One Piece: Starting with the Demon King of Song

In the first chapter, I saw the author saying that the protagonist was mentally ill. I was curious and read a few more chapters. But as I continued reading, I felt that it was really difficult for ordinary readers to accept this type of story. Because the main character is pure wisdom. Generally speaking of protagonists with mental problems, DC Joker is the most classic, that is, there is a set of logic of his own under the crazy surface. Many classic characters have references, such as some mentally ill protagonists, Zhu Jue and Feng Bujue. Or he acts very extreme, feels stimulated, is yandere-loving, and various facial expressions such as classic Malick, Crazy Gambling, and Fire Fist are all contributions of this type of character. Although it is extreme, it is understandable. The protagonist of this book takes a different approach. This mental problem actually refers to mental retardation! That is, people who have no ability to think. The kind who can compete with Whitebeard II to become the leader of the Pirate King's Retarded Bar. It feels like the characters are not established at all. Maybe the author thinks this kind of protagonist is too cool, or there is some design in the plot, but I just think this setting is idiotic, and the protagonist is even more idiotic. I can only say that I really can't understand it.

When I saw in Chapter 137 that the three generals were planning to go out together to capture the protagonist, I had a black question mark on my face. If the three generals could go out together, why would there be four emperors? I don't want it.

I just read the first few chapters, and the protagonist said too many weird things. He doesn't communicate with others and doesn't describe his inner activities. He just talks to himself. It looks like he has a mental problem.

Halfway through the book, the subject matter is good, but the protagonist is too stupid. I don't know if the author is more stupid or crazy. The protagonist is currently a giant baby except for his combat power. Everything depends on Uta. So this book recommends that the narrative protagonist be given to Uta. After all, relying on a giant baby with powerful combat power to become the king of the world is not bad. But if you want to highlight the madness, let the protagonist have his own thinking. Don't write about a giant baby. I think many of the people who come to watch it are for the female protagonist. A stupid protagonist is boring. If you write it, I suggest you stick to the yandere side. Uta is the protagonist's only redeeming character. You can write the protagonist's mental illness as a character flaw and get closer to the yandere side. There are many types of yandere that can be written, and the way to write yandere is very popular in both male and female videos.

Author: What you wrote is not at all (Uta). Although Uta is a little arrogant, he is very kind at heart and has never looked down on anyone. Anyone who has watched the red-haired singer will not think that you are writing about Uta. Also, I don't know why you added Robin's mother. One archaeologist is enough. What's the point of two? Doctor Jarrow is the best, but a centenarian is included? Can't the crew choose?

Can you become the Pirate King by following the path that Luffy has walked? Please be patient, author! If you write like this, you might as well read the original work and ask the author to come up with something original and create some fresh island adventures, okay?

By the way, I suddenly like this male protagonist a little bit, maybe it's because I like him. Although this guy is mentally retarded, he has a conscience, is not lewd, and is loyal. The most important thing is that it has made a difference. I no longer have any interest in those unfaithful protagonists who are almost the author himself, looking for women everywhere, with crazy soaring combat power, invincible, having fun everywhere, and killing and killing. Doesn't anyone find this kind of thing boring?

Every time he dies instantaneously, he may not even have time to feel pain. Isn't this crazy if he is not tortured? It's normal to be crazy, but you're so silly and so silly. Isn't this just silly? Is the protagonist a smooth, dull, drooling, giggling persona?

The protagonist's madness is not well grasped. Sometimes he becomes Whitebeard II. Sometimes it feels like it would be better to kick the protagonist and replace him with a suitable protagonist to be with Uta. The protagonist's feelings for Uta are not well grasped by the author. Sometimes it makes people feel that the protagonist likes Uta because he does not have enough brain capacity. This love is too bad.

It's good at the beginning, but the story behind it is boring. The protagonist has always been a rz. There is really nothing to see. Apart from fighting, he has no sense of existence. It is not worth spending money to order later.