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After reading the introduction, I feel that the author basically doesn't understand football. Milan has always been the abbreviation of AC Milan, and the abbreviation of Inter Milan has always been Inter Milan.
This is an unexciting competitive novel. There is a plug-in that only appears twice in Chapter 40. If this is the case, why does it appear?
Now I can't read Qidianwen.
This plug-in is written with no sense of existence. Upgraded, and then, the pig's trotters didn't see a big increase in strength. This book can be deleted.
Usually when I encounter a book that I don't like, I just write it off. Your book made me feel too uncomfortable to read it. It's a yes if I don't want to complain about it. Not to mention that the pace of online writing at Qidian is accelerating now, and it doesn't matter if it's slower. But you have a system and slowly torture readers. I'm convinced.
If you don't have a system to practice by yourself, your overall early strength performance will be almost passable. With a system, you can't feel comfortable after playing in the second division for half a season, so you directly return to Milan. If you are making wool, then the hanging system is useful.
I'm so cowardly. It would be better if your football writing was more domineering. I have no appetite for this feeling. I have a system. Adriano is still the king. Not to mention punching AC Milan and kicking Inter Milan in the beginning, but the sense of presence must be increased.
It's hard for the author to write something without any explosive or exciting points.
A mere passer-by, this Adriano, does he act like this? Ability to play Serie B is so rubbish
I've read dozens of chapters, but I don't see the use of this hook.
It feels like it was written by AI, and the plot is inconsistent and bland.
The writing is unclear, so I didn't find anything refreshing after reading it. It was bland and had no flavor at all.
After raising it for so long, there are only a few chapters.
There are so many typos that I can't bear to look at them. In many places, the preface does not match the postscript. There is also a problem in writing the protagonist's growth process. In layman's terms, it only sheds sweat but lacks description of the harvest moment. There is a problem with the rhythm. This is the writing method of a master. I need to practice my writing skills, and there are too many paper figures. There have been many characters, but the images are too thin.
There are too many typos... It kind of affects reading
This author takes football salary for granted and has no idea at all. Especially the paragraph about signing the contract is completely nonsense. The most important thing is that there is no term limit.
Any additional kicking method The first-generation football king Pele Hand of God Maradona Cruyff turned Cruyff Pendulum pass Ronaldo Ox tail Stadium wizard Ronaldo Flying from the sky Marseille slalom Zidane Peter Pan Robben Non-stop shooting Van Persie Iconic moves and personal style flourish What will you watch in 2013? Who is the best heir? Cristiano Ronaldo and Messi are the ultimate twins? Sorry, I played the ball very well. Do you have any iconic tags? What am I looking at? Don't tell me about the team, this or that. I'm reading novels, not literary works. When reading novels, don't look at the protagonists and look at the supporting characters? Do you want to watch the protagonist eat other people's shit? I'm really impressed. Since we're going to travel through time or be reborn, why can't we let the protagonist poop this shit first? Make others unhappy? Do you have to eat what others have done?
Isn't the title of the book Blue Jacket? Why did you go to Red and Black?
It's too dry and not very readable.