Martial Immortal in Reincarnation Paradise

Although, it's hard to explain in one sentence. The reincarnation fanfic seems simple but is actually very complicated. The author is probably a newbie. I suggest writing other fanfics. The reincarnation water is too deep.

This,,, and such? The protagonist knows from the beginning that he is the protagonist written by a certain author. How to write like this? , I believe that any kind of person knows that he is a puppet in other people's writings, and either wants to resist or is casual, anyway, there is an author who can tell him the truth.

Can the protagonist's armor be thrown away? The protagonist is a martial artist and still takes the physical strengthening route. What is the use of that armor? It doesn't feel as tough as the protagonist's body, and don't you think the armor doesn't match the protagonist's profession at all? Have you ever seen that melee fighter in Samsara wears armor?

The author can't write many words, the numerical value is too inflated

The author also likes the super dimensional martial arts fairy very much.

There are many authors who are speculating on the humanities of Samsara Paradise. They write dozens of books, and if there are no readers, they just leave it alone. If you write it, there will be so many readers to read your book. You are probably not overthinking it. Samsara Paradise only became popular after at least one million words. If you want to make money but don't write well, if you finish the book, will there be no readers? What readers like is whether your writing is good or not. Can't you figure it out?

After reading the whole article, the paragraphs are not divided well and it is not very comfortable to read. There are always a few words and many sentences are not fluent.

This section gives me a headache 😅

Author, please work hard to learn writing skills. You can do it now, but you won't be able to do this in the future. You are mainly setting your appetite for me. Your writing skills will improve as you write more.

The writing style is too impatient. I can tell that the author is like a student who cannot write essays and wants to write an 800-word essay.