My Countryside Could Never Be Like This

Author, can the main characters at least farm in a normal way? Use farmyard manure on the fruit trees if necessary, maybe mix it with spring water from your space, and use pesticides if needed. Just make it a little more realistic, not too absurd. For example, the protagonist grows so tall just from feeding pigs grass—that's impossible! It's a shame, you could have written it much better and more logically!

Author, your space can earn tens of billions from a single mainstream agricultural product. It matures in a day. What others have selected over decades can be done in just a few dozen days in your space. As long as you cultivate an even better variety, why worry about not making money?

Don't write the protagonist as a village nanny, and don't let everything involve the protagonist.

I feel that the author is just writing about the little things in the countryside. If you like it, read it; if you don't, don't read it. Why say so much?

The protagonist shouldn't be saving people so often! I especially hate these kinds of rescue scenes! There's no need for him to get into the limelight except with family! An unlicensed doctor could easily kill him… I skip this kind of plot! People won't even be grateful to the protagonist for saving them! More importantly, it's not even the protagonist's responsibility!

The protagonist shouldn't always use the spatial spring water and crystal dew to save people and animals! It's unnecessary! There are too many illogical things; the protagonist can't hide them no matter how hard he tries! Just keep an eye on the protagonist's family! You tell Zhu Yuliang not to tell anyone? How is that possible? A secret known only to two people isn't a secret anymore!

It's a real shame that such a vivid and relatable slice-of-life story has been ruined. Despite its flaws, it's already quite good for its current status. What a pity!

Having read 70 chapters, I don't know how it goes. So far, the author seems to be pushing their own opinions too much (or maybe they're just pandering to the public's political correctness). A book should tell a good story first, then put forward its own opinions. In some places, it's clearly unnecessary, but the forced inclusion of environmental protection and animal rights themes feels awkward.

Don't forget the plot; reread your own novel.

Are the grades okay? Why haven't you updated them?