I Loaded the Bargaining App

Originally, the subject matter was okay, but once my ex-girlfriend played more roles, it became uncomfortable to watch. There were too many scenes, so I gave up.

It was very warm and comfortable to read. All the great novels have always been about getting rich, buying a house, a car, and having sex with internet celebrities. Basically, after dozens of chapters, it feels the same. Personally, I feel that when one is satisfied with material wealth, one always has to leave something behind. You are not short of money anymore, are you just left to eat and wait to die? Satisfying oneself and giving back to the society at the same time is not a holy spirit, but is in line with the moral values ​​of a normal Chinese citizen. Today's novels are all about egoism. The protagonist is called a bitch if he does a good deed and is a bit soft-hearted. I can't help but wonder what it's like in my heart even if it's like this in fantasy. I'm not even a house slave, I'm just saying this based on my feelings. There is no intention to disparage other people or books. Thank you all, thank the author, and thank you for the sunshine in the novel.

So disgusting, so embarrassing. So damn speechless

Nowadays, authors write novels for themselves, according to their own preferences, not the readers' preferences, so they often read novels.

I met them after watching a drama... The story goes like this (a poor boy and his childhood sweetheart. The poor boy went out to work in order to marry her... And was selected by the investment system outside... He killed everyone in the stock market... And made a lot of money... But he didn't tell her... During this period, something happened to her family... Her father passed away. She had a car accident... She needed an operation... The surgery cost more than 500,000 yuan... She knew that the protagonist was very poor and could not afford the money... If she told him this... He would help her at all costs... But she didn't want to drag him down (she loved him so much). At this time, it happened that the son of the village head of the same village had also liked her since he was a child, and came to her house to propose marriage. Willing to help her pay all the medical expenses... She married the village chief's son in tears... The protagonist was also busy with the company's affairs... He didn't care too much about her... The protagonist's parents didn't know the protagonist's current situation... They were afraid that he would be sad, so they didn't tell him... She was getting married... The protagonist knew It was already 6 months later when this happened... He returned from abroad to deal with the company's affairs... He immediately wanted to tell her the news that he was rich... He wanted to give her a surprise... He would go to see her... When he saw her... She was already pregnant... She was sitting in the garden, stroking her belly full of motherly glory...

One glance, ten lines, sixty-four chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Before leaving, if the author wants, you can read what I said below Your protagonist so far in your writing is a relatively paranoid person. After opening the store without achieving any results, I opened a second store. Just buy a farm. Still unwilling to use chemical fertilizers. It's just spending money for the sake of spending money. The money spent does no good. At least on these two things, yes. Maybe it seems to you like spending money to buy people's hearts. But in the eyes of readers, it's like spending money to raise rice bugs. All the people who are bargaining for you so far, except for your family and the people you have helped before, all the rest are your money. I said the protagonist is paranoid, but actually you know I said it very tactfully.

After reading the first chapter, I feel very excited, because I haven't seen such an eye-catching idea in many years. After reading Opening a Store and Recruiting People, I gained confidence in your writing style and decided to read this book. Halfway through the book, I can only say that if there were no emotional scenes, this book would definitely have more than twice as many readers. No wonder Qidian doesn't write about women () It's not that the love plot is not well designed, but it does not match the main tone of your book. You wrote a career line of tens of thousands of words, but suddenly ten chapters of writing about relationships are already very risky. Your career line is very interesting. I am sure you borrowed it from Qingshan Chuzui, and the style is very similar. At this time, your words have weight. But the emotional line suddenly becomes silly and white, as if it was written by a different person. The original logic of the writing is broken, and another set of idol drama logic is replaced. It is equivalent to screening your audience several times, leaving only the audience who come for the career line of your book, but are not particularly disgusted with such emotional lines. Too stupid. No wonder someone in the comment area asked you if you are a female author. The effort spent on the emotional line has had a negative effect. I feel for you that it is not worth it.

My ex-girlfriend is too poisonous, so I wrote it to troll her? I can't stand it anymore. . .

Is the author male or female? Have you watched too many idol dramas?

According to everyone's opinions, I spent a full nine hours today to overhaul the emotional drama, especially chapters 24 to 27. I almost re-wrote a new story. It was very enjoyable and I am personally very satisfied. Old book friends who are interested can go back and read it. Of course, it won't affect the plot if you don't watch it. Thanks again to all the book friends who gave their opinions and the big guys who have always supported Xianyu. Xianyu will definitely continue to work hard and write every chapter well.

