Comprehensive Martial Arts World Magic Supreme

Three major shortcomings of comprehensive martial arts First, the map is not well planned, and some people often appear who cannot guard their own territory and cause trouble across the country Second, big IPs such as Shaolin, Wudang and Huashan are everywhere, and they do not communicate with each other, and their strengths are uneven. Three, people or forces with different worldviews are not strengthened or weakened.

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The main character saved Linghu Chong for nothing. Yue Buqun was not raised well since he was a child. Do you think he will listen to you if you save him?

I won't include the Kunlun Trilogy, otherwise the slogan of relying on the sky to slay the dragon may be embarrassing. After all, in front of Qianlong, the artifact that destroys the country, hundreds of millions of dragons and slaying dragons are just pieces of iron. The expression of the gold system is too low-end and old-fashioned, and the martial arts in it need to be changed to a different version. For example, Beiming's Rebirth Dafa and Dongfang Bubai are enough to be praised. After all, there are too many people who have praised it and have experience to learn from.

It was said at the beginning that the Dharma of absorbing stars requires casual work, but later it was said that the Dharma of absorbing the heart is practiced using Shaolin mind method. So why do we need to do casual work?

Please cast a monthly vote to encourage me, after all, martial arts is in decline.

The writing is quite good, but the key points are not grasped well. In the world of martial arts, force is definitely the most important thing, power and so on. When you become stronger, you will naturally respond to everything. Once you practice martial arts to the level of Pangban, that's enough. Who dares to provoke you?

The Bald Cult has not been a good thing from ancient times to the present. In ancient times, it occupied land and used loan sharking. Now it is cheating and swindling, speculating and engaging in real estate. There are also those so-called sacred objects, Drums made of skin, crystals left after burning bones, flutes made of bones, and bowls made of skulls. Each one is more evil than the other, and more evil than a cult

The Shaolin Temple scene was too deliberate, just to target the protagonist.

The protagonist is very funny. He builds a gang, but gets very little money every month. Most of it is given to his subordinates. The same is true for his gang leaders. I am wondering, does the protagonist work for his subordinates or does he work for his subordinates? ? Take it as you should, do you pretend to be noble by taking so little? ? ? If a boss builds a company and earns 100 million, then he still needs to be a boss if he takes 1 million himself and distributes the rest to his subordinates. Moreover, if you feed them too much at the beginning, there may be chaos later. In the world of high martial arts, strength is king, and they are not afraid of your betrayal at all.

I feel that it is better for the protagonist to just take Beiming. It is easier to take and there are no hidden dangers. Then go to Langhuan Jade Cave and then go to bed. Li Qiu Shui takes Xiao Wuxiang. This is not as simple as taking Sucking Star, and it is a complete set. With this foundation, you can play whatever you want.

Without plug-ins, ordinary people would not be able to become the supreme demon in ancient times, unless they were the sons of destiny.

There is so much written about mixed martial arts, why are you writing about so many Japanese devils?

The strategy of plotting to seize the star-absorbing magic is pretty good, and the protagonist is not merciful either. He deserves the title for his decisiveness in killing. Except for the part about rescuing Linghu Chong that others mentioned, some people may not like it, but I personally think it is very good. If you like it, you can watch it.

The setting is good. The Star Absorbing Technique is a method, not a skill. It is a way of exercising internal energy. It absorbs other people's internal energy, categorizes it, and then calls it out as needed. It is very interesting. It can also be regarded as a small plug-in. In this way, it is no worse than the Beiming Shen Gong that has been grinded together. , I think the protagonist is from Shaolin and is very talented in external skills. He can also absorb some miscellaneous internal forces. After absorbing them, he can use them to cleanse his body immediately. This can improve his body and speed up his external skills, and then he can practice some particularly difficult external training methods, such as Dragon Elephant and King Kong.

It seems that the author has done some research. Some martial arts characters are inherited in an orderly manner and cannot be put together at all. For example, the Quanzhen Sect and the Huashan Sect. The Huashan Sect was originally founded by people from the Quanzhen Sect. It was no problem for the author to introduce the character of Gu Long.

Is there more to come or not? I need to tell you what the eunuch has to say. There is no explanation for the stock being out of stock at every turn. Is his character so unreliable?

This book is really well written, the various characters are relatively realistic and immersive, and the protagonist is also well portrayed. But at present, it seems that the protagonist is a bit like a scheming man who develops like a demon, but when written like this, it is easy to jump. Generally, when you write, you have to reduce your wits, making people feel like the supporting characters are like fools For example, Lian Xing has lived for more than 30 years. No matter how mentally retarded he is, he is much more mature than Xiao Longnu, who has lived almost alone for more than ten years. After all, he is also the leader of a big force. He must have been exposed to intrigues. If he has never eaten pork, haven't he seen pigs running away? I once saw a writer who wrote about Hou Tu, who said that Hou Tu had lived for hundreds of millions of years, was well protected, understood everything, and had the same mind as a 13- or 14-year-old girl. She still cried at every turn. It was so disgusting I also hope that the author should pay attention to the portrayal of the supporting characters. How can there be so many idiots and unreasonable people in the world? They can only see the situation clearly.

I really don't like the disgusting jokes that the protagonist believes in, and there's something wrong with him not taking care of himself neatly and having to keep a beard.

When writing about martial arts, you can't get far if you only have martial arts but no martial arts.

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