American Comic World: Extraordinary Sequence

To sum up, DC mixed with Marvel will collapse, everyone should leave.

First, it's like being a native; Second, it's playing reality as a game. You can read these two points if you don't mind. If you do, it's better to change the book as soon as possible.

Gotham. . . Then after reading some, there appeared the suspected Winter Soldier, Braised Eggman, and the description of the protagonist as being as strong as Captain America. It shows that it is not just the DC world, but also Marvel. . . To be honest, the protagonist is a native of another world and doesn't know much about DC or Marvel. . Still a mix of two. . I won't be surprised if characters from Jackie Chan's Adventures and Lego Animation appear later. After all, the book is called American Comics. . But hodgepodge is not my thing, so I'm leaving. Come on, author,

The protagonist is ugly + looks like a native + DC + Marvel + mutants

I feel like a different kind of native, I don't know the plot

Is this a direct comparison between the Joker and Harley Quinn? ? The Court of Owls is also gray. I wonder if Lil Wayne will become Batman? Finally, there is someone who doesn't take American comic characters seriously. I'm tired of seeing all kinds of licks about Batman and Superman's settings in the fandom. This sofa is quite interesting.

If I don't know the plot, what kind of comic should I write? I might as well write something original.

Brother, since you adopted someone, you have to teach him well. What's the point of raising a thief? Speechless

I guess the author wants to be a eunuch. There are several books that do this, first publish repetitive content and then disappear.

1️⃣The character description is too crude, for example, the character's clothing, appearance, expression, etc. Are not described. The same goes for the venue. There is not much description of where the incident occurred, how big the place is, what features it has, whether it is clean or not. Overall, it is dry. 2️⃣I have never used any writing techniques such as metaphor, contrast, parallelism, and personification. Sometimes the basics such as time, location and characters are not explained clearly. 3️⃣The power system design is too complicated and no one wants to understand it. But the advantage is that the plot is getting cleaner and there are no big bugs for the time being. The writing technique is too raw and needs improvement.

Is it rare for an author to not read comments or check for typos, sentences, too many words, or too many words? There are bound to be a few typos when reading a chapter. Readers will point them out, but they will not be corrected. This will greatly affect the reading experience.

Brother, at least you corrected the typos in your profile.

I think the writing is okay. Although the writing style is a bit bland and there are some anecdotes, at least I can keep reading. It's not like some authors who have good ideas but can't control their imagination.

There are typos in the introduction. . .

DC+Marvel+mutants, awesome and chaotic

221 And 222 are repeated

The sharp soldier is actually quite suitable for the soldier officer of the Punisher and the Hulk.