Dad, Please Try Harder

How should I put it? The writing style of authors like this novel is generally very good, but maybe because of the influence of scar literature back then, the things written always have a literary youth flavor. The writing is very good, but it always makes people feel uncomfortable.

Nowadays, novels of this type are all based on the pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine of 10 years ago. This is not good. What do the so-called authors think? Do you have any recommendations that are not so vicious?

It's poisonous. I'm already in college. The protagonist adds a senior sister's WeChat account and is threatened by school gangsters to delete it? Something

Recognize a few more dads and turn on the doubling mode

Bu has been wandering for half his life, and he only regrets that he has never met his master. If he never abandons him, he is willing to worship him as his adoptive father

Let's put it this way, meet a few more godfathers😸

I spent five thousand yuan to buy a box of scratch-off tickets and give them to my dad. Dad gave out two thousand yuan, and he cheated and got twenty thousand yuan. Net profit of fifteen thousand.

Your father got three thousand, and you have thirty thousand. Then if you give this thirty thousand to your father, wouldn't you just get three hundred thousand, and you can go to heaven with your left foot and your right foot?

... There is an inexplicable hidden power, and there is a woman who is lonely and hooks up with her. I have written so much about it, and it has reached the point where I am lonely and hooking up. The description of this woman is very dramatic, and I am ready to accept it based on the way of writing... I am not afraid of pig's feet rotting my crotch.

Hey hey hey, was that post that I misunderstood as Dad trying harder, was deleted by the angry author?

Ding, it was detected that the host's father had kidney failure. Now the system will give you a tenfold cashback, and the host has a boy with no kidneys.

The seventh chapter slipped away. You can read it if you write a love story or a rich man's story. If you write about the second generation of rich people, you can't read it if it's black and seductive and can show off and slap you in the face. Renaissance

Full subscription. In the past ten chapters, all the characters have lacked IQ. The population base of China is here. If it is really compared to the so-called genius boy, China will only be many times more than the one in the book. It will make China unable to change without the protagonist, a young master. Again, the book says it's a competition? Can I call wherever I am scheduled? The right to speak is not about what others say and what we do. They cannot say these things to us from a position of strength. We set the rules and we control the direction. The world may not have a grandmaster of the protagonist's age, but the population base is here. According to the world in the book, the masters in the prime of life and old age will only be n times as many as in the book. It is not the turn of a little kid to bear everything all the time. Are you really a parent with a small fist? Finally, since everyone can understand the purpose of the descendants of war criminals, if other masters in the country know about it, they must not kill him first. Don't think that the parents are too stupid or too kind. Taking a step back, if you continue, why do you have to recuperate for three to five years after being punched? Both of them are the same. According to this, all martial arts practitioners should stop playing and recuperate every day. Everyone seems to have no brains or logic.

The beginning is poisonous, the protagonist just confessed his love and was rejected. No one had ever agreed. How could there be such an eternal and everlasting alliance? There was a love affair between him and that goddess. The author wrote it as if the protagonist had been with that goddess for a long time and then got cheated on. Nothing that ever existed. Purely sentimental. How can you talk about love and material things?

I just started to see it. Dad - please try harder. Can I still be saved?

The author worked very hard to avoid many poisonous points and wanted to write new ideas. However, he recreated the ancient century 😅 with just a swipe of his pen. I felt that the previous part was very good. But it started to go wrong when he found the little gangster. The hidden identity of the old man was solved and the world of the architecture was revealed. I have a sense of isolation, a bit like a novel that was published in the city for half a year. I was a reporter, and then my mother-in-law made it difficult for me with 100,000 words because I saved my mother-in-law and touched my butt. It is a common problem of old authors to promote the growth of characters through external events.

Is this Lin Xiaohuang the heroine? If so, it's quite disgusting. It starts with a one-night stand with her. Otherwise, why would you write so many scenes? There is a childhood sweetheart, a senior sister, and a chess friend. Which one is not good to write about?

Ding~ It is detected that the host's father has a severe cold, and the tenfold reward has been distributed (late stage lung cancer)

I almost watched "Dad, Please Try Harder"...

