Me, Second Week of Hogwarts

It's not bad, I see a lot of people criticizing... It's just that the writing towards the end was too delayed. Of course, if you want to read cool articles, just read the chapters before they are released.

It's 2023, and there are still people who insist that eight out of ten sentences are about liberating house elves? How many years did it take wizards to domesticate this huge potential and extremely high threat (no threat after domestication, but it does not mean that there is no threat as a member of another race), and now there are people with abnormal brains who want to overthrow their achievements? Equality and freedom are for the same race, not other species. What animal protection?

I can't stand it when I see the branching. It maliciously arranges Hogwarts and its four founders, doesn't respect others and is racist. Hogwarts has taught and educated people for at least 1,000 years and helped poor students. During this period, teachers or students have prevented many things that threaten humanity. No matter how the protagonist lives in two lives, can you be more mature? There is no requirement to define the protagonist. At least don't do disgusting things about Hogwarts or other magic schools.

This book is quite good, except for the plot where the school owl is roasted and eaten every day.

Maybe I am sick I actually saw a little warmth No, no, this may be the disguise of the great Dark Lord Owen. Who can really see your heart despite laughing and scolding? Lord Owen the Dark Lord

Didn't I say that I like Hermione so much? In nine and a half of the ten Harry Potter books, Hermione is the heroine, and half of them are ambiguous. There are many beautiful girls in Harry Potter movies and novels. Starting from the beginning, as you started to flirt with Hermione, didn't you notice that there were fewer and fewer people complaining about it?

It feels like it was written by a primary school student, full of childish and inappropriate jokes.

Being nonsensical occasionally is fun, being nonsensical all the time is crazy.

I have read more than 400 chapters, and I found that it is written that the protagonist has become Harry and Hermione's nanny, and has become a nanny. During the Four Wiz Tournament, the other houses only knew Hermione and Harry, but did not know who Owen was. It was called protecting the protagonist, and Voldemort even attacked Hogwarts. The protagonist and Voldemort have fought several battles, but no one except the people inside Hogwarts knows about it. Harry and Voldemort fought once and the outside world became the savior, and Hermione also became Dumbledore's successor.

The introduction is extremely "correct"? Could it be the black Asian intersex vegetarian Harry Potter?

Don't miss Hermione in European and American eyes

Summarizing the various novels I have read about mentally ill protagonists, I personally divide them into two categories: The first is that they appear to be insane, but in fact there is a unique set of logic behind them that is different from ordinary people but perfectly consistent. Their thinking is parallel to ordinary people, but they are insane but not chaotic. This type of book requires the author to have more rigorous logical thinking than ordinary people. I personally think that the masterpiece of this kind of book is "Playing with Evil". The second is true lunacy, which is so lunatic that readers have to worry about whether the author is crazy. This type of book only needs to be lunatic enough, and the logic only needs to be barely self-explanatory. Representatives are "Dao Wei" and "Sleep". I think there is a problem with the author's book, that is, it is not crazy enough, and the logic is not strictly coherent. It jumps left and right in the worldview of normal people and crazy people, which leads to a poor reading experience and a lack of popularity. But this cannot be blamed on the author. Most people cannot handle this kind of subject matter. In short, I wish the author an early breakthrough and the writing power that can control it.

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Stock trading, go away, it doesn't matter to me whether there is a female protagonist or a harem, but I feel that stock trading is disgusting.

Shenjin, the main character died at the end of the writing, I didn't come to Akaishi for the money.

Most people feel that the protagonist is a psychopath I guess the author is a woman Too much fun and fun Eating owls and gnawing big melons, these things cannot be compared with swords Which badger academy senior is right, there is a reason why some spells are called unforgivable Dumbledore is not so unfaithful, but most of them are a pair, pure two creations, just enjoy yourself.

The plot of the owl was replaced by the giant octopus in the black lake. It just so happens that there is some foreshadowing in the previous article. Gryffindor is really chewy.

It doesn't look good for some reason. It feels like the protagonist has changed from a crazy little black devil to a laughing clown🤡

If the original work is a children's book, this one can be said to be a mentally retarded book. Even an old Shennong like me can't stand it.

