Immortal Locust

The writing is very good. I look forward to the completion of the new book because I only read the completed books.

Basically, there is no heroine, which is quite enjoyable to watch.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that the writing of your novel is very awkward. You say it is a decisive killing, but I feel that the protagonist is too soft-hearted. It is said that it relies on locusts to gain power. You also find two unnamed subordinates and accept a disciple. The little girl is not simple at first glance. She also found the bones of an ancient monk, which feels strange and strange.

When I read a book, I care about logic. This is not too much. It is too much for the foundation-building robbers to rob the Yuanying family. Don't tell me what the reason behind it is and who is protecting it. According to the immortal way, even if those robbers put their lives on the line, it is not profitable enough to ask a Yuanying master to offend another stronger Yuanying family (people who are not strong at the same level or above will always be ants in their eyes)

Early stage, middle stage, late stage, peak, perfection. One qi training realm, forty-five small realms, really, disgusting

I was speechless after reading thirty-two chapters. In the first four chapters, the protagonist is said to be decisive in killing, but in the second chapter, the protagonist inexplicably swears to kill a peerless genius who sacrificed 300,000 mortals with his blood. Is it weird? Is it none of your business if I just ask a question? ? I was speechless. You want to write such a selfless and righteous protagonist. Why did you write the protagonist so selfishly in the first four chapters? Anyone who read it will not say a word that the author is really a talent.

The Nascent Soul Family, for example, could create a golden elixir-level secret book, and also come up with a bunch of things in a flashy way, which is incredible. It would be understandable if it were a Jindan family.

Aren't you just playing with bugs? Why don't you kill the bosses and the like, go shopping and make your muscles flow, and even train your mind on the line between life and death?

You sacrifice 300,000 people in a city with blood at every turn. How many people are there in a feudal society? In the end, the bad guy was protected and taken away. If you expect retribution from heaven for anything. I estimate that you are a cultivator in the last days and will be destroyed.

No wonder I was able to sign it. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking traditional category... No, the ones with new ideas don't count as traditional categories, haha

Opportunities that can't be escaped, heroes who save beauties, ugly ducklings that turn into white swans, and monsters that can't be jumped out of are leveled up step by step.

The peak of the middle stage of Qi refining and the early stage of the late stage of Qi refining? I was going to write like this. I ate half a dragon and was still at the peak of the middle stage of Qi Refining The most important peak is very poisonous. The memory of death suddenly attacked me. A few years ago, an author liked to write like this. He directly flooded the readers away. He seemed to think that he had written well. What about half-step perfection in the middle stage of Qi-Refinement, perfection, half-step great perfection, great perfection peak, and then the early stage of the later stage, and the early half-step perfection. Good guy, I have a deep memory.

The protagonist has been a man slave for so many years and feels that he should not be so holy. Others have killed 300,000 people for the immortal base, but you have to save it. In the immortal world, strength comes first, and there is no point in caring about the loyalty of your subordinates, because they will never be able to stand up, unlike in ancient times when they revolted and so on. If they don't have the strength, what can they do to stand up?

It's a very good traditional cultivation novel, and the writing is not a no-brainer. It's worth reading. Although the plot of explaining stone gambling is found in many immortal novels, it is still very interesting to read.

Recently, I often come across examples where the first three chapters are amazing, but then the chapters become irritating. This book is not poisonous, but it is a running account Starting from the bloodbath of the He family (including this section), the diarrhea went too fast all the way. The author describes some details very well, and a few strokes are indeed very powerful. However, the overall plot is not graspable at all. Diarrhea is placed on the belt, and the shit basin is decorated with gold rims. The first three chapters successfully created a ruthless and forbearing protagonist, coupled with the green locust disaster and a variable character, I was looking forward to it. The revenge in the back is dull and boring. How can you be a dull and cruel protagonist? At the beginning of the mountain practice, the protagonist was definitely overtaken by another "male high school", who was called Gurgling Water, fresh and stoic, and upright. In addition, the protagonist can train the blood river inheritance into a flesh tank, which is already very good. He is from the devil Now that you have entered the righteous path, it's not like there is nothing, why can you swing your fists? It's all good for righteousness, controlling demons, warding off demons, and controlling demons. You can just be a flesh tank. Why is it called the inheritance of the sea of blood? It's better to call it Dragon Elephant Prajna. It's so good to become a Vajra Warrior

This combat power is too outrageous. The author should be careful. The Nascent Soul will be destroyed as soon as the elixir is formed, and the Soul of Transformation will be destroyed as soon as the Nascent Soul is formed. If it is outrageous, it should be dealt with one by one.

The plot is a bit stiff, and there are some Madonnas. How many qualifications do you need to have three thousand insects? Does it make sense to be invincible at the same level? How many adventures do you need to write like this? If you use your own cultivation to be higher, just like building a foundation, you can't beat the golden elixir. Realm is the king.

Is there a female protagonist? It seems like there isn't one

The first four chapters were okay, but starting from the fifth chapter, the setting of seven years in a row was really speechless. Then, with only one book, I found a place to practice quietly. A few years passed by, and then I accepted a disciple after I had completed my Qi practice. I couldn't stand it anymore!

I finally saw the traditional cultivation of immortality again, and it was pretty well written. I feel so relieved. Must be ordered in full

In fact, the writing was pretty good at the beginning, but the battle power collapsed too quickly in the back. There were more and more immortal locusts merging into one, and some formations. I guess not many people read it, and then it ended quickly.

A little explanation of the controversial plot. (Why does Mr. Cao want to kill He Feilong?) The two have never met, one is in the sky and the other is on the ground. 1. The massacre carried out by He Feilong Jiedan was so cruel that Cao Cuo hated it. 2. It is difficult to calm down, he needs a whetstone. (Knife practitioners are somewhat arrogant) 3. He Feilong is a proud genius, and Cao has to set a goal for himself.

Gou Daoliu has read a lot, but this one was the most unpleasant to read.

From this last era to this era, as soon as the setting of the battle between the old and new immortal ways came out, it felt like the pattern was opened up. It smells like what Zhai Zhu has written before

Finished reading it, I like it very much! With only a dozen chapters, both the writing and the plot arrangement are very good, but the update is a bit slow. 👿👿

I skipped through a few chapters, poisonous. Making something depends entirely on quantity, not just ordinary quantity. Hundreds of thousands and tens of thousands are successful. How is this kind of thing passed down? The people behind me won't improve it? They even say that the success rate is only achieved by others in decades. Direct practical operation without learning theory? Success depends on feel

At the end of "Spreading Flowers", I wonder if there are any comments on the completion of the book. I'm curious?

It's a smooth read, it's a comfortable book to read in one go. The shortcomings are also obvious. It's too little. It's too early to read.

It's very chaotic when you look at this realm.

It still feels like something new. Come on, author.