It's a profit-oriented game, where the sincerity is exchanged for sincerity. It's just like the donations made by the rich in the United States. It's all to avoid inheritance taxes. Let alone enlightenment, it's a game driven by profits from beginning to end.

The main character's family members are really unlucky. They have all kinds of cancers, broken legs, and so on. Is it possible that his uncle will also have cancer later in the plot?

This can be regarded as a great novel, chasing an ex-girlfriend and having a love rival all the time. What do you want to express? ?

I haven't read much, and I'm really disgusted. I don't know if the classification is wrong. You said it should be about reality. You have a system. You said it's a cool story, but it also has an emotional line. I don't understand the main line. Maybe I read too little. It's about life, and it keeps interspersing with ex-girlfriends. It's really contradictory and disgusting. It's an unhappy story that doesn't live in life and is unrealistic. You should change it. If you can't read it clearly later, it's better to finish it off with your ex-girlfriend and go home. Or change your way of life and develop in another place. Believe it or not, if you have a system and you get rich, powerful people will continue to contact or investigate you later. When you reach a certain level of wealth, various high-level people will get to know you and eat you up. Don't say you have a system and you can live with millions. Then you have a system and it is contradictory. Anyway, no matter how I read this book, I found it contradictory. I felt uncomfortable and gave up. I'm sorry.

Overall good! It's just that the emotional scenes were too awkward and a bit baffling! This emotional drama should go to the romance category! It's so embarrassing😅

Very well written, looking forward to it. I look forward to the protagonist creating an environment where sincerity can be exchanged for sincerity, so that good people can become better people and the industry can improve. As the saying goes, if you achieve great things and benefit the world at the same time, you still have to have the world in mind when you reach this level. Study like Tengda

It looks crooked when you look at it, garbage.

Goldfinger is very good, but the plot is a bit speechless and makes my head hurt...

Ten million flat floors in the magic city? You mean the suburbs?

Newcomers and new books, please support me and read them! You can feel free to express your suggestions and ideas here. As long as Xianyu can do it, I will try my best to satisfy you. I wish all the handsome guys who voted for the program will be wealthy, the beauties will always be as beautiful as flowers, and the ones in the middle will also be delicious. I love you~

How should I put it? As a bookworm with ten books (this one is a small one), I rarely read novels in recent times, because there are fewer and fewer novels that suit my taste. This book feels like it can suit my taste, maybe because of the new subject matter, and of course the author's writing skills are also good. . I hope the author will work hard. The more you write, the better, and don't go to the back to pull your hips. . . . If it doesn't go down, give me more updates. Thanks!

Regardless of whether it's good for you or not, if you meet someone who posts links every now and then to bargain, it's good, but you may not necessarily click on it to bargain.

1. Your ex-girlfriend is awesome and beautiful, but she actually doesn't like you. Don't worry, this is reality. In fact, the main character is defeated in the first picture, and the rest are all before death yy 2. There are not many people who chop you up every day, you must know how to respect people, not tools, and you are not money. He's not God either. He makes hair every day. Do you understand what a dick is?

Good book, very warm. I haven't felt so comfortable reading it for a long time. Please support it

Don't read it, it's a bunch of shitty stories. Who can see that you have been obsessed with the seven-year response. I thought it was a good idea, but it was directly poisoned in the seventh chapter. What the hell

This book won't go far. What you bargain for is favors. Every time you ask these relatives and friends to bargain, once or twice is fine, but who can bear it if it's too much? It's interesting at first glance, but the more you read it, the more awkward it becomes. So, book friends, I'll leave it now.

The first three chapters make people want to read on. Whether it's the sense of humor in the first chapter or Goldfinger's insight into people's hearts, they are all eye-catching! But you started poisoning later? Did you hire someone to write the first three chapters? Ah? I can't write the emotional line and I have to force it to be awkward. I can't stand it anymore.

If you can't write emotional scenes, don't write them. Say goodbye.

I can't stand it anymore. It's really disgusting to pretend so bluntly just to pretend to be B. The plot is dry and thin, and anyone with a high school Chinese language score of 100 or above would not be able to write with this quality.

To be honest, I was very attracted to it at first. The subject matter is very novel. The first hundred chapters are great, but the main plot becomes a bit confusing later on. I saw Chapter 131 and haven't read it for a while. Now I clicked in and found that it is finished. It didn't take long? Why is it over? Do I still need to read what I haven't finished yet?