Starting from Guhuo Bird: Jamfu Bow Brigade

As a fan, I personally don't think it works. 99% Of the power of archery is not shown, and the protagonist, as a time traveler, does not have the feeling of being a human being in two lives, and is more like a fool.

Since Gu Huoniao is basically a eunuch, let's use fan fiction as a substitute (fog)

If I use arrows, I feel like I can write the content of Water Margin. The story about Xiao Li Guang's beautiful appearance is quite magical in the original Water Margin. Moreover, the framework of Water Margin is quite complete, and it can use a lot less ideas.

Some suggestions for the author 1; To advance the plot in the real world, since the author said that the protagonist has a sister, it is very likely that the ambiguous plot between the sister and the protagonist will be written. It is best not to write like this, it will be very disgusting. After all, normally, the relationship between siblings who depend on each other will be more like maternal love rather than abnormal love. At the same time, in order to advance, you can also find Fat Tiger to establish friendship. Friendship 2; It is also a plot advancement in the real world. When the protagonist is not yet strong, do not describe too much about the affairs between the big guys. This will make the book seem to have no structure. It is as if the author revealed the ending at the beginning and retained the mystery, and the results may be better. 3; (emphasis added) Regarding the description of fruits, after reading so many books, you can clearly recognize some of the author's The shortcoming is that the world view of the fruit is not written. The most important thing for the original world is the world view, and it is also difficult to write. After all, it is infinite flow, but you can give some introduction to the world when entering the fruit, and at the same time expand the world view and some important things through dialogue and exploration with NPCs 4; Also, the main plot of the protagonist after entering each fruit is not very good. Just leave after finishing a few things. The portrayal of important NPCs is not enough, and the protagonist's sense of disobedience after entering the fruit is a bit heavy. The solution to this problem is simple, which is to give some introductions to the identity, such as things he has done in the past and introductions to some familiar NPCs It is very good for a new author to write like this. I hope the author can finish it normally and not be fooled by some bullshit and snake gods.

Hahaha, I was afraid that this book would be a eunuch and I kept reading it to observe the form, but it turned out to be a real eunuch.

Isn't it? Did you go to Cuckoo Bird for further training?

There are very few stories about the main character using a bow. When I was just reading a book, there was a book called Demon Bow that made my blood boil.

It's so tragic. I didn't bother to search for my fans, but my fans also entered the palace. (I read another one a few years ago, but I forgot the name. The protagonist also started practicing boxing, but that one also ended up in the palace.)

The author would like to make some suggestions here. First, after this dungeon is over, follow-up dungeons should first read the martial arts or Taoist worlds of the Republic of China. In your last days, foreign books cannot reflect the advantages of Gu Huoniao's book. Second, Liu Baiyuan's archery requires practicing boxing, not just archery. It is said in the movie that his arrows are based on boxing, so don't fly kites all the time (I didn't watch the whole first copy, so I'm not sure whether the protagonist has melee scenes, but I hope there will be more melee combat in the future). Thirdly, don't delay the plot, and meet Fat Tiger Knife quickly. Finally, as a family, don't complain if you don't like it

Let me give you some suggestions 1. End your plot quickly and go find Fat Tiger 2. The protagonist should focus on melee combat. Ancient archers were all special forces. Not only can they shoot arrows, but they are also better at close combat than ordinary soldiers. What's more, the protagonist is Erlang Shen, not Hou Yi! Erlang Shen is most famous for his three-pointed two-edged sword, not his slingshot! If the protagonist wants to just play with arrows all the time, I think it would be better to set the protagonist to play with a sniper rifle from the beginning. It's no more powerful than an arrow, and it doesn't require much effort. The range is longer and safer.

Is there a curse in the word "lonely soul bird"?

Why don't the author lower the protagonist's initial bow and arrow specialization? The protagonist's archery performance is really not like 99%. It looks so inconsistent.

I heard that the author who learned that the school girl got the bird is now an eunuch.

Since the specialization is so high, why should we accept the inheritance of Erlang Shen instead of trying to see if we can change to Dayi?

How can I put it this way? I felt that the first copy was not chosen well and the progress was too slow. Why should I change the original work (Cha Xiaodao)? Isn't it better to be a prophet? Otherwise, you can just grab Li Yan's opportunity, not to mention the background is so big.

I never expected that fan fiction would grow so big in a blink of an eye.

I hope to be able to write the original version of turning mountains and seas, chasing clouds and moons, with the Chinese willfulness of cultivating immortality.

You can develop in the direction of Dayi. For details, please refer to "Incredible Mountains and Seas".

Archers in ancient times were not only good at shooting arrows, they were also very powerful at killing people with their swords.

Damn it, I've run out of investment opportunities this month, I'll send it to you

Come on, don't be a eunuch, I'll read this volume after I finish it.

If you don't learn well every day, you just need to become a eunuch, right?

? ? ? Is there a chapter missing?

Why are updates so slow and unstable?😅

Personally, I feel pretty good, keep up the good work💪

I've given you three monthly passes. Come on, write well.

Hold on. How good-looking the Monk Bane was before you.

Is there a Shennong? Does it look good? Is there any copy of martial arts?