The Struggle History of the Urban Generation

Don't be afraid of the floating clouds covering your eyes, and work hard to write beautiful articles. There is a road under your feet, the sky above your head, and two Kunluns on your shoulders.

The author is good at observing life and summarizing, and describes the meeting procedures and content very accurately.

Curious: Why is the title of your work details page different? It will bring pictures! After reading so many books, few are like this. At first glance, they look very advanced...

Isn't this little guy Lao Hou just an ordinary member of our common people?

The feeling of going home for the New Year is deeply ingrained in the minds of Chinese people.

Layman Liu Gong's writing is excellent, a rare good work!

👍 If it's so well written, why isn't it popular?

I also want to stop sometimes. But seeing that Brother Liu Gong was still persisting, he gave me the strength to persist. Learn from you.

This writing is so good, it makes me feel ashamed.

After reading the last chapter, I felt a strong sense of country. I would also like to thank Liu Gong for his support and voting for me.

After reading a few chapters, Li Bo's character creation is natural and real, and he writes in an unhurried and unhurried way, as if he were drinking tea and chatting with an old friend. Learn from you.

I am Aya Xueqing, and I am the first person to catch up and finish reading. The arrest plot you wrote passed the review smoothly. You have a good sense of proportion.

So many chapters have been published, it's time to apply for publication!

This book, I came here after smelling it!

If the writing is smooth, no one should read it 😰

Oh, bro, don't mind if I use it as material for my own educated youth novels 😁

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I looked at it myself and thought it was pretty good, so why can't I pass 😰

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If all the logic of this book could be published in a publishing house, it would indeed be a great article. If it could be written on a forum in 2000, it would be a book that could be called a god. Now 80% of the time, only those born after 2000 like me who were washed out by textbooks from the 1980s can still read it, because all the logic has not changed.

To the readers: Due to a minor illness, I was hospitalized for treatment, so "The Struggle History of the Urban Generation" cannot be updated. Readers and friends, please forgive me! Will update as soon as my health permits. Thank you friends for your support!

Due to poor health some time ago, I was hospitalized again, so I made readers and friends have to wait, which is a shame. Please forgive me! Bow.

This novel is too long-winded to be written. It is planned to be 3 million words in length. It would be better if it could be condensed to less than 800,000 words. Because there are many irrelevant things that don't need to be written at all! Many examples that the author thinks are very illustrative of the protagonist's character traits are not typical and unconvincing at all. If there are too many examples of this kind, it will seem like a lot of nonsense, and people will have no desire to read anymore...

Literary works include: poetry, prose, novels, and dramas. Common writing methods: narration, flashback, and interlude. Common rhetorical techniques: metaphor, parallelism, personification, exaggeration, etc. Question: Why do you say that the novels you write read dull and boring, like expository essays written within the system? Answer: ① You write everything in detail, and you can't tell which parts should be written in detail and which parts only need to be mentioned in one sentence. Maybe you don't need to write at all, so your article weakens the theme. ② In the writing method, you only used the most common narration, and there are almost no common rhetorical techniques. Therefore, reading your article can help us understand some of the things that happened in that era, and it has a certain value in recording the times. However, in terms of the literariness that literary works should have, it is very lacking. I hope you can create a better next work🙂

Let me give you an opinion. When reading your novel, it has a strong smell of writing meeting minutes within the system, or of individuals writing journals to record what they did every day. The main reasons are: ① Dry language; ② Improper details; ③ The theme has not been refined. You think you are writing in prose form, but you are not. Because there are three major requirements for prose: the form is scattered and the spirit is gathered, the artistic conception is profound, and the language is beautiful. The article you wrote does not meet the minimum requirements for any of these elements. Maybe in your time, among your classmates, you were all people who could write some articles, but that was just because the people around you were too weak, so it was highlighted that you were relatively good at writing.