Zhutian: Rise from Douluo

He never expected that he would directly confess to the Tang family and his son that he was a time traveler, and when a fellow villager saw a fellow villager, he would stab him in the back. It really poisoned me. Are you just going to follow Tang San's route? I really didn't expect to be so honest with others. When you wrote this, you didn't expect how much trust there would be between people. Human nature cannot stand the test. Do you have no social experience at all? Speechless（#－.－）

Hey, it's so disgusting. Tang Dachui didn't teach Xuantian Kung. Little Rabbit didn't teach it, so I'm going to teach you. Who do you think you are? You need to know how to take death.

6. There is also an article about licking Tang San. Are you sure the confession game is not a death game?

Who said that Tang San in Dou 1 is okay? Let's just say that when you meet the guard at the beginning, if someone else's guard says a few words and you can find a way to die, that's okay. Also, when Yu Xiaogang took him to get the first soul ring, he felt that Yu Xiaogang saw him. He has a hidden weapon, and Yu Xiaogang also has a way to kill him. You must know what Tang Sancai Yu Xiaogang said on the front foot: Once a teacher, always a father, the back foot has a way to kill him. This is called OK. If these are all called OK, then I don't understand.

Are there any articles about licking Tang San? Accepted.

No wonder I was so weird when I watched it, it turned out to be licking Tangwen, such an ancient genre, 😂

Tang San's techniques could not only hypnotize him and make him speak out, but also secretly learn some. Otherwise you will die. His father wouldn't give it to him. Why should I give it to you?

As for the plot about you exposing yourself as a time traveler to Tang San, readers have to fill their minds with answers before they have the patience to read on. I think you are taking money from the Buddha, otherwise I can't imagine anyone dare to write a Douluo fan like this. 🙄

I saw Tang San teaching Xuantian Kung again, and I was speechless. How could Tang San teach you Xuantian Kung when Douluo started and before Tang Sect was established. Tang Hao didn't teach me, Hundred Thousand Years Rogue Rabbit Xiaowu didn't teach me, Yu Xiaogang didn't teach me, Shrek Seven Devils didn't teach me, how could I possibly teach you?

6Wow, how much did you charge Zhang San?

The Douluo single was okay, but with the subsequent releases, it became clear that Tang San was not a positive character.

Anyone dare not criticize Tang San? The author doesn't know what political correctness is? I guarantee you won't be able to continue writing.

I didn't dare to enter after seeing the Shennong people's speeches.

So speechless. Chapter seven poisoned me to death. Those who say they look good, how much does one really cost 😥😥 It was unreasonable to make guns in the early stage. In the later stage, Wang Zhibao actually coveted others' Xuantian Kung Fu, and finally Tang San confessed that he was a time traveler... Tang San didn't even teach him his own father, so he just taught it to you casually? In the chapter of Awakening the Martial Spirit, there was also the Descendant of the Dragon. I was embarrassed and took out the three rooms and one living room. Poisonous, poisonous, poisonous! ! !

The introduction said to look at the problem rationally, and then the author said to reveal his identity as a time traveler to Tang San, what more could he ask for?

Did Zhang Wei pay you to write it?

Will Tang San teach you Xuantian Kung Fu? The character is ruined, big brother. My father and my wife don't teach me. The protagonist has a way to die!

Damn, how much does that well-written comment below cost? It poisoned me to death.

It's good. It can be regarded as a standout. After all, the current Douluo atmosphere is black. If you do something a little different from licking, it can also give people some relief.

You voted for yourself for this novel, right?

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Is it possible that I am the only one who feels disgusted by the confession?

The Great Lord Heavenly Evil God died in battle. The ten Heavenly Demon Emperors led the evil tribes from outside the territory to invade the Douluo Continent. The five supreme God Kings of Earth resisted desperately and were killed. The protagonist is gone.

The writing is good, and it's quite inflammatory. It doesn't have those disgusting plot points. It's not even on the shelves yet. It just needs to be refined.

What do you mean, I have a feeling that you are rewriting Douluo in the name of a fan of the original work, but the characters in it now match the settings of the original work.

The first time you draw, you can thunder and explode the Shenlongdu Shenlong idiom, and you can't stop it even 100 times.

Isn't writing about dragons about spirituality and power?

Those who write books without looking at the market can only lose their achievements. If you want to make money, you must first cater to the market. Of course, if you want to say that you are writing for fun, I have nothing to say. The time wasted is not mine. You see, you have written so many words, but you don't have many comments or book friends. Most of them still scold you. Do you think this is okay?