Versatile Mage: I Become Stronger by Killing Demons

The beginning of this book is okay The emotional scenes after this feel a bit awkward. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, try not to write them in the early stage. You can add a little more interaction with Tang Yue appropriately, and don't fall in love with the protagonist directly later. Tang Yue is almost in her 20s and good-looking. I don't believe she doesn't have a suitor. She would fall in love with someone who is more than five years younger than her. In the original book, she fell in love with Mo Fan only after they had been together for several years and the subsequent Xishui Town incident. Here, I fell in love with the protagonist, who is my third uncle, and had a spiritual influence on the protagonist. After that, the protagonist disappeared for a while before I had some different feelings for the protagonist. I feel that the writing was a bit hasty There are also some problems in the magic system 1. About the primary summons The summoning system only has one dimensional summoning magic. The author directly added a contract summoning, and then wrote a dimensional summoning. I was a bit speechless. Contract summoning seems to suppress the level of the summoned beast. You are a basic level warrior, which is a bit loose 2. Regarding wood magic, what is the author's positioning on it? Is it the author's original magic system, or is it a special magic system given to the protagonist by the system? The system provides a skill list, which is too complicated. There are strangulation for attack, palm senjutsu for recovery, wood escape ninjutsu for defense, and spiritual illusion. You can tell me that this is the entire Naruto ninjutsu. Forget it 3. Regarding the magic skills rewarded by treasure chests, some are too useless. If you use these skills at elementary or intermediate levels, if someone knows about them, problems will arise. After reaching high levels and having strong control, these skills are of little use! You only have so much mana. Will releasing these special magics reduce your mana consumption or something? There are also many magics for improving the soul among full-time mages. These are all magics in the normal magic system. What do your special magics belong to? Do you need to use star particles to connect them, or do you not need to connect them. Connecting with stars is ancient magic. If you don't connect with stars, it's a heresy if you haven't reached a high level 4. Regarding spiritual seeds, spiritual seeds can only be absorbed at the intermediate level, but cannot be absorbed at the elementary level. Only natural spiritual seeds can have spiritual seeds at the elementary level 5. Regarding the props rewarded by the system treasure chest, you can reward some magic tools, magic weapons, demon eggs, etc., But if you directly collect a few Douluo World 100,000-year-old soul bones and the like, it feels a bit not good, and the upper limit does not feel high. It is not as good as a whole book of physical training techniques and the like. And the herbs you prepared are too functional, right? It is directly immune to poison and curse magic, and its soul bones are immune to psychic magic. This makes it completely invincible. The heavenly cauldron that breaks the world, and the pharmacopoeia of the fantasy world. As soon as these things come out, do you immediately start making elixirs? It's too complicated, and the items written are a bit too high This book is a bit similar to another book I read, Crazy Card Drawing in Versatile Mage, both of which are very complicated Summary: The emotional scene feels a bit inexplicable, the magic system is still a little flawed, you should also pay attention to the absorption of spiritual seeds and the level of magic equipment use, and the treasure chest rewards are too complicated and a bit too high! ! !

If the author doesn't know how to write, don't write it randomly. Some of the settings in the original work are not clear, so I just write it here. The summoning system is not silver-white, and you can't contract summoned beasts at the elementary level. You have to be at the intermediate level to make a contract. Also, if you are only at the elementary level, the summoned beast will be at the war general level. Your cultivation level will suppress the level of the summoned beast. You can write it this way. Can't you just say it's a reward from the system or a natural talent? The author is just writing randomly

According to feedback from most book friends, there are many criticisms of the protagonist's wood type. Therefore, starting from Chapter 132, the wood type is changed to the plant type. We apologize for the inconvenience caused to everyone! In the original work, there are also spiritual seeds in the plant department, so the spiritual seeds remain unchanged. If there are any other problems, the author will consider them at his discretion and make corrections. Everyone is welcome to give your valuable opinions! Thanks! (Don't curse😹)

Stop scolding! Stop scolding! The author has doubted life now, and the outline is a bit messy now. Indeed, some of the things written by the author may not conform to the logic of the original work, but I have read it carefully and pondered it carefully, and now I don't know how to proceed. The most common thing everyone mentioned is that warlord-level contracted beasts and summoned beasts cannot fight against slave-level beasts. I have explained it all! In order to highlight the role of the light of evolution, I have not dared to read book reviews for the past two days, and I don't know how to explain it to everyone. This is the first book written by the author. You can write down the shortcomings. The author really considered it seriously, but please don't scold me. Thank you!

Let's make a complaint, the first time you get a reward from jungle, you kill so many people and it's more than a million? Not to mention so many slaves, how many money would it cost to kill all the generals? Where is the spirit? A few million each, okay? Then I started to open Kai grinding tools after getting injured while fighting monsters... I also accepted it Finally, I got spiritual seeds at the first level... I got contracted beasts at the first level, and there was also a contract space, you set it all yourself. Still a shit fan. In the end, I was single in my 40s in two lives. After time travel, I started to impose emotional drama, right?

Isn't this the kind of person who just watched a few seasons of anime and then came to write a fanfic?

Um, why does it feel like this protagonist has been weakened by 80%? A battle general with pure blood should be able to sweep away the mid-level mage.

Essences can be sold for money and strengthen stars. Why are you still crying when there are so many essences in front of you 😳

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them.

Damn it, if you can't write, don't write.

There is a Contract Summoning at the beginning level, so awesome, the author

Mu Ningxue, My Wife as a Full-time Mage, has a single female protagonist. It's very interesting and has a great emotional line.

If the heroine is Mu Ningxue, then you don't have to watch it.

Recently, I found that people have a lot of opinions on the protagonist's emotional issues. It may be because the author is single and is not very good at writing emotional lines. I will learn more about how other authors write in the future. The author is working hard to improve himself! Please forgive me! Lots of support!

It's best if there is no heroine, emotions are useless in front of the system 🤓

The beginning is disgusting and disgusting🤢people

I have a question. I hope some readers can reply to me. It doesn't matter if you don't reply. It's purely a personal curiosity. Who is stronger, Ichigo Kurosaki in Bleach or Mo Fan, a full-time mage? Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.