A Blessed Land for All: I Can Add Some Buildings

Evaluation: 1: The protagonist's intelligence is too low, and the dialogue is like a loser, looking for scolding 2: The author's writing style is really not good, and he writes some unimportant things. It can be seen that the outline is not done well, and there should be no planning. Self-improvement cannot be touched at all. This is not used to introduce the background. The background is told through the plot to make it attractive. It's very tiring to watch. 3: There is still no outline, the characters have few characteristics, not to mention each character has outstanding personality, and the author's writing style is not outstanding either. Just very ordinary. 4: I have only read 10 chapters. If there is something wrong, it's okay. If you don't like it, you just don't like it. It's true, but the article is not.

Seeing now, the writing is not good enough, the plot is not enough, and I kind of want to give up. Keep it for a while

It's too easy. The flow of luck is not the flow of luck. The protagonist cannot always rely on luck to become stronger easily. After entering a first-level star gate, a city with a population of tens of thousands and Xu, Chu, Guojia, and their strength are still the same as blowing. Suddenly they are on the 9th level. To cultivate Taoist soldiers, 2,500 Taoist soldiers can be trained by taking a bath in the Taoist pool. In the trial of the King's Tower, I got first place inexplicably. Why does the protagonist have no talent? Nothing but golden fingers

I feel like I'm splitting my hair. I've been writing about war. If I want to read about war, why don't I read about history? What I want to read is exploring the world, obtaining harvests, various architectural treasures, etc. Now it is completely a war novel.

The level of the world is a bit low. Everyone seems to be the master of the blessed land of the small world. The setting names look quite advanced. However, the martial arts value is actually at the martial arts level, and it is still low martial arts. Even if it is extraordinary, I feel that it is not much higher. At most, it is equivalent to the Grand Master in other martial arts novel worlds, and cannot reach the level of land gods. As for the plot, this copy is now, and the protagonist can advance. Ten is purely because the author has infinitely lowered the others. The protagonist's school is nothing. To be honest, I really don't think he deserves to be in the top ten based on that hook. Even if this copy is based on personal strength, I don't think he deserves to be in the hundred. The effect of your trick is basically on the blessed land, and it also has an effect on the protagonist himself, but it cannot be so big. I can only say that your writing skills are poor and cannot reach the point where the protagonist can receive rewards normally.

I was talking about how difficult it is to be extraordinary, but in the end, if you go into a tower with 10,000 Golden Crow Guards and experience it, you will immediately become extraordinary. If you buy it in large quantities, it is

Your writing is as plain as water and you dare to pay 16 coins, you are awesome.

I think the people of the Three Kingdoms period were strong not only because of themselves, but also because of their experiences.

The writing is so tender, it always feels like playing house, and even old bookworms may not be able to read it. . . The author should try to improve himself

The subject matter is really better than others. But your cultivation system is written in terms of whether it is medium or small, west or west, martial or martial, immortal or immortal. It's really uncomfortable to watch

Generally... It's very strange A lord who can create a world of immortals and gods by himself actually practices low martial arts and then absorbs spiritual energy. It's outrageous According to logic, the low martial arts should be used by Tao soldiers, and the immortal arts should be used by oneself.

The same running account, studio?

The blessed land is the characteristic of the lotus. What is written about giving up the characteristic? Wouldn't it be better to plant a Chaos Green Lotus? If the lotus flower is not properly cultivated, copies will always be opened.

Please introduce more about Blessed Land. The title of the book is "Lord's Story". Why is it that the main character is the one doing it? What's the point of Dao soldiers?

Is Wudang Nine Yang Kung an advanced technique? What kind of floor tiles and Quanzhen Xinfa are inferior to Wudang Nine Yang Kung in terms of combat power? You come from the Nine-Yang Manual and I come from the Xiantian Gong. You, a Nine-Yang Manual, have no face in front of the Xiantian Kung.

First, I just write whatever comes to my mind Second, as a civilian, I don't know a lot of knowledge and don't learn anything Third, I have ten star tokens in my hand but I only used two of them, and I didn't use the rest. I started to expand my territory, without turning my resources into strength at all Fourth, after seeing the latest chapter, everyone has forcibly reduced their intelligence and will only be reckless.

I don't want to read it, it's boring. The protagonist is too smooth, and there is no decent battle at all, especially the plot of the King's Tower, which is anticlimactic. Also, since the protagonist wants to establish a Qi Luck Dynasty, can the name of the subordinate organization be more formal? Either you use Liubu directly, or you directly copy the names of modern institutions. What do you call Jiangxinbu, Xianji Building, Chuangming Building, etc. Listen for yourself. Is this the name of an institution that a dynasty should have? This is obviously the name of an institution that only belongs to social organizations or sects.

The characteristic is lotus. As a result, most exotic treasures have nothing to do with lotus, and they don't specifically collect lotus seeds and just wait for them to be delivered to your door.

There are two settings and three settings, various eating settings, and naming of various things. There is really no advancement in the plot and no big Poland. Naming various things is called a passion.

Why doesn't the protagonist go to the Stargate World to recruit talents? While talking about the lack of talent, they don't look for it at the same time. With the protagonist's strength, opening a first-level world can be harvested in a day or two, right? At worst, you can just open the door and come out. As for strength, with the current resources, we can catch up soon. What's more, someone like Wenchen doesn't need much strength.

Understand? ? ?

Readers who are so handsome will surely follow it, right?

Collection [Exotic Treasures] [All Races] [Blessed Lands] All kinds of strange and exotic treasures, mysterious races of all races, and various blessed lands can be left in this post. The format is as follows Name: Introduction:

A eunuch? The author committed suicide? No more updates?

I feel that the scene is not grand enough. The struggle for racial fate feels the same as the fight between five villages.

Why bother cultivating a large number of various Tao soldiers when there are already plug-ins? Wouldn't it be better to have a few Tao soldiers with distinctive characteristics and target them at the advanced level? In the previous article, the Gao family was cheated in Swordsman. In the following article, you mentioned that you are the only one who can meet familiar historical and legendary figures? The previous article asked someone for 100 level 9 exotic treasures, and the following article will make some splash. The author can use various laborious settings and far-fetched arrangements to obtain resources. Have you considered using plug-ins to upgrade the exotic treasures, and then unbundling and selling the exotic treasures? Use the obtained resources to develop your strength. As your strength increases, you can gain more luck points and continue to upgrade the exotic treasures. Isn't this a complete development line? And some of the settings are confusing and conflicting, and it doesn't look like it was written by one person.

The writing is poor and the writing is fluent. I suggest the author to read some literary masterpieces instead of just the novels from Qidian. Most online novels are not very well written. They are mainly for novelty, but they also need to be well-written to become popular.

The thirty-meter city wall became more than ten meters after the upgrade. Did the author make a mistake? It should be tens of meters.

The writing style is really average, and the various forced halo-eating settings are hilarious to death.

It is necessary to develop both blessed land and territory. It is too chaotic. It is not as good as being invincible locally. I mainly write about star gates.