Showing Off My Talents on Livestream, I Catch the Police's Attention

After reading a few chapters, I suddenly wondered if the gene lock could also be unlocked.

My thoughts flow like a spring every day, and I'm so excited I can't sleep at night. The outline is already 800,000 words long; all I can say is that the major parts are at the end. If you can, please read it during the new book's release period to support this newbie! Mwah~

The author could consider skill levels, such as beginner, elementary, intermediate, advanced, master, and top-level. Don't suddenly introduce a god-level skill; that would be overwhelming.

After reading two chapters, I realize there's a lot of potential to be explored in lock picking skills. Modern car locks have electronically matched chips, so they can't be opened with a needle. Ignoring this limitation, let's think outside the box: if electronic locks can be opened, then firewalls on the internet should also be able to be opened.

There's an unchanging rule in these kinds of wish-fulfillment novels: you need to humiliate those who are more powerful than you. Power can refer to many things, such as physical strength, wealth, status, and knowledge. But as the protagonist grows, if you start by beating up thugs, you can't be beating up thugs after more than 100 chapters, right? It's fine if your power doesn't improve.

The beginning was good, but the later part completely deviated from the main theme, became fragmented, and I couldn't understand what happened. The plot was novel, but if the writing continues in this superficial way, the book is bound to flop sooner or later.

The author must have been to jail; his writing style suggests he has had that experience.

The beginning was quite good, with a tightly woven plot full of twists and turns and unexpected events, but the later parts felt like a collection of fragmented stories from a forum, and it became less and less interesting as you read on.

The writing is good now, but how will it develop later? The plot is too rushed right now; it's only forty-something chapters, and so many things have already happened! The daily life parts are too rushed, it's too tense! The author's writing style and plot are good, it's a top-tier author on Qidian! But it's not even published yet and I'm already experiencing some reader fatigue! Too many climaxes every now and then, it's easy to die from overexertion! Keep it up, author!

It's too disjointed; one story hasn't finished before another begins.