This Rebirth Is so Delicious

Tell a joke. Around 04, take the script test and kill to make money.

After reading Chapter 5, I can honestly say that this first love story is not that bad. The author went too far. I will check to see if there are other stories before commenting.

What kind of clown has been killing scripts in the past few years? You can make a lot of money just by copying a turn-based game

After reading about 10 chapters, I was confused when I saw the script killer. In fact, I quite like your writing style, author. Let's not talk about whether there was such a thing in 2002. Let's just say that I have never seen a few script killing shops now. It is a bit abrupt. It is not more acceptable to use other methods to get the first pot of gold 😰

In chapter 150, you haven't managed to get a single girl, so Liu Xiahui is still pregnant if you put this aside. It smells like a literary youth. Alas, it is not popular when it is written like this. Now everyone is an adult, not the literary youth of the past. Change the way you write to adapt to the trend.

I just want to ask if there are multiple female protagonists?

It's pretty good, but it's weird to change the heroine halfway through. Most of the first part is clearly written by Xu, but he suddenly found his first love?

I wrote so much about Xu, but then I turned around and ended up with my first love, which made me feel sick to my stomach.

The writing is okay, but I feel like the author went crazy with the script.

Half a step ahead is a genius, one step ahead is a lunatic. In the past few years, you have been writing scripts to make money. You are already more than ten steps ahead. What's more, now in 2023, everyone who writes scripts is dead and a big failure. It is better to change to writing prose or poetry to make money. It is famous and powerful, and can also attract women. If you want to do what you want, go to Han Han's way.

I feel like I can't stand it anymore, I don't have any sense of involvement, and I feel like I'm being reborn as waste.

All I can say is that killing the script has delayed your grades.

When I saw that the script was killed in 2004 and I still made money, I couldn't stand it anymore.

Your protagonist is too pretentious. If it were written like this on the shelves, others would have abandoned it long ago.

Writing a script is so boring. It makes no money and wastes a lot of time. The biggest poisonous point of this book! Even if you write two novels and publish them, you can become famous and earn at least dozens of times the money!

A bunch of nonsense with no sense of immersion at all

I think it's pretty good. The plot only lasted for two or three months, allowing the protagonist to make some money and improve his life. As long as the plot is not boring, there is no need to strictly pursue scientific rationality. I have seen more "reasonable" plots such as trading in stocks, buying lottery tickets, finding someone to help, etc., In other novels. The script may be a bit out of context, but it is still acceptable if it can write something new.

It's really baffling that two women choose one of two in a heavy rain. Do you think this is a female channel?

The most disgusting character in this book, Yuan Hua, and the second disgusting character, Tang Bai, are prostitutes. They are not cool at all. The protagonist is just like his son.

The script is the first pot of gold, and it's a bit entertaining.

Come on, I don't like to complain when I read books, but your writing is pretty good.