Three Kingdoms: the Rebellious Son of the Guan Family, Long Yu Jingxiang

It just keeps jumping back and forth, and the exciting parts are gone. Next time at the beginning, it will just fill in the holes, and it will kill people.

I don't mind updating three times a day, I just want it to be less censorship, but I think this kind of ending should be difficult to write, come on💪

The protagonist Guan Lin resists Guan Yu's arrogance with the attitude of a "rebellious son" (he was hacked to death by a statue of Guan Yu due to time travel). He spreads the "Guan Yu Road Idiot Theory" and accuses Guan Yu of destroying the ecology. He sophistry makes Guan Yu write a self-incriminating letter. On the surface, he uses venomous words to undermine Guan Yu. In fact, he uses extreme means to force Guan Yu to change his arrogant character and avoid the fate of losing to Maicheng. This core contradiction of "loyalty and filial piety through rebellion" fiercely collides with the prophetic perspective of the time traveler and traditional ethics, forming a very tense narrative starting point and achieving the unique style of "harmony on the outside and village in the inside" (referred to as Shuangbai Wen) Light and dark are used in the early stage of the novel Dual-line structure: Overt line: Guan Lin acts as a monster (such as sophistry that Guan Yu "destroyed the ecological balance" and forced him to write the "Book of Sin") to create a lot of laughter; Hidden line: Stealing Soochow (poaching generals such as Lu Meng and Lu Xun) + hand-made black technology (improved Qin crossbows, map surveying) to reverse the disadvantages of Shu Han. This setting of a traitor with a loyal minister under his skin not only satisfies the sense of satisfaction, but also coincides with historical logic - Guan Lin's "treason" character is actually a disguise to cover up his strategic layout, which is in contrast to the truth that Guan Yu "closes doors and praises Qilin'er". One of the most impressive lines in the multi-line narrative: Li Miao undercover madman: first met Guan Lin, persuaded by Guan Lin's logic, wanted to become the number one madman in the Three Kingdoms - undercover Wei Guo, assisting Cao Pi on the surface, but actually assisting Cao Zhi (Zhen Ji has her weakness and is easy to control) Then The Guan Lin camp gave him meritorious service. He rescued Xiahou Dun (who was blinded in one eye by Huang Zhong in a hot air balloon) many times, and his status improved again and again. As we all know, it is taboo for undercover agents to bring emotions, but Li Miao really assumed the identity of Xiahou Dun's adopted son. After the war, he was ashamed of him. This undercover line was still written. Not bad Gaokai collapses: the history of decadence from the peak of strategy to brainless cheating 1. Narrative collapse and perspective separation The shortcomings of insufficient multi-line narrative ability in the middle and late stages are completely exposed: the author's control of multi-line rhythm is a disaster and the sense of rupture is extremely strong Xiang The battle between Yang and Yang is about to begin, and suddenly it cuts to Guan Suo seducing the enemy general with the "pretty boy trick" - which makes people drop their books on the spot: "I just got the adrenaline pumping, you want me to watch my brother sell his ass?!" This kind of blunt jumper frequently appeared in the middle and late stages, and the ingenuity in planning the plot was completely reduced to a piece of rubbish. 2. The technology tree goes berserk: from hand-rolling blueprints to hand-rolling nuclear bombs, the protagonist Golden Finger loses control and is a poisonous point: It is still understandable in the early stage: the time traveler relies on Baidu encyclopedia-level knowledge to restore ancient technologies (such as traditional Chinese medicine prescriptions, crossbow machine blueprints); Mid Period; Zhang Zhongjing was about to die of illness and copied various Chinese medicine books to let his apprentices learn how to treat typhoid fever. So many medical books were copied. In the later period, it was directly science fiction: hot air balloons attacked the Wei Kingdom, white phosphorus incendiary bombs burned the company camp, and almost did