After Rebirth, the School Beauty Qingmei Said She Was Pregnant

The heroine is written like a fool, with low emotional intelligence and low IQ? ? I'm still a senior in high school, and my grades are good. I haven't studied biology in junior high or high school, right? It's already 2000, and we have an era of abundant information sources. I can listen well.

This novel is set in the year 2000. It was so dramatic that I couldn't stand it anymore. There were a lot of common sense mistakes It was impossible for high school students in 2000 to have mobile phones. At that time, BB machines had not been completely eliminated. In 2000, QQ only had a computer version. It was not until 2003 that the mobile version of qq was launched, and it came with the phone and could not be downloaded and installed In 2000, the market share of mechanical keyboards was almost zero, and it was completely dominated by membrane keyboards. It was not until 2006 that mechanical keyboards re-emerged, and only after 2014 did mechanical keyboards become famous all over the world In 2000, it was impossible to play Legend in domestic Internet cafes, and it was not released in China until the second half of 2001. Test In 2000, it was impossible for any restaurant to sell spicy hotpot, because this way of eating had not been invented The chance of you eating crayfish in a barbecue restaurant in 2000 was close to zero The author may not have been born in 2000, and has no knowledge of that era. I hope you can check the information and don't write randomly, or you can change it to a parallel world! Set the protagonist in China in the year 2000 on earth, and let people who lived in that era see it, hey...

The heroine slipped through the nine-year compulsory education. I haven't studied biology, and I'll get pregnant if I kiss her 😅

It's really mindless, and the context doesn't fit. He said he was almost beaten to death by his father, and said he ran away because of a debt of 300,000 yuan.

Brother, after reading your profile, all I can say is, wake up. There really is such a school beauty. I can't tell how many of them I got pregnant with during my freshman year of high school. Is it still your turn?

When I opened the comments, I saw that they were all scolding. Then I read the third chapter and said, "Oh my god, this is so cruel that even Shen Nong can't resist it."

After reading the introduction, it seems that your childhood sweetheart is looking for an excuse to break up. As all junior high school students know, how can you get pregnant through a kiss? Deliberately looking for excuses to break up.

It comes again and again. The protagonist has just walked away from the leader of a criminal gang and rushed to someone else's casino to help his relatives. A rebirth novel is not a gangster novel. You are always crazily describing how much fighting power the protagonist has. You can pick a few gangsters to do what you want. Every time the protagonist encounters gang-related forces, his first reaction is to rush forward and fight with them. When it comes to settling his family's debts, the protagonist has no other choice at that time. Now that the protagonist has money, connections and background, why does he still need to fight with a few gangsters alone? As long as there is any point that is slightly missed. The protagonist will be useless in this life after rebirth. The son of a rich man will not sit in danger, do you understand? In a rebirth novel, why does the protagonist always have to take risks to fight with gangsters, even if it is a real gangster novel? There is no such thing as a protagonist. After becoming the boss, he always rushes to kill alone.

It is indeed an erotic article written by a female author.

If nothing else, at least the logic must be self-consistent. This is still the same chapter, still the first chapter,

What year is it in the book? You can even imagine that you will get pregnant if you kiss her! I wouldn't have been able to write a plot like this even if I had suffered a brain attack for ten years 🤓

Does the author have primary school level English? If you don't know how, don't write in detail. It's so embarrassing.

I haven't even read the first chapter. The protagonist is reborn at the age of 30 and is a senior in high school in 2000. Do you have any sense of time? The heroine reached the department level at the age of thirty in her previous life, just because her father is now the district chief? The district chief of a prefecture-level city is a division-level cadre. In ten years, it would be difficult for him to climb to the main hall by himself. Do you have any common sense

I wrote more than 300 chapters during the college entrance examination in 60 days, and forcibly reduced my intelligence.

The big problem with this book is that there are too many typos, dozens of them in one chapter.

I just want to know if the author is planning to write a gangster novel recently. The protagonist is always picking off a few gangsters. The protagonist has such super fighting power for no reason. Now there is a background. The male protagonist's method of dealing with the evil forces is to rush to the base of the evil forces single-handedly. You're going to the beach here. Are we going to kill the gang in reverse? Oh, and there is also the inexplicable real estate agent who has a crush on the protagonist and can be cheated for a week.

You haven't graduated from high school with 700,000 words?