People Are Coiling Dragons, but Hell

Watching a 7-star demon fight, more than 3,000 meters away? ? ? Isn't this giving away people's heads?😰😰😰

After reading more than 30 chapters, the protagonist didn't know how to act like a low-level god. He was so long-winded and rushed for time. He was doing one thing now and then another, and he never settled down to practice carefully. He also became a god inside his body, and most of the people ran away.

I originally wanted to read Panlong fandom, but I started to feel frustrated after just two or three chapters. I persisted in reading more than 30 chapters, and finally became a mid-level god. I thought I would rise up, but then I met a bandit and swore to drive him for ten thousand years. I couldn't stand it anymore. It was too poisonous. Moreover, he brought a close friend with Han Mo's brain to be a trap, and he died from the poison.

I suggest that you don't make jokes about the rule that you need to become a god within your body to achieve Great Perfection. The original book does not say that life is the master and Magnus has no clones, so it is not convincing. Moreover, the mysterious unity is the Great Perfection, and the power of will is the reward. You have miscalculated the strength of Heimoth. Augusta is the main artifact body, and there will be space for the body to wander around after death. Don't step on Lin Lei's thunder, give birth to a naughty daughter and let her cause all sorts of troubles. The most important thing is to keep the text concise. Try to increase your starting strength as much as possible.

It was okay at first, but what the hell was written in Chapter 16 and Chapter 17 😅, when he saw three people, he leaned on Lin Lei? Did the author meet Linley or something? Even called him out 🤫

The last few chapters are really hard to describe. The protagonist killed Magnus because of the death of Lin Lei's earth god clone. Now with a plot like this, it's hard to comment 😥😥😥😥😥

This Oath of the Supreme God is a super bug and the simplest logic. If the oath is useful, the class will be super solidified. Once you have the strength, the first thing you must do is to arrest people everywhere and swear an oath, then declare a group war, arrest people and swear an oath, and continue to declare a group war. The people I rule, as soon as they can speak, the first thing they do is not to call their parents, but to swear allegiance to me. In the world I rule, those who have not sworn to me will have no right to survive.

There have been too many poisonous points lately, I can't keep chasing them, so I'll give up.

He is naive, naive and brainless, and is speechless.

It's hard to understand an author who feels so aggrieved when writing fan fiction. Does anyone really want to read this kind of fan fiction?

I think what the author wrote is really wrong. This time, he did not achieve his goal, but also made the protagonist feel embarrassed. He has not yet obtained the right attributes to cultivate the godhead, and he still has to face Auf. The most important point is that Beirut is free easily... This operation is no less nonsense than the previous protagonist personally taking action to beat Lin Lei into a soul mutation. Next, the protagonist has to fight Auf. One has four more will powers, two or three sets of supreme artifacts, and three has completed the move of transcending reincarnation. The protagonist is just a middle-ranked god. The total of zero and zero is ten thousand times✖️hundred times✖️ten thousand times. The basic strength will be tens of billions of times that of the protagonist.

Character solicitation post, if you have any ideas, write a few songs. Diemeng will try to write them into the book The format is as follows: Name Race Physique Gender Talent/talented magical power Cultivation rules Whether there is a god clone Appearance strength Background story

What is this? It's too far-fetched! Panlongli's great-grandchildren are no longer close to each other, so they still care about those "tribesmen" who can't be beaten with eight poles? In the original work, Lin Lei's transcendence didn't even leave a single main godhead to the four divine beasts.

These recent pictures are completely copied from the original work, with the character names changed.

This is the first time I've seen someone writing Linley to death. Yes, it's a waste of money.

The writing is good and easy to read. It's a pity that the author has just written this book now.

Linley's fate is uncertain. He is not destined to be the one in control. There are many people whose fate is uncertain.

I feel that the lower gods can quickly skip it. After all, the fandom still needs to have a faster pace and more explosions to achieve good results.

There are so many things to blanch, I don't know where to start.

Seventeen or eighteen percent of the rules of life must be at least a higher god. After all, it is 100% Dzogchen.

After reading a few chapters, to be honest, I have no desire to continue reading. I have neither a golden finger nor a powerful brain. I basically have no advantage over other life forms. There are also a lot of bullshit and thieves. The lower gods are running around and they feel like they can't die quickly enough.

The body becomes a god without a golden finger and I can't stand it after reading 3 chapters.

