All Heavens: Transfer Students at Hogwarts

I didn't expect much when I saw Hadero's Grand Movement. In the previous few worlds, I passed through them in a hurry. I went directly to the clear goal and then cleared the level in the dungeon. There was no plot to unfold. Hadro's experiment was too lengthy, and it felt like boiled water, and the part about Hadro's parents at the end had a bit of flavor. Next to Marvel, it's okay to meet Tony, but it's a bit inconsistent to repair the first-generation suit (which Obaday got later) and Tony ran to chat with the protagonist without doing anything. Moreover, the protagonist's actions of repairing the first-generation suit are also a bit confusing, so it can only be regarded as foreshadowing for the time being. In the next Stan Lee, I feel that the main and secondary lines are a bit unclear, and the incident between Gary and Gwen is also a bit closer to the vulgar direction of current TV series. Things that can be solved with a snap of a finger have to sit back and wait for it to happen and then work hard to solve it. Maybe it is the same for the protagonists, but I have a completely different view of the fourth wall. I'll take a break and continue reading later when I can think of it again. Please do not substitute the above personal opinions.

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I really couldn't stand it. I didn't want to read it when I saw the wand-making magic. I took it for granted. Is it necessary to copy thousands of ice picks with a copying spell? You have said that the copying spell requires your own magic power. Your ice cone uses external magic power, and the copying spell uses your own magic power. If you can't copy any of them, you will have no magic power. Do you want your own magic power to exceed the external magic power? No energy is used when copying?

Three golden chapters, followed by a bunch of answers

When I saw the latest chapter, I suddenly felt like the author wrote about Chinese-style parents in the previous book. The author wrote h again...

Hey hey

After reading dozens of chapters, I can summarize: The author is a young writer, but not of that level. So what is reflected is this embarrassing situation of being neither good nor bad, wanting plot but not plot, and wanting writing style but not writing style. However, it can be regarded as an enlightening reading for readers with low cultural level or those who have just read online novels. At least there's no noob vibe.

This book is free to read. As long as you pay a penny, your family will have money

The protagonist's combat power goes up and down, his character goes up and down, and sometimes he is too accommodating to the characters in the plot. Zhu Tianliu's writing like this can only mean that you are happy. Just jump and read them as independent stories, and you can keep watching as long as the plots match up.

I hope the author can write about the leisure and indifference of God, rather than the idea of ​​being a nanny.

I can't even recommend it if I don't follow up on it. Dear brothers, please try not to keep books. I beg you, if you have any comments, you can give them and I will try my best to change them.

Writing alternately, it feels like both worlds are sketched out, lacking the ups and downs of the story, making it a bit flat.

The protagonist written by this author is a eunuch. In other words, more than 90% of the protagonists in the novels on Qidian Chinese website are now eunuchs. And he always shows off his sense of superiority inexplicably, and his writing is as dull as water.

This protagonist has no charm. He grows up in an instant. He only takes profits without taking responsibility. I only read Chapter 30. It is said that the protagonist just picked up an artifact along the way. Whether the world can be restarted in the future is none of his business... Then you have already predicted that this artifact is an observer and is related to the world. You took it away. How can you say it has nothing to do with you? You just passed by and took away the artifact. How cheap.

Is the author contaminated by the evil god? It's all nonsense.

I spent money to order a hundred chapters, but I still don't understand what the author wanted to write, or maybe the author was just enjoying himself from beginning to end. Zhu Tianwen now has quite a starting point. In fact, it seems that the core selling point is Xiao Baiwen's three-point axe. One is: Picking up girls, the other: Pretending, and the other: Spoofing. Using picking up girls as a selling point is like the king next door, with dozens of harems, just one word is cool; using pretense as a selling point is like Chen Laomo, everyone knows it; using spoofing as a selling point, to be honest, it actually tests the author's skill and imagination. A thing with only creativity and no content is about the same as toilet paper. If you play the above points well, you will be the second short Xiaofeng, another great god in Zhutianliu. This book, I want a woman but not a woman, the protagonist in hundreds of chapters keeps his body as pure as a jade, don't ask, even the magicians are all eunuchs. To show off or not, Marvel is dealing with Eternal Stan Lee and others, and the next chapter will be about dozens of chapters about Harry Potter's bitch. Need some imagination, haha. Then the question is, you pinned it to the top of the comment area to ask others for suggestions, so what do you think is the selling point of your book?