To be honest, I don't understand why Hermione was chosen as the heroine. Didn't the first episode bring trouble to the male protagonist? Even if she is not Hermione, she would not choose it. In comparison, Luna, a girl who is more like White Moonlight and Redemption, has much less scenes. Obviously the male protagonist is right from the beginning. Luna is very special. Even if she is attached to the heroine for one week, Luna is the choice. It is good that she does not downplay the other students, but the protagonist should choose no heroine or Luna. Even if White Moonlight is untouchable, it is better to have no heroine. Why choose Hermione? Moreover, the setting of the plot in the middle is abrupt and even the social chapter has problems.

To be honest, I quite like the setting of this book, it has a happy feeling. But some things can't be played endlessly. The protagonist is completely insane, and the book is also a self-advertisement of the author. There are all kinds of nonsense and weirdness. I don't understand how the author found it interesting. After expressing your thoughts, pack up and get out now, so the brothers who are talking about this will be happy to see it.

So I looked at something in particular! ? Your purpose in traveling back in time was to make Hermione die alone?

It is recommended that you don't believe the bad reviews in the comment area, just click in and read. Save yourself the trouble and scroll to the bottom to read the summary. New to Qidian. I read it during the free period of new registration. I have only read 30% of the content for the time being. I have read countless HP articles in fourteen days. Overall, this book can probably be ranked in the top ten in Qidian HP. You can just get through the fake world line chapter at the beginning. The rest of it is pretty normal. The protagonist is a bit subversive and may be more of a judgmental type, which I like better. As for the story, there are basically many original ones, and it is based on the original work. The plans of Voldemort and the principal are about to be blown up, but basically the general direction can still be controlled by the protagonist. There is no other twitch novel that changes the story line and then throws it to the principal. The situation that annoys the principal himself, except for Grindelwald's thousand-year-old second-in-command, Fukasaki Hyou, there are basically no other poisonous points. That woman's character is extremely bad, and she is also said to be trained according to the third generation of the Dark Lord. The story is very bad. Okay, it was originally fun to watch, but the woman is annoying when I look at it. Fortunately, there are not many scenes. Characters, this book has a very high degree of restoration of the original characters, which is similar to that of the magic text, and it is perfectly based on the plot and the protagonist's changes to other people, which enriches the characters. The supporting characters and the heroine are not all the accessories in other books. It is the first time to see them. I was dissuaded by the one who talked about the insulation article. After reading it for the second time, I realized that I really despise this thing being called a nanny article. Let me ask you, Dumbledore supports Fudge, and Fudge looks to Dumbledore for support like a dog. Does Dumbledore count as a nanny? Is this a poisonous point? This is obviously more exciting, outrageous To summarize Advantages: The story line is close to the original work, but there are many original works, so it is not boring. It is a happy story, the characters are very reasonable, and they have all been enhanced. The protagonist is just like a puppet manipulated by a cat behind the scenes, not a nanny. The main heroine Hermione does not hang up, just like a normal love... I also doubt it can be considered a love Points: Just get through the fake world line chapter at the beginning. The protagonist is a bit confusing (some people may not like it, but I love it). The annoying woman under Grindelwald is currently the most powerful person except the demon kings in terms of black magic (but she was made very passive by some characters in the author's original plot. Although she was also killed, some people may not like it). By the way, the protagonist's combat ability in the false world line is probably similar to that of Harry Potter who defeated Voldemort, but overall it is not as good as Dumbledore's Dark Lord, so the second life may be at the level of Dean at the beginning In short, except The main character is Dian, and the rest is basically close to the level of the magic text. However, the study of magic is not as good as magic text. It is still a very good book. It is a must-read for Hermione fans. People who like original and original works can also read it. This book's comment area should not be the only place where people are weird. Please remember to add a fine line for me. \( ͯω ͯ)/

