Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Returns from Ultraman

How should I put it? It just feels dry when I read it. I can't say what's not good about it. It just feels weird.

Dude, your plot is exactly as it was in the original work, just like you changed the protagonist. The protagonist doesn't look like he has grown up at all, he is silly, innocent, and decayed. It is also recommended that what each person says should be divided into separate paragraphs. Finally, I hope you don't write Ultraman as an ordinary human being with Ultraman's power, but unable to transform into Ultraman's huge body. It would be best if a giant Ultraman rises from the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River and beats the dragons to give humans a little alien shock. Conflicts between worldviews and patterns are often more interesting. The writing is not very good, the details are not quite right, and some of the plots are awkward. Keep up the good work!

Now that we have Kamen Rider Lu Mingfei and Ultra Lu Mingfei, we just need a team.

Lu Mingfei adds another general to the universe

Lu Mingfei has been really busy recently, traveling frequently to various worlds.

Conclusion: The author's writing is acceptable, the plot design is messy, and the character's character is extremely toxic.

Ultraman is a deus ex machina 😍

Not only that, I just saw one traveling to the west. There are even those with magnetic fields.

You are just a novice who has not experienced the polishing of the Ultra World at all. You are forward-thinking and unable to do anything well. Have you really been to other worlds? Or do you really have that many experiences? With so much experience, it's impossible to be so immature

All I can say is that the author's writing skills need to be further refined.

Join in the fun and hope it gets better and better (I've had this idea for a long time, but I