Looking at it now, The Hobbit has one of the worst plots ever. None of the characters have grown. . . . . Except the old principal. . . . . Thorin, who could have defeated the dragon disease alone and heroically defeated himself, became a clown. Bilbo's pure and resolute character and courage were not recognized and displayed. Bard's caring for the people turned into eager to inherit his father's status. Kili and Tauriel's love that spanned race and life and death disappeared. Little Yezi didn't know whether he could grow without witnessing his first love. Will they continue to have a deep friendship with Gimli in the future? Thranduil and Dain's heroic move of resolutely putting aside racial conflicts in front of the Orcs turned into a chaotic war. In Middle-earth, as long as Orcs are seen, elves and dwarves will definitely fight Orcs together. This is the question. There will be no three-way chaotic war, even without Maia's mediation.

It's so well written. The protagonist's behavior is just like that of a real twelve-year-old child. It's impossible to tell that he was a people's teacher before. His face changes are textbook-like. One second he begs Dumbledore for a meal, and the next second he changes his face and looks down on all ordinary wizards with the help of Goldfinger.

We have created the Mage Tower in the dnd world, so shouldn't we go to Harry Potter and push the wizarding world directly? Harry Potter's weird and weak magic, use your head to resist the wizard tower

The fifth-year transfer student at Hogwarts, oh my god, he is a hot person.

It feels like if you list out all the plots of Hogwarts, it will be the sacred book. The story-telling on the train when he entered school, the magnificence of the magical world shown when he was teaching transfiguration and the applause he received from the young wizards, and the forgotten punishment of Gilderoy Lockhart for performing the eternal transfiguration. These plots can be said to be extremely exciting. But coupled with the boring plots of other worlds, and even inexplicable unexpected emotional scenes, it can only be said to be a relatively literary YY novel.

The writing skills are poor, the vision is high but the hand is low, the idea is good, but the author's level cannot keep up. The separation is serious for me. What sounds good is the narration, but what is bad is disorganized.

Suddenly I remembered why I stopped reading this book halfway through. It turned out to be because the author went crazy later and the plot was so lame that I couldn't stand it.

It's so messy, really. It gives people an idea that there is no clear goal. The places that can be described in detail, the places that should not be written in detail (the Kingdom of God, magic), hp (the trio) are desperately writing. Let's just mention it once in a while, why focus on those three? Whether it is age, status or strength, there is a huge gap between the two parties. Why do you escort, act as a nanny and lick those three? Is the protagonist in your novel the protagonist, or are the three children just the protagonist? If you want to see the magnificent and mysterious magical world, the part where the protagonist cooks is quite good and quite magical. You should give full play to what you are good at, use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, increase your writing on magic and other places, and reduce it on interpersonal communication. I want to see magic, magic, magic! ! ! (Author, please re-read what you wrote and see if it is a mess. It is a hodgepodge. It feels seriously torn and the writing is not brilliant.)

The subject matter is okay, but the author's writing style is not.

When you write a new world, you don't first introduce the story outline and the general plot. What you want when Pig's Foot travels to the new world is vague, and you just talk about the plot characters directly. Most people can't understand what you are writing.

I just hope that the protagonist will be saved by Dumbledore in the most difficult time, so don't hate Dumbledore, and don't be wary of Dumbledore. Dumbledore is indeed a good person, so the protagonist shouldn't become the kind of person who is fearful of authority and unethical.

The author was stabbed in the back by the Ring of Magic DLC, but the two Omen brothers are still manly

Are you planning to write the entire Baldur's Gate 3? Do you think I have never played it?

This is not like a novel, but like writing a diary. There is no outline and main line, so I just write whatever comes to mind. Although there are many characters, the main character is overflowing with motherly love, but the supporting characters are flattened. Chapter 80 has passed and I can't remember the names of the supporting characters except Harry Potter! What on earth am I looking at! Tired😭

I heard that there will be a plot of diametrically opposed to each other in the later stage, a bunch of concubines with a focus on the plot, and then the sensational literary youth wrote a pure love God of War who only loves one, such a stomach-ache plot? Can anyone tell me if it's worth watching?