As a reader who has read more than 30 HP fanfics. Tell me your point of view. I think the highest score for this book is 75. Maybe it's a matter of vision. It doesn't have any eye-catching features. I can only say that it's quite satisfactory. The author has innovative ideas, but it feels too disconnected from the original work. It's like a new story wrapped in HP. As a fanfic, it's not very qualified. Fortunately, it finally brought the story back together. Out of respect for more than two million words, I give it a passing grade. First let's talk about the shortcomings. In the later stages of this book, I read it with patience. There is no sense of priority at all. Especially after Goblet of Fire. It is a state of extension for the sake of extension, although there is a large area of ​​original plot. But it gives people a smelly and long feeling. And it's not mainly about the protagonist Owen. Instead, various roles are mixed and interspersed. The length is even as long as one character, with 10 pictures and 20 pictures. It doesn't feel like a novel at all. If you want to write a group portrait, it should be clear at the beginning, instead of starting with Owen's story and then starting to mix it up in a large area later, giving people a sense of aesthetic fatigue. The author's writing style in the second book is actually not good. The logic doesn't make sense in many places. Causes great reading difficulties for readers. This is also one of the main reasons why I can't watch it later. Third, regarding the heroine setting. The character established at the beginning of this book should be a cynical person. It is a process of reviving the second life to make up for regrets. In this process, either there should be a heroine to accompany the story from the beginning, or there should be no heroine at all. In the early stages of the book, many female characters including Hermione, Luna, and Hannah had ambiguous relationships with the protagonist. A sudden switch to Hermione as a single female protagonist. Quite a stiff turn. It caused a lot of discomfort in reading, and was seriously inconsistent with the image of the early characters. And the protagonist himself has a decisive and decisive character. But I met a heroine who was hesitant, weak and incompetent. Even in order to cater to Hermione, the biggest image in the early stage was completely abandoned, which was a bit subversive and a bit crazy. Owen, who was quite a character, was abandoned. This was also the feature that most attracted readers at the time. Unfortunately, in the later period, it gave readers the feeling of two people before and after, and the contrast was too great. This is the biggest failure of this book. The fourth is about the setting of the big boss. It can be seen that the author has been establishing a final villain from about two hundred chapters. However, during the reading process, I found a very confusing point, that is, the image of this final villain is constantly changing, from Herbo to Outer God, and then to Ionia. Then to the tallest one. It can be seen that the author wanted to write it very grandly and lofty. So I keep changing my image. The bad thing is that it brings confusion to readers, and the logic is not smooth. There is a feeling that it changes again and again, and you don't know who it is. The fifth biggest failure is the characterization of Voldemort. Voldemort himself should be an extremely selfish person. It is absolutely impossible for him to let his personality be controlled by an external god. And he is very conceited. Even if he wants to gain power, he must be able to control it. Therefore, at the end of the book, Voldemort is completely controlled by foreign gods. This character is really separated, and it feels like it was painted for the sake of portrayal. Contrary to the original work. It goes against the basic character traits of the fan character. It's better to reinvent a villain than that.

BeThe ending is not worth the special money. The ending is too outrageous. The protagonist actually died. Are you kidding me?

I haven't read the book yet, but I saw a post about True Shennong in the comment area and compared it with the other two. I really couldn't help it. True Shennong has a solid basis for the plot. It is written in detail and points out the advantages and disadvantages The one about quitting after just seeing the branch is said to be disrespectful and discriminatory to the founder. I went over to take a look. All the so-called disrespectful content is based on the protagonist's previous life experience, and his first life was in a zzzq world. The protagonist has been lamenting that the normal world is beautiful and that the zzzq world is a cult. This is completely the author's ridicule of European and American zzzq. In the end, the author can be blamed for being disrespectful. The nanny article is also a joke. I have read a lot of HP articles, but it seems that whether you are with the trio, a support person, or teaching them knowledge, it is called a nanny article. It seems that it only counts if you are hostile to the trio and have no contact. The problem is that they are the protagonists of the original work, and everything is set around them. The author can write some original works, but all major events are related to Harry, can they be avoided? Those who teach knowledge are obviously treating them as thugs. This can also be a nanny article, Le. You can't just play the protagonist whenever something happens. This kind of role of the protagonist, no matter old or young, is more like Harry's lackey, more like a nanny story. There are a bunch of replies thanking Shennong below, which are also funny. When did Shennong become so popular? I didn't read it and I misled a lot of people.

In the later stage, the protagonist is equivalent to the nanny. It's like it doesn't exist

After reading Chapter 18, there is almost no plot, it is all about having fun. You can say that the plot is slow, but all the other supporting characters are like tool men and not fleshed out at all.

After reading two chapters, I feel like it was written by a Harry Potter hater. I feel sorry for you. You didn't like it and you wrote so much.

Nonsense nonsense writing style... Don't talk nonsense next time