Everyone Awakens, but I Open a Spirit Pet Shop

The common problem of selling elves in other worlds should be fixed if possible. 1. Blind boxes are a good idea, but they lack originality. Perhaps a two-way selection process within a dream world would be better. 2. Priced starting at a million, with no financial system involved, this new product is designed to get people to spend the equivalent of an apartment in the city center.

I started by mentioning blind boxes, and personally, I'm not a big fan of the blind box format. But after looking at it further, it's not entirely a blind box, so I can totally accept the draw-and-draw method. Overall, it's not bad, but there's one thing that needs special mention: the illustrations for the elves. I hope the author will be more proactive; very few people will have to search for images on Baidu after only reading half of the content.

And those books that constantly explain and illustrate all flopped. You need to understand that you're telling a story, not reading a lecture.

Your Pokémon shop has turned into a Pokémon invasion story. Why would anyone buy Pokémon from your shop when there are already Pokémon in the wild? Your novel's content is self-contradictory. Readers who want a Pokémon shop story are looking for that blind box-like experience. But with Pokémon in the wild, does that blind box-like feeling still apply? The whole book becomes a mess. Wouldn't it be better to just read about a Pokémon invasion?

Is releasing it with only 30 chapters a sign of overconfidence, or is it a cash grab that leads to a quick getaway? If everyone else pre-orders it and then the author disappears, all that money will be wasted.

After skimming through a few chapters, I can only say that it suffers from a common problem: it's mostly girls buying Pokémon. Compared to the fact that they're warlike, shouldn't it be mostly boys buying them? And it's outrageous that someone would spend 1 million on a Pokémon without knowing anything about them! Would you spend 1 million on a complete stranger?

I've given up on it. The power level is a bit off, but it's not a big problem. I'll just treat it as a low-end version of a legendary Pokémon. But isn't it a bit much to have that guy named Rock create a low-end version of the Overpowered Pokémon? The Overpowered Pokémon is a gift from Arceus, representing Arceus's will. Even the three Sinnoh dragons have to give it some face. It just awakens so easily? Is Arceus really that lacking in prestige?

Forcing a show of sophistication diminishes your image and reduces your data; subtle, natural sophistication attracts more viewers.

Some people misunderstood the book reviews and thought that the sub-beasts were too powerful, but that's not the case. The protagonist, accompanied by two max-level phantom beasts, fought Marlene, but it only took a few moves in total. Marin was constantly on the defensive; it's fair to say that neither Meloetta nor Diancie used their full strength, which is exactly how I described it in the book.

This novel seems to plagiarize "I Spread Elves Around the World," with similar content.