If the setting must be changed in order to promote the development of the plot, then I suggest that when the author starts writing this book, he should set Swallowing as one of the worlds in the world. The main world can make up a new world that suits its own setting, which will be easier for people to accept. You must know that those screenwriters and directors who ruined the original work also started by changing settings one by one

The biggest feature of this book is that the protagonist is stubborn and regards Chinese martial arts as his only pursuit, which I admire! My understanding of martial arts is too narrow!

I feel like the protagonist is a little too stupid! To learn something is to know how it is, but not to know why it is like one plus one, etc., And not knowing how many beans there are, such as one red bean, one soybean, etc.

I read 60 chapters in one go. First of all, let me say that I rarely spend money to read books. Most of my works are read on Baidu. When I can continue reading through the subscription, I went to Baidu to read it. This book is an exception. I think it is worth spending some money to support the author. Because it's quite to my liking, mainly because I don't get tired of reading it, and it's used for entertainment without burning my brain I don't remember to vote for recommendations every day, but for the following chapters, as long as you work hard and write seriously, I will subscribe to them all. Rewards and other things will depend on the writing^_^ I don't read it every day, because it is too few. Even if you have a lot of updates, more than 7,000 updates per day, if you write more, I will subscribe in batches every time. Finally, never give up, although in my opinion, this book should not only have this result. Why do you say that? I have read too many books that are not as good as yours but have good results. The descriptions are vague and the plot is blunt. Especially in the middle and late stages, when you break through the realm, you just add a little bit casually, or take drugs, or simply go into retreat... There are too many books about this kind of jumping. At least in my opinion, your book of 1.6 Million words is still not full of surprises. The style is still in line with the previous period, and it is not without its shortcomings. The plot is much smaller than the previous period, especially "Yangshen". Many people say they have never read it. You have to spend more time describing the details, especially the characters, so that Even readers who haven't read it will not have much impact. At least you didn't write it randomly. I think you restored "Hongyi" and "Xiwuyi" quite well. You also described the specific cultivation process very vividly, which is rare in other books. The last book I read that described it like this was "The Biography of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality". Of course, I won't talk about "Swallowing the Starry Sky" Everyone has their own tastes, and the work you write cannot be suitable for everyone. Everyone has different experiences and thoughts, and there is no need to worry about the current results. Conscientiously insisting on writing what you want to write is a journey that every great author has to go through. Even if it is really not good enough, you can only really see the shortcomings after you finish writing, and the next book will be better. 2020.10.15 23:00

No wonder the writing is OK but the grades are poor. The protagonist's mentality has always been a problem. It feels like a salty mentality. If he wasn't devouring the stars, he might not be able to do anything. This kind of protagonist has to think about a fight or two for a chapter or two. It's really unpleasant.

This book is quite well written, but the dissuading function of Rebirth in Devouring the World is too strong. After all, in the eyes of most people, with the Devouring World, the rest of the small worlds in the heavens are almost useless. Therefore, although the author writes well, many people left after reading the beginning, which is why there are so few recommendation votes.

In fact, Yang Shen's writing is okay, but I don't know why you all are so picky. This is a very successful continuation of the original setting. I think it is understandable. There is nothing wrong with this way of thinking.

Is the author exaggerating the effect of Chinese martial arts? It's okay to lay the foundation in the early stage, but it's useless to practice the law in the later stage.

He was almost beaten to death by Yan Zhendong. Are you so reckless? Are you pretending to be B when your strength is so low? Are you talking about taking care of your sister? So why is the novel called Qidian Orphanage? It talks about taking care of the family and seeking death at the same time. No wonder everyone talks about poison.

Is this the kind of book where the protagonist goes through a lot of hard work and narrow escapes to reach level 10, but the supporting character reaches level 11 just by lying down and sleeping?

Han Dong is currently on the "sixth floor" of the seventh trial tower. According to his current strength, whether it is the various abilities of the national martial arts pills or the use of laws and secrets, he can no longer pass the test, and the result should be to "pass" all the trials. Then he has the last resort, which is the "Spear of Will", which can directly threaten the powerful attack ability of the Realm Lord. It is precisely the gun of will that cannot be tolerated by the "original universe"! But in the "virtual universe", the environment created by the original ancestor, it can be used directly. Well~~ After a sweet potato show, the spear of will swept across the opponent, shocking all mankind in the universe, showing off the melon skin of the original ancestor, and he also confirmed the new power law of the pig's feet again, and was very interested. So he silently ordered the "Lord of Chaos City" to indicate that he had reserved a doll. For a time, the top human beings did not dare to intervene in recruiting disciples, and not only the masters of the major universes remained silent. Even the venerable level couldn't avoid it, which made Han Dong immediately confused! Han Dong said he couldn't understand why it was so logical for Shikong Luowa to become a disciple, but not when it came to him? Then after more than a dozen chapters of excessive plot, the original ancestor boss showed up directly, and Han Dong was shocked! Guided by various resources, he spent decades of hard training in the primitive secret realm... One day, the "Golden Finger" that had been dormant for many years suddenly activated, "Welcome to the world of "Yangshen", Hong Yi has three seconds to arrive at the battlefield... Please be prepared..."

The protagonist, the younger sister, looks disgusting

I always feel that the protagonist has picked up the sesame seeds and lost the watermelon. When the protagonist travels through the century world, he pays too much attention to martial arts and ignores the more important things in the world. Whether it is the pre-Qin philosophers or the later Buddhism, Taoism and Confucianism, the protagonist can learn a lot from wisdom, heart and mind, but the protagonist has never cared about these. The original work Swallowing the Stars once said that the ideas contained in ancient books on the earth can play a great role in spiritual cultivation. But just reading about it from books is not as useful as discussing it directly with the sages. The protagonist never seems to go to them.

The characterization of characters in this book is above average among the Qidian authors I have read, and there is no facial expression. However, in the middle period, too much text was devoted to explaining the practice system and realm, and the development of the plot was underestimated. The setting of the web novel is to serve the development of the plot, and putting the cart before the horse seems very clumsy.

Have you noticed that Luo Feng has become the main sect and the protagonist is still single?

After seeing Chapter 68, I couldn't stand it any longer.

I read and vote silently every day. Do you have any energy?🤓🤓

This indicates that the rhythm has been eunuch from the beginning. If there is no heroine, I can't stand it. At least write a heroine and create a tribe to compete with Luo Feng.

The author can't figure it out and can't stand it anymore

It can be said that I felt that you forced the end of the book only halfway through, which is a bit of a pity. By the way, I would like to complain about the main character, who will be single for the rest of his life.

It's pretty good, but not very popular.

I just recently discovered that I am actually a deacon

This is the novel that I have read that explains the realm of Daluo Jinxian most clearly. It is also the one I recognize the most. It's not like some current novels with infinite stacks of boxes. It makes no sense at all.

How come it ended suddenly after being raised to death?😅

The ending is not devouring at all. The realms of Hunyuan Life, Higher Level, World, and Hunyuan Lord are gone.