One Piece: Starting with the Demon King of Song

The very first chapter mentioned that the protagonist was mentally unstable, which piqued my curiosity, so I read a few more chapters. However, as I continued reading, I realized that this type of story would be difficult for the average reader to accept. The protagonist is simply pure wit.

When I saw Chapter 137's plan for the three admirals to jointly capture the protagonist, I was completely baffled. If the three admirals could act together, how could there be any Yonko (Emperors)? Forget about the family!

I've only read the first few chapters, and the protagonist is spouting a lot of nonsensical and strange things. He doesn't interact with anyone, and there's no description of his inner thoughts; he's just talking to himself, which makes him seem like he has mental problems.

I've read half of it. The subject matter is good, but the protagonist is too stupid. I don't know if the author is emphasizing stupidity or madness. So far, the protagonist is just a giant baby except for his combat power. He has to rely on Uta for everything. I suggest that the narrative protagonist of this book be Uta.

Author: What you wrote is not (Uta) at all. Although Uta is a bit arrogant, she is kind-hearted and has never looked down on anyone. Anyone who has read Red-Haired Diva would not think that what you wrote is Uta. Also, I don't know why you added Robin's mother. One archaeologist is enough. What's the point of having two? Doctor Garo is the best. Why add a centenarian? Couldn't you choose a crew member?

Just by following Luffy's path, you can become the Pirate King? Please, author, use your brain! You might as well read the original manga. Please, author, create some original content, some fresh island adventures, okay?

To be honest, I've suddenly started to like this male protagonist a bit; maybe I'm just getting used to him. This guy may be a bit dim-witted, but he has a conscience, isn't lecherous, and is loyal. Most importantly, he's differentiated himself.

Every time it's an instant death, maybe there's no time to feel pain, it's not like they're being tortured, why are they going crazy? If they're going to go crazy, at least be normal, why are they acting so stupid, they've just gone completely idiotic, is the protagonist supposed to be a dull, drooling, and silly grinner who just smiles at everyone they see?

The author didn't quite manage the protagonist's madness to the right degree; sometimes he became like a second Whitebeard, and at other times it felt like it would have been better to kick him out and replace him with a more suitable one to be with Uta. Because the author didn't quite control the protagonist's feelings for Uta, sometimes it felt like the protagonist liked Uta simply because he lacked the mental capacity for it; this love was just awful.

The beginning was alright, but the later plot became very boring. The protagonist was just a total idiot the whole time, and honestly, there was nothing interesting about him. Apart from fighting, he had no presence whatsoever, and the later parts weren't worth the money to subscribe to.