The Fruit of the Path Through the Starry Sky

To be honest, the previous setting of Daoguo's increased understanding is very good, and it is also good to be able to analyze the talent of the golden-horned giant beast. But I don't know what the author thinks about analyzing things and copying things, how to write them in the later stage, world towers, all kinds of magical things, some things just destroy the balance. You can't force it not to be copied, after all, there is this setting.

Author, your book is very nice and the writing is smooth, but the main problem is your book title. Without reading the introduction, I really wouldn't know that you are a fan of Devouring. People who like fandoms will only search with the first two words. The search engine of the platform is terrible. There is no need to be new and different.

This Daoguo instantly became low after contacting the prehistoric world. I don't know why so many authors like to write about the prehistoric times. It is obvious that the original version of the online novel was just a single universe, so the plot of it being stacked in boxes is simply unjustifiable. The characters of the same name in those novels written by great gods, such as "Zhetian Manghuangji" and "Primordial World", are just ordinary cosmic-level powerhouses.

To be honest, this is pretty good among fandoms. I didn't expect the results to be so bad. Maybe it's because I was too open-minded.

The Sixth Form of the Navy was taken out and placed in the Devouring Starry Sky. He was really a little genius. The author didn't even know what this thing was before writing it? Does it feel cool to just write it casually? Do you think the iron block thing is bad for monsters' teeth? I still think Moon Step is faster than monsters. Warriors can't practice it. God of War thinks it's rubbish, so I treat you as a treasure.

I originally wanted to click on this one, but there is a book title at the beginning, which gave me the feeling that it is about insight into the essence of practice, but after thinking about it, I might as well forget about Swallowing the Starry Sky... I have always only read novels like Swallowing Starry Sky because it is full of craftsmanship and a system constructed by superimposing complex and vast data. If you dare to write about the wisdom of the practice system, there will be a lot of Devouring fans to hate you Why do I say this? Let me ask you how you practice at the apprentice level? Throughout the article, I only saw martial arts and meditation methods, but these are just to help you absorb the source energy of the universe. It is equivalent to eating and exercising, which becomes absorbing energy to exercise. In fact, there is no concept of skills. "For example, even in the first realm of the fantasy world, the basic strength of the same level is different, but everything is unified here, even different body types. As long as you reach this realm, the basic strength is also unified," Of course, this first realm is understandable. It is considered to be a physical development. It has reached the extreme that human genes can theoretically achieve ("Don't bring in the phagocytic gene"), and all the flaws have been optimized But in every subsequent realm, I wonder if there is such a thing as a technique? Without talking about gene multipliers, this basic strength is like a machine produced on an assembly line. It is almost exactly the same. The combat effectiveness depends entirely on the exertion of force. The martial arts "Well, it doesn't matter if the strength is the same", the physical realm "subsequently converted into domain laws", and the additional increase in talent, divine body, and different levels of genes. But these are exactly the same data. The output is understandable when the body shape is suppressed, but these data are exactly the same. What should happen with the same genes? This kind of power is what kind of power, at most, it will form a divine body later, but it is exactly the same, so you can't talk about the fundamentals of Swallowing Starry Sky, its techniques, and the one-stop service of the will of the universe when it comes to the world master. To put it simply, the complete inheritance of Swallowing Starry Sky will be useless in any world. Without fundamental techniques, there are only various methods in combat, so-called genes and divine bodies at the same level. Of course, I know they will cover it Everything is like a crop under the program. Without the constitution of that world, without the cosmic will of that world, you can't even break through the world master, because there is no detailed method on how to construct your own path At the end, I was even more speechless. Everyone understood the same laws. No matter how much they understood and how much they integrated, that would be the realm. There would be no added self-understanding to form the origin of different structures. Everyone seemed to be walking on the same road, which is the ancient prehistoric text. The most representative one is probably the Coiling Dragon, the law of the Coiling Dragon...

Opening such a big hook, upgrading is like constipation. It's strange to be popular

The idea is very good, but the writing is a mess. It feels like I hired a ghostwriter for an outline who has never read the original work.

Is the path and fruit of the Supreme Being Zou-shaped or is it the complete state of path and fruit in this life

Wouldn't it be a bit ridiculous if a Devouring fan writes about One Piece's moves?

