The Original Version of Chuan Shu: the Tao Ancestor Cultivates the Ruthless Tao

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The author should stop writing, or post it after half of it has been written. I feel pain for the author when writing this. It's so difficult, more tiring than squeezing out toothpaste. The writing is good and well-conceived, but it's just like I'm scrambling to write which part is which, and I feel like I'm fighting in a martial arts competition. . . It is estimated that the author himself has been tortured, so he might as well stop and sort it out. . . At least the part about the two fairies and goblins was written quietly, and the rest will be. . .

Come on please more updates

I feel that the author's writing is very confusing. Forgive me for my lack of skill. The plot is very confusing starting from the fantasy world. Suddenly a bunch of people appeared who had no previous foreshadowing, and then the past and present lives of these people were played out there. Another point is that before the fantasy, I felt that the plot deviated from the introduction. I felt that the heroine's setting was different from the introduction. It was not clear from the introduction that the heroine liked the hero. It was only seen that the heroine would be unlucky if she left the hero, so she had to repay the hero's favor. She thought about leaving the hero after changing her fate. Then the author went off-track in writing. After only a few chapters, the heroine fell in love with the hero. The character development was too fast. There is also a heroine who can see monsters, but no one else, including the hero, can. And the heroine doesn't feel that she has any cheats or special abilities. As for the story about traveling through a book, I first thought it was traveling through the original work, and then I thought it was traveling through a fan fiction. I originally thought that the plot of the original work and the fan fiction would last for a long time, but in the end, it collapsed in a short while. Good guy, this is not traveling through the book. The memory of the heroine has been tampered with. I wonder if the author is going against the routine, but going against the routine has to be both unexpected and reasonable. If it goes against your own cognition everywhere, it will be too uncomfortable to watch. Actually, this is not the first time I have come across this type of article. It seems like a mess, but I don't want to "give in", but I still want to sort it out.