Has the author not read the original work carefully? After reading a few chapters I couldn't stand it anymore. Those who have read everything carefully will not write mindlessly. Read the original work twice before writing about Panlong fans. Since you have to rely on Panlong fans to make a living, don't ruin Panlong's brand.

Some of the best books in Panlong. There are no extra cheats and no kneeling and licking of Lin Lei. Almost all the fanfics are ugly when they mention the main god and transcendence. This one is really good.

If you plan to start with the main god, here are a few recommended books: "Coiling Dragon: Revealing the Main Godhead at the Beginning", "Traveling through the Coiling Dragon for Billions of Years, the Earth Becomes a Material Plane", "Coiling Dragon, Starting from the Accidental Missing of the Main Godhead", "Coiling Dragon, I Became the Main God, and the System Was Activated", "Coiling Dragon Comes to the Real Earth", and "Heavens, Rising from Becoming a Sanctuary". These are the better fanfics written by the main god in the beginning. I have summarized three of them as high-quality books, and the remaining two have better results than yours. Of course, I don't mean to ask you to follow their plot. What I mean is to let you learn how they write the perspective of the Lord God. I have to say that if you want to truly write the Lord God well, and if you want to write it happily, you have to start from the God level. The fact that the Lord God cannot violate the will of the Lord is really written by them. But in the final analysis, it is still a plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. After all, the main god himself cannot wander around at the beginning. The starting point is more because he is afraid of other main gods, so he sends a weak god clone to hell. The main perspective is still a weak god clone, but I personally understand that as long as it is written that the will of the main god cannot be violated, it will be really satisfying. To use an inappropriate analogy, it is equivalent to a sense of superiority, a sense of crushing, and a sense of absolute control. Generally, a god-level person cannot help but go to hell, but going to hell as a main god clone is equivalent to amusement rides. Of course, these books all have some shortcomings. It's up to the author to summarize them yourself and avoid stepping into the pits they have stepped on. But I personally understand that writing this way is also the easiest way to get results. As long as the writing style of the next book improves a little bit, it really won't be difficult to make it a high-quality book.

Author: The type of Panlong fanfic you want to write is already being written by an author. You can refer to it. The author has great ideas in writing Coiling Dragon. The last book is a masterpiece, called Man in Coiling Dragon, the Beginning of Heaven and Earth The only shortcoming of this author may be that he cannot grasp the rhythm in the later period.

This is already next month. Are there any new books?

Dear author, I suggest that the next book starts with the main god. Of course, what I mean is that the main god himself should not end too early. If you are chasing Panlong, you can obviously find that those few high-quality Panlong books are all very fast, or they simply become the main god at the beginning, and then perform various pretense. The main god stage in this book obviously improves too quickly. The main perspective of the whole process focuses on the god level stage, and there is no detailed description of the greatness of the main god. I recommend the author to read these two fine fan novels "Panlong, the rise of the main godhead from the accidental missing" and "Panlong: The main godhead is revealed at the beginning". They mentioned the main god directly or sideways in many places. For example, Shura needs to kneel down when meeting the main god. For example, a drop of the main god can improve his strength. Another example is the feeling of a confident guy knowing that the protagonist is the main god and kneeling directly. Your writing style is actually not worse than those of these two authors, but the whole book is not that exciting. Instead of writing a book about Panlong from a different perspective, picking up the main godhead at the beginning is obviously a better way. But there is one thing I really hope you, the author, will pay attention to. If you plan to become a main god at the beginning, I really do not recommend starting with a high-level main god. Starting with a high-level main god can easily lead to a problem, that is, the main god cannot progress, because if you make even one or two progress, you will surpass It's actually not very good to be a dominator beyond the rules, and the middle main god is not very good, because Dzogchen is a cool point. Becoming a Dzogchen will also quickly become the master level. When the perspective later focuses on the main god stage, the room for improvement will be very small, so I personally recommend that the following main gods are a good starting point. Of course, the main god starts from a higher starting point, so he needs to fill in the content by himself. It is not difficult to blindly improve the strength of the main god. Otherwise, it will be easy to write 200,000 words or more, and the power will be invincible and unable to continue writing. Another suggestion is that the next book should be challenged to have a heroine, maybe a tool heroine. The heroine is something that proves sexual orientation in personal eyes. It can be elaborated in detail, or it can be written in less words. This book is too asexual for reproduction.

The book Panlong doesn't say that the middle god can be compared to the Seven Star Demon or even Shura. Which website did the author read it on?

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