The idea is good, but the writing is too vicious. If you read it yourself, wouldn't you be embarrassed?

It's so hard that even if you want to read serious comments, you can't.

The main reason is that now that AI is used to write books, I can't stand how many new book starting points are produced in a day. How many people buy an outline and give it to a paid AI to write, and then they just need to revise it and send it out. I just need to make a few subscriptions and work hard to read a few books at a time. I don't want to become a great master. If I can't make several thousand a month, I'm just a ruthless person.

It was a good time to watch, but suddenly something like the Pirate King and the Sixth Form of the Navy appeared, and the thief was in trouble. I tried to continue reading, but it turned out that there were iron blocks and other names of One Piece moves, and I couldn't stand it anymore. How did the author create the play and write it?

The old routine of showing off and slapping someone in the face is so annoying! Not interested in watching! Removed from shelves

Isn't it true that the messy writing behind it is a scam? After writing it, it's over and swallowing it. What the hell, the gods are coming and messing with the chicken feathers 😆😆😆

It's another prehistoric story. Wouldn't it be better to write it honestly? It's ridiculous to add a prehistoric story, and the writing of this semi-original plot is just average. I dare say that pure devouring is ten thousand times better than your kind of pulling out the prehistoric part halfway and then going crazy and devouring it. No matter what the book is, if it is written in a prehistoric way, it will always belittle everything, which is super boring.

All I can say is that Tomato novels are really not suitable for adding a prehistoric theme. Once it is incorporated into a prehistoric novel, it will be like adding chili pepper to chocolate. It is very strange and extremely speechless. This Dao Fruit is written as a simple plug-in and is better than being incorporated into Prehistoric. Even when the protagonist enters Snow Eagle, I think it is much better than + Prehistoric.

I haven't seen the back yet. How do you explain the protagonist's creation out of thin air, and later when the giant ax comes and goes back in time?

The clone chooses Golden Horn and Youhai like Luo Feng, which is too discouraging. Although it may not be important for the protagonist to grow up, there is no need to make the same choice as the original.

The writing is not good, I don't have that feeling

I just gave up when I saw Chapter 6. What kind of bullshit does martial arts come from? Just write it down. Is that normal?

Garbage within garbage. Hunyuan was in trouble at the beginning, and he even started to show off from the apprentice level, just for the sake of showing off.

It's a bit like a running account, and I'm really impatient when looking at dozens of them.

After seeing the clone, it was a bit messy and abandoned the book.

The Earth stage was okay, but after leaving the Earth, the clone of Ji Ning and the title of Genius Fighting Emperor were simply embarrassing and embarrassing. . .

The strongest gun

That's it. Take Luo Feng's path and let Luo Feng follow behind.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that kills decisively and has many joys. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies" is hilarious...

In fact, the idea is quite good, but it is obvious that the author's writing style is a bit poor, and he did not write out the exciting points. Moreover, you can clearly feel that the protagonist has a sense of being a time traveler. Bolan, the genius, chose the wrong path. The protagonist deliberately used the rules to eliminate Bolan from the top five. When asked why, the protagonist directly said that he thought Bo Lan needs to experience, it is a feeling of superiority, it is not your fault, he is just a weak person, he just has the reputation of a genius, he will become stronger in the future, that is a matter of the future, and now he has not grown up, and he always likes to meddle in other people's business, thinking that he is a time traveler, and always feels that he is awesome. And it can be clearly felt that the author's idea is very good, but he did not write it clearly, especially the clone, using the golden-horned giant beast to make the clone recognized. The same goes for many of the plots in the back. The ideas are very good, but the writing is not clear. They rely entirely on the readers' imagination. Please, what I read is a white text, the kind without thinking. The most unbearable thing is the protagonist's behavior of changing the fate of others even though he is obviously weak, and yet he talks arrogantly about doing good for others. Don't they know that? As a genius, it is normal to have your own arrogance. It is abnormal to have no talent. But yours is not arrogance. It is completely treating yourself as superior and treating others as weak. But in fact, you are just a genius and have not grown up yet. So in the original work No matter how powerful you are, you will not force a genius to change his cultivation method, but you, a time traveler, have to do it, and the two are not related 😥😥😥😥😥