not get the AK47. After the recovery of Soochow, in order to alleviate the conflicts among the large clans, a hand-drawn world map containing various mineral resource annotations was used. The world is so big, so don't focus on this place and let's expand the shipping route together --Although the author used "Ma Jun copied Guan Lin's invention" to save his respect (Science and Technology Confrontation between Wei and Shu), However, anti-intellectual settings such as "hand-painted earth" and "eating 24 cows in half a year" turn historical logic into a joke Character creation: highlights and flaws coexist Guan Yu's three-dimensional reconstruction: The exploration of Guan Yu's "arrogance" and "fatherliness" is the highlight of the book. From angrily scolding the treacherous son to secretly praising "Qilin'er", his character change relies on Guan Lin's continuous stimulation, which is more convincing. Zhang Fei's Mechanical Awakening: To cure Guan Yu's arrogance, he relied on progressive psychological games, but to cure Zhang Fei's recklessness, he relied on Guan Lin's novel "The Legend of Fighting Gods" (a fanfic that spoils Zhang Fei's tragic death in the future) - Zhang Fei immediately had an "epiphany" after reading it, and fighting was like opening his eyes. This kind of crude whitewashing is comparable to a system initiation, and the character arcs completely collapse. Controversial plots triggered readers' resistance: the miracle doctor Zhuo Rong saved Zhang Liao and was criticized as a "Mother" (Zhang Liao returned after initial treatment, but he was still worried that he would die due to tetanus and went deep into the enemy's camp to treat "Zhang Wanwan"), highlighting the author's failure to reconcile "the benevolence of the doctor" and the "camp's stance". The disastrous ending of the emotional line The emotional line is the failure of the whole book: Lingju (Diao Chan's daughter): assists Guan Lin throughout the whole process of intelligence, but has a sassy character but is abandoned by the author as the heroine with no ending; Sun Luyu (Xiaohu): was forced to close the house due to the aphrodisiac incident, and the character's value is weak. Compared with the contribution of Lingju, the leader of the intelligence organization, the narrative is unfair. This kind of "tool-based acquisition of girls" logic exposes the author's perfunctory treatment of female characters. Historical textual research: The original sin of a hodgepodge of cool articles Stitching strange historical materials: official history (Guan Yu defends Jingzhou) + romance (Zhuge Liang boasts that Guan Yu is "unparalleled") + unofficial history (Diao Chan has a daughter), which leads to Zhang Xingcai There is no sense of disobedience when fictional characters come in. The source of the sense of fragmentation: when the author needs depth, he refers to the tactics of "Three Kingdoms", and when he needs to be more exciting, it instantly turns into a drama of "Tearing Off the Japanese with Hands" - you can never guess whether the next page is Chen Shou or Qidian Xiaobai. Conclusion: The Rebellious Son's Breakthrough and the Dilemma of Historical Writings The book "The Rebellious Son of the Guan Family" attempts to balance the dual expectations of "historical drama" and "time travel novels", but it is in a dilemma due to the lack of core capabilities: Advantages: Creative setting (the traitorous son saves his father), intensive The laughs and ingenuity of the plot (the early-stage stealing strategy) support the readability; flaws: disordered multi-line scheduling, pale description of war, technology tree jumping off a cliff, and emotional lines that shit It opened the gap in history with the attitude of a rebel, but failed to take the road of innovation due to technical shortcomings. For readers who pursue strategic depth and historical texture, the collapse in the later period can be called a disaster; but for audiences who accept "deconstruction of history + pleasure first", its rebellious character and fast-paced reversal are still attractive. If the author can supplement his narrative control, he may be able to truly open up the "humorous" and "thickness" of Ren and Du. Unfortunately, this time, Nizi failed to change his fate. n