Shit-flavored chocolate, chocolate-flavored💩? ? ? It's good to write about daily life. I don't know why I put those old routines in it. It's very uncomfortable to watch. It's both fragrant and smelly, and it's particularly entertaining It's written in a book list, and it fits my opinion quite well. ，，，，，，，，，，， The female character currently appearing: a former secret crush who is very protective and is only touched by the rich second generation. She goes to the same school as the protagonist. She is expected to become outstanding and be chased after her. The routine is a bit old, and Qingmei Daily wrote it very well but had to put old routines into it. The old man who plays chess on the classic street is a boss. The rich second generation sees the protagonist unhappy and asks a few gangsters to come over to teach him a lesson. The boss helps the protagonist out. He plays chess on the street and takes a photo. A few of them come over and ask to format their mobile phones. The protagonist is unhappy and beats up some of them. The female character currently appearing: a former secret crush who is very protective and is only touched by the rich second generation. She goes to the same school as the protagonist. She is expected to become outstanding and be chased after her.

The routines are so old that I can't stand them anymore. For example, the plot of blocking people is replaced by the chess old man who is not afraid of trouble and beats the three gangsters to death. Would you like to give it a try? It's very reasonable in a place where KFC has a shocking amount of people. Old men and women are too careless. What kind of bullshit is this? What kind of retired veteran cadre? This plot was like ten years ago. . Even if the old man is a retired cadre, why is it such a coincidence?

It's normal for the protagonist to open his own company and hire his father, right? It's okay to give him a bonus every day, and it's understandable to arrange to learn some skills every month, right?

Just this title, if it were my dad who would only drink and complain and curse, how could it be doubled?

The protagonist's name really needs to be chosen well. I don't know if anyone has the right to withdraw money in reality. But I really hate this name

The writing has collapsed, so I suggest you finish it hastily.

It is recommended to arrange a small climax and then finish it as soon as possible

Song Jiang in Xunyanglou wrote an anti-poem, but Huang Wenbing took advantage of it and wanted to arrest him and hold him accountable. "Don't worry, brother, Wu Yongnai and I have been friends for many years. His name is Zhiduoxing, and I am the King of Ideas. We have a good relationship for a while. As long as I use a little trick, I can help my brother out of trouble!" Dai Zong laughed. "What's the plan?" "Brother can mess up his hair, splash his urine on the ground, pour it in, and pretend to be a wind demon." "High!" One day later. Song Jiang was in the lobby of the government office. One Buddha was born after being beaten, and the other two Buddhas passed into nirvana. Their skin was torn and their flesh was dripping with blood. Unable to fight, he had no choice but to take action and was taken to death row, waiting to be executed. Dai Zong went straight to Liangshan for help. "Don't worry, dear brother, as long as I use a little trick, I can help Brother Song Jiang get out of trouble!" Wu Yong laughed. "What's the plan?" "Write a false reply. When the wise brother goes back, he will say that the Grand Master will send Song Jiang to Tokyo, and we will be robbed nearby." "Wonderful." Three days later. Dai Zong was tied up and beaten until his skin and flesh were torn, and blood flowed out. He really couldn't stand the torture, so he had no choice but to surrender. He was put in a big yoke and thrown into prison. "Don't worry, brother, I have a plan to keep me waiting for a few days." In prison, Dai Zong comforted Song Jiangdao. "The plan is out?" "I have a good friend Huang Kongmu..." Six days later. Song Jiang and Dai Zong had plaques tied on their necks, glue was applied to their hair, and a red silk paper flower was inserted into their heads. Having a long break and saying goodbye to wine. "Don't worry, brother, I have another plan..." "Brother, I want to be quiet, you'd better stop talking."

It's very well written, why don't you write it again?

The writing is immature. After reading the first few chapters, I found that there are a few things that are not in line with ordinary life situations. The subject matter of the novel is okay, but it is not well written.

It's quite rubbish and I don't recommend reading it. The routine from 15 years ago. It's so embarrassing to watch