This Is Actually the Purpose of Training Junior Junior Sisters! ! ?

Although there is a high probability that no one will read this book... But let's set up a floor, just in case there is, haha! If you pass by, please leave a message and it will be added to the book later. Of course the name should be as reliable as possible! The one who comes first will definitely live longer, hehe ... Write down roughly his name, occupation, hobbies, and personality traits For example: Xiao Yan, the son of the president of the chamber of commerce, is good at business, straight man, something like this.

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After watching it, I didn't feel happy. The protagonist is semi-invincible but his performance is a bit useless. I don't know how the supporting actress will be dealt with in the future. It gives me the feeling that all the supporting actresses who like the protagonist are because of reality and family reasons... And the junior sister... In short... A bit ntr

It is necessary to highlight the key points, write one female character in the east, and another female character in the west. All of them become heroines. I don't know whether it is a single heroine or a harem. The first three chapters are okay, but the rest is too scattered.

After thinking about it, I'm ready to finish it... According to the original plan, it's about a third of the plot line now, but my pigeon mentality has collapsed, so I can only conceive and finish the plot. It was originally written in a mess... There is no main line to speak of, but at least there must be a finale, hahaha

Let me tell you, the girls here are very ignorant, basically not sensible. Nowadays, girls who are annoying and don't know what is good are no longer popular. They feel very stupid. What is popular in novels now is that girls chase boys, and girls are very sensible, not like those tsundere young ladies from decades ago, who are like 258.

Started to manually raise little junior sisters, I wonder if anyone has done this, hahaha

I just read two chapters and got some insights. One is to try not to use unnecessary and useless ancient texts and poems. It will not highlight the character image and may even conflict with the character design. Moreover, it will look awkward if the writing is not strong enough. Secondly, I personally find the plot strange. Those who are famous in the fairy list have either been picked by others long ago, or they feel that no one is worthy of them. If they have the strength and are not a flower vase, it is difficult for them to go on a blind date without any special reason, and there is no other reason to fall in love with the male protagonist at a glance based on his face. It is quite strange. Even if the proud daughter of heaven is forced, she will marry to seek family benefits. What is the purpose of going on a blind date? . The third is some wording. When the maid came, she said, "I saw a male god in white walking in." The description of this male god made me very surprised. If you want to describe the handsomeness of the male protagonist, you don't need to use such a strange description. The scene feels awkward even thinking about it, and the writing style is a bit immature. Nowadays, even simple essays are not so easy to write. Only represents my personal opinion. I hope the author can write better and better.

The new book is now being prepared... However, my level is too poor, and I dare not let the audience who have read my book look forward to it, hahaha If nothing unexpected happens, the new book will most likely be about immortals... But it will not be a serious cultivation of immortals... I hope that the next book can have some success in the early stage... Otherwise, I really can't bear it, and it will be harmful.

I probably took a quick look, is the protagonist YW? Modern cultivators still want to hold a sword for life, right? The villains and demon cultivators all know how to play the female protagonist, but the male protagonist does not. Moreover, many plots are also very abrupt, with a female protagonist in one place and a female protagonist in the other, but the male protagonist does not dare to have any ideas. It is a bit like a eunuch male protagonist who must have a eunuch protagonist.

Is it just because it's relatively simple? ! Many people write their writing in a very messy way. One is in regular script and the other is in cursive script.

It's not ugly, it's just... So bland (? I can't think of any other adjectives Come on, author. I feel that the emotional writing is a bit playful, like playing house. But the author himself knows it, so I can only wish the author an early breakthrough.

It's too bland, there is no clear main line, and there is no order in everything. The daily writing is not exciting enough, like a pond of stagnant water.

Cute

I think it's better to save time.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The writing feels a bit random. Does the author have an outline?

After reading the beginning, I felt like I was writing a funny cross talk

Author, please don't let the ending suck. Just write a better ending. Otherwise, it will be too disgusting.