This author's understanding of Guan Yu's arrogance is completely wrong. Guan Yu's arrogance and humiliation of his subordinates are the foundation of Guan Yu's self-identity and improvement. To be honest, according to the novel, when Guan Yu was guarding Jingzhou, his martial arts, strategy, leading troops in combat, and political skills were all considered to be the first echelon, or even the only one. Why can't he be proud? On the other hand, if he is already basically invincible, he is not allowed to be proud and has no positive emotional incentives. What motivation does he have to continue to improve himself? Sun Quan's request for a woman is essentially a high-end attempt to create a wedge and find an excuse to send troops. Crossing the river in white is Lu Meng's breaking of political mutual trust and the huge military advantage he obtained at the expense of high political credibility and hindering economic exchanges. After defeating Maicheng, Guan Yu even chose to run away. You can't say that he was still arrogant. The protagonist's various behaviors and thoughts at the beginning of the chapter are full of unthinking disapproval.

At first I didn't think it was good-looking, it was just to kill time. Later, the author's step-by-step design was considered to be exquisite. Especially when I saw the chapter about Li Miao, I got goosebumps. It really felt like a strategist. It's okay, keep up the good work.

Objectively speaking, this Three Kingdoms is the best Three Kingdoms I have read in the past two years. It is understandable that everyone has different opinions on the description of the characters in the book, but I don't think I should criticize the author because the image of the character does not match my own setting. If you like it, support it, but if you don't like it, don't criticize it; there is no need to put extra pressure on the author. Originality is not easy. If possible, I hope everyone can read it more rationally. I am just a reader. After reading the author's speech, I would like to express my own views and support the author.

I support you, at least now it seems that there are no problems with the various foreshadowings and the plot. Moreover, Guan Lin's family is not the only one in charge of planning among the Three Kingdoms. They all interact with each other. As for Han Chan, there is actually no big problem. Sima Yi's father did not have that ambition, and this chapter even mentions Sima Yi's ambition and the return of the three families to Jin. It is very logical and there is no problem. Furthermore, to put it bluntly, strategy is a matter of one person and one person. Zhuge Liang, Bai Mou. Guo Jia, a wonderful strategy. Xun Yu, perfect. Guan Lin, insight. One holds a script and a knowledge far beyond their millennia. Perhaps he cannot compare with these masters simply in terms of IQ or strategy. But to put it bluntly, this is what calculations are all about. Guan Lin knows the character of each of them, knows the nature of society, and knows what technology is best used now. That plan is too convenient to target people's hearts. As for those who just read one chapter and start complaining, please, these are not the golden three chapters anymore, there are so many chapters, so be patient. Now is a very fast era, and this author is indeed slow, but you have to pave the way and describe it for others. One chapter at a time makes it more fun. This is not the way to write and read a book. So author, come on, as long as you maintain this level, it is rare to see this kind of writing in the history genre that makes me feel very comfortable.

Jingzhou is not easy to save. This place is very difficult to deal with.

Ever since I read the lives of Guan Yu and Zhuge, I can no longer read Three Kingdoms and historical novels. Each one is more nonsense than the last.

The current story should be about to reach the end of Guanlin and the beacon tower. After all, you wrote a preview on the cover. As for why Mi Fang and Fu Shiren were tied up and beaten, I haven't guessed yet. Finally, I invited Sun Luban to eat Crazy Thursday to make her pregnant, but I didn't think about it. You know what we like to see, right 🙂 To summarize the most exciting part so far, I personally think that Wei suddenly changed its counselor Jia Xu, Guan Xing recklessly captured the city, Guan Lin remained calm in the face of danger, technology reversed the situation, Huang Zhong was twenty years behind, counselor Xu Shu returned, and Guan Yu pioneered the capture of the city. Although there are some other lines interspersed in the content, overall I think it is quite good. It depends on what the author writes later: To prevent Soochow from attacking, the Seventh Army will be flooded.

It was still a bit toxic in the early stages, with the protagonist's rambunctious temper, and his speech and thoughts that were too inconsistent with the character's way of thinking at that time.

How can I put it, if you can accept the efficacy of the first three chapters, the efficacy of all the subsequent plots will be similar

Generally speaking, it is a good book, but many parts are not representative of the times, which makes it appear awkward or "poisonous". As far as I can see, it will make you act out from time to time, which is very uncomfortable. You are watching it well, but suddenly it will take you out of the reading mood. For example, pretending to be Hong Qigong and giving something to a beggar, but no one has ever discovered it. I find it difficult to understand, because there is no way Guan Yu's mansion would have no guards or secret sentries. Guan Yu will definitely be reported, and then the couple will know what is going on. Not to mention the forgery of seals and ribbons. Such a big thing was ended hastily like this. It was a matter of genocide. How big is the impact of the forgery of seals and ribbons? Just ignore it? In short, it is like this in many places. It makes me feel uncomfortable just watching it.

I wasn't interested at first, but after reading the introduction, I suddenly became interested.

