The Heavens Begin with the Eight Parts of Tianlong

After watching the end of the Song Dynasty, I feel that it is too difficult to change history. Even if it succeeds, the Song Dynasty has been decayed to the root, and intrigues are unavoidable. It is better to rebuild a new dynasty after breaking it.

In fact, Swordsmanship in the Snow is somewhat toxic, and this is a flaw in the original work. The first-level King Kong, Celestial Statue, Land Immortal and other realms can fly into the sky, so why are they afraid of the mortal army? If they fly a few hundred meters into the sky, they will be invincible for a few thousand meters. Mortal armies cannot defeat them. Just throwing skills in the sky can kill all the armies, let alone casually taking the heads of generals. If the internal strength is almost gone, just fly away and hide in the mountains to slowly recover. In a world where great power belongs to oneself, mortals are really like ants, so why can they fight with others?

After reading it, it's really 6. I am enlightened against the fallen Arhat of Dharmakaya level, not to mention that the protagonist is not a person with a solid foundation in the real world, so you still want to fight Dharmakaya Arhat? Do you know how difficult it is for a group of people to do a half-step outside scene in Death Mission? And there is a world of difference between the exterior scenes and the Dharmakaya. You can still kill the fallen Arhat in the Dharmakaya realm. You are much better than those protagonists.

Pig's Foot is a modern man who knows Chinese medicine. Does it have anything to do with ancient internal strength? I traveled through time and found Beiming Magical Skills and Lingbo Weibu, and then I directly practiced Beiming by myself because I knew the acupoint knowledge. And because I communicated with Duan Yu, I directly learned Zhouyi and learned Lingbo Weibu directly. This pig's feet is so pretentious 😰 You make me unable to find a sense of substitution. It's just my personal opinion, please don't criticize me.

Gu Long's novels are too pretentious, and sometimes they feel like they're blabbering and pretending to be profound. A great master who was described as very awesome died in a very funny way.

I laughed when I saw the practice of Beiming Magic in the third chapter. The author wrote that the protagonist is a martial arts prodigy, and he finished the first move in a while, but then he said, "I don't have the internal strength yet, so I started to practice the second move... 😄, I really laughed to death."

Writing about Kunlun, I must help the scene. This is my youthful dream.

Da Feng's writing is a bit blurry, and the protagonist's presence is not strong. At this level, is there any point in scheming? Just kill Yuan Jing, who can do anything to the protagonist? Do we still have to wait for Yuan Jing to recruit troops and find allies before fighting? The protagonist is of the first rank, and his combat power is far superior to that of the first rank. Joan of Arc and Prince Huai should be of the third rank, but the protagonist is killed casually and uses Wei Yuan for a plan, which is a waste of time.

The plot at the beginning of Tianlong is problematic no matter how you think about it. Li Qiu Shui deliberately left the secret book, but it was still a picture of his own naked body. It's been too long and I can't remember clearly. It seems that Li Qiushui seduced Jiumozhi or Ding Chunqiu and wanted to kill Wu Yazi. Only ghosts can practice this kind of secrets

How is the copy of "Swordsmanship in the Snow" written? If you are bored, go to Qidian. I saw that Xu Fengnian is more defiant than Tang San, so I came to Zhutianliu to take a look.

In the serial version, Wang Yuyan (Wang Yuyan)'s martial arts is stronger than Murong Fu. I don't know why Jin Yong later made her weaker. In the serial version, Mrs. Wang is also a martial arts master and looks down on Murong and his son. (Original text) "Your cousin is a grown man, ten years older than you. He doesn't study well or make progress all day long. He is crazy and doesn't know what to do. His skills are not even as good as yours, and the Murong family has lost face to him.

Isn't it going to be like being a junior brother or apprentice again in the night world, while licking the academy?

If there really is no upper limit for Beiming, Ancestor Xiaoyao would have become a god and a Buddha long ago. There is an upper limit for living beings.

What's funny is that the proportion of pig's feet used by Jin Yong, Gu Long, Wen Ruian and others with swords is not high.

Seeing that there is no heroine color chart, I was ready to accept that there would be no heroine, but it turned out that there was a relationship scene between a man and a woman, which was really embarrassing.

It would be awkward to reveal the plot to someone you meet but you can't tell the source of the information.

There are a lot of logical inconsistencies in the middle, such as Taoist terminology, Buddhist terminology, detailed explanations of meridians, foundations of internal skills, detailed explanations of moves, general martial arts, even external skills, have certain visualization diagrams, such as Wu Qin Xi, which is to visualize the five animals. How could an ordinary person learn peerless martial arts in one go? You must know that Duan Yu himself is from a noble family, and they wanted him to learn martial arts since he was a child. He has a very good foundation in fighting. How can you, an ordinary person, compare with him.

Nanny article, the author likes to be a nanny

Just buying a house for the real world? Go and get a treasure trove? It would be better if you wrote about longevity. It feels like an aircraft carrier swatting mosquitoes.

+1 For writing more, it's very good 😁

Have you considered going to Jianlai?

Da Feng's night watchman is very popular, looking forward to it

Write a few more chapters every day. I read your first one and it was really not enough.

Keep it, wait and see when Xu Qi'an appears, I wonder if he will accept the girl

I'm looking forward to your Zhutianliu, the martial arts style is pretty good, just don't mix it with other content.

What's the story about Young People's Songs, I haven't read the original work?

In fact, the Night Chapter should have ended when Haotian awakened.

Kill Jeanne d'Arc and Yuan Jing quickly, they are annoying to watch.

Author, will you write that the color purple means good luck for four generations?