Reincarnation Paradise: One-Man Army

Xiaosheng will add science to fantasy profiles, and will use some scientific terms to explain, such as the top immortal cultivator is a four-dimensional creature, the scientific explanation of the origin of ghouls, etc. Thank you bosses for your support. It's not easy to be a junior student. I have to code every day after work🥰🥰🥰

He can beat ten old masters 😂😂😂, this Internet cafe guy is also amazing

As proof, this book must be a eunuch

This... I have worked really hard😫😫😫, the latest chapter - the technological version of the Immortal Killing Formation... Please accept it.

I thought I was a fan of Samsara Paradise

Why should one person be ranked fifth in the cycle of reincarnation?

But the protagonist's force is the Umbrella Company, and the tyrant route appears in the later chapter of the Reborn, which always feels like the one from Resident Evil.

It looked okay at first, but the author sewed too much. Not that it was bad, but the sewing was too fast, and the movements of all parties involved in the conflict were too chaotic.

The author gives you a piece of advice. If your writing is not good, don't write too much content if you can't grasp it. Don't make the background so big. Many of the forces, characters, emergencies, etc. You describe seem to appear out of nowhere. There is no connection at all. It gives the impression that there is no outline. You write whatever comes to mind. After you finish writing, you can find a way to connect the characters with the previous content. It is too abrupt and uncomfortable to see.

It's a bit too messy, with a lot of messy things stitched in. Can the author really control it?