I spent more than 3 days reading 168 chapters, and I would like to express my thoughts on this novel that people both love and hate. The advantages and disadvantages are all obvious and prominent. As a traitor, his performance in the early part (only for the 168 chapters I have read) is still remarkable. I can handle the change of Guan Erye's character fairly well. However, the further I get to the later, the more disgusting and uncomfortable the words and deeds of the traitor appear. Even though the behavior is No matter how the author explains it, it is a fact that it has caused a lot of resentment and complaints from readers. Really, I am very offended by the way the Zhang Zhongjing incident was handled. I don't know if there is a better way to write it, but I think the author's method is really inappropriate. After a few chapters, there is not much discussion in the chapter, and they are all scolding and quarreling. And there is another problem. The whole chapter is very watery. I can tolerate a paragraph that is watery five or six times, but I can read the three or five chapters before and after seven, eight or ninety times. I can tolerate the free chapters. Is the same true for the paid chapters? And it's getting worse? ! I had read Wei Yinlin before reading this book. I only read about ten chapters. There were too many unbearable flaws (or, to put it more unpleasantly, the unreasonable points that make people feel like their brains are being fucked). I thought I had started a new book and the author would make some progress. After reading more than a hundred chapters, there was indeed improvement. Originally it was less than ten chapters, but now it has improved more than ten times. The author is still the same author, and there is no improvement. I don't want to say any more, otherwise it's a pity that the idea of ​​this book has been wasted like this, and with the twenty or thirty hours I spent in it these past few days, I didn't bother to come to the comment area to say so much. I just said, "The book is not good, so let it go."

Rating: four stars Comments: Historical novels are a complex collection, but this novel attracted me uniquely for its excellent plotting. The beginning of the novel is rooted in the element of intrigue. The protagonist Guan Lin takes every step. First, he pretends to be the "rebellious son", hoping to dissuade his father Guan Yu from changing his mind. After the plan fails, Guan Lin secretly forms a gang of beggars and spreads rumors. This makes Jiangdong's so-called "borrowing Jingzhou" become an empty talk. The subsequent plot is even more guided by intrigues, creating vivid characters: Cao Cao, who values righteousness, chooses to trust his general even if he doubts Zhang Liao again in his heart; Sun Quan, who is forbearing, is very good at superficial skills, but secretly he has already killed others; The most outstanding character description of the novel is the change of Guan Yu's character. At the beginning, Guan Yu was arrogant and domineering, but after "hitting the wall" under Guan Lin again and again, he also chose to trust his son more, and even wrote to Liu Bei to give up his position as the governor of Xiangyang to Guan Lin. Interlocking and step-by-step are the characteristics of this book that I have summarized. The only flaw is that the scenes switch too frequently and sometimes cannot adapt well to the author's plot changes.

I don't know what the author is thinking in the last few chapters, but Guan Lin is really becoming less and less humane. A few chapters ago, he was still affectionate as a son and daughter, but a few chapters later, he took advantage of Xingcai's tears. In the first few chapters, he said that there was an undercover agent that made Boss Cao very worried, and in the next few chapters, he started to conspire and deceive. I really don't understand what the purpose of your fake death is to lure the enemy to attack? Liu Bei, Zhang Fei and Ma Chao are fighting on the Western Front, Guan Yu is digging rivers, Boss Cao wants to return to his hometown to stabilize his background, and even Sun Shiwan is being dragged down by Jiaozhou and is miserable. When it is time to develop well, do you want to start a war immediately? At this time, Guan Lin suddenly faked his death, and Guan Yu still dug a river? Jiaozhou doesn't launch a fierce counterattack? Can Liu Zhangma stay peacefully on the Western Front and wait for your God of War? In this wave of fake deaths, will one of us panic, or will the opponent underestimate the enemy? You must know that your father, Guan Yu, has already deceived you once. Is your opponent so stupid that he doesn't even guard against you? Even if your own people get the news and think you are awesome, they will still be worried. You think cheating death can accomplish things, let me tell you how many things cheating death can ruin. Your spy organization at least went to Soochow to take revenge and reimburse half of it. They contacted remotely and failed to communicate in time. This organization knew that it was you Guan Lin and was loyal to Guan Lin. You faked your death. Have you ever thought about being the leader of a spy? The Parrot Organization is the same, they are all in remote contact, revenge when it is time, assassination when it is time.       ，，？ And you still hang out under the protection of Jiaozhou bodyguards. If Jiaozhou is crazy, people can take advantage of it. If Jiaozhou is not crazy, you will die of loneliness. You said that Jiaozhou is a place that attracts enemies. Are you and Jiaozhou your superiors and subordinates? Is your business partnership subject to your wishes? If I were the boss of Jiaozhou, I would not treat Jiaozhou as a place for Shu and Wu to compete. If you really die and I don't have to live, you will be really crazy. If you fake death and I live, I will fake madness at best. Even if Jiaozhou is really tricked by you and swallows up one hundred thousand Jiaozhou and Sun in one fell swoop, Boss Liu and Guan Yu will really only be able to stay stable if you are the world consciousness. But if they all fail in this way, it will be really boring.

What about the protagonist? In recent dozens of chapters, the protagonist has no role. They are all about how Wei and Wu are doing. That's not to say you can't write about it. You've written too much. No wonder others say you're stupid. The protagonist is like a transparent person and all depends on the protagonist's subordinates.

It's a really enjoyable story about the Three Kingdoms, mainly because it was written so smoothly and I didn't encounter any setbacks at all. No matter what organization I establish, it will develop well. No matter how many people I recruit, there will be no flaws. As long as the supporting characters have some connections, they will not die. Nothing can be hidden from others, there are all kinds of discord, and all kinds of unfavorable plans.

Two months later——The ending of Guan family's traitorous son (sixty-six) 😁

No, it was fine in the early stage, but the more I wrote later, the more poisonous it became. Starting from the female doctor, I could see that I wanted to insert a love triangle between Ling Tong and Zhang Liao, but the readers criticized me. I couldn't stand the plot until I got Adou. I endorsed him at the critical moment, and Zhao Yun was also portrayed as pedantic and brainless. I really couldn't stand it anymore.

Your finale is so long that your enthusiasm is gone!

In the article, Cao Cao is a traitor who usurped the throne and established himself. As the author, you are writing a historical article, so he will definitely die. For the overall stability, appeasing one's own people is not more important than appeasing the enemy. If Cao Cao does not die, Cao Cao's men cannot bear to kill him. This is not playing tricks. In history, Cao Cao admires Guan Yu so much, but Guan Yu's relatives have not been killed, only It was just to appease the descendants of the unworthy generals under his command; I always felt that in the final stage, the writing was a bit too childish, so many people killed by Cao Cao's camp were not numbers; the article always promoted Cao Cao's meanness and insidiousness in terms of public opinion, and in the end he did not kill, and everyone in the regiment was like a family, and Cao Cao was indispensable for external development and internal political management.

Why are there so many repetitions in the chapters? It's so painful to watch. Are you trying to make money? Chapters with a small number of words will not be repeated or fragmented.

To tell a joke, I will finish the book next month 😁, and there is no author credit at all.

Write quickly and improve it

It's not too much to give me a boost, treasure

The best Three Kingdoms theme I have seen in recent years

If the Three Kingdoms does not open too many cheats, the biggest difficulty for Liu Beijun's unification is that there is no successor, especially Adou, who is a monarchy. Although history books have said that Adou was very smart when he was a child, he was not stupid at all, and he was unwilling to think about Shu. In fact, he showed political wisdom, but his ability was indeed insufficient. Another biggest problem is that after the second generation of the Three Kingdoms, Liu Bei's army, which relied on ideals and hopes, relied entirely on Liu Bei's personal charisma to rule. At the same time, the biggest problem of the Shu Han regime, where ordinary people gathered in the humble family or as proposed in this article, was education. They were all new to the heights and relied entirely on talent, and could not teach children. The clans or aristocratic families in the north have a proper education mechanism. In other words, the upper limit of a poor family may be similar to that of an aristocratic family, but the lower limit is very different. Another way to understand it is that the generation of aristocratic families and humble families may all have PhDs, but the second generation of aristocratic families all have at least a bachelor's degree, while those from humble families may have graduated from junior high school or high school at most. This gap is the reason why the North won in the end. By extension, an important reason why Cao Wei was replaced is that the world has not yet been settled, and Cao Wei as the leader is already useless. Of course, facts have proven that if the education model of aristocratic families turns into a royal family, there will definitely be rebellion if the clan is too strong, so there was the Rebellion of the Eight Kings. Therefore, the education model of aristocratic families becoming royal must be changed to the original royal education model, and this is destined to become more and more useless, because the clan can only raise pigs.

I've just finished reading the latest chapter, and I have to say, it's beautifully written. This is what makes it interesting for you to come and go. None of us are fools. Cao Cao was not prepared to be fooled by Guan Lin before, but Guan Lin's reputation has risen, and everyone is prepared. You can continue to play small tricks, but it is normal for others to target you. I look forward to how Guan Lin breaks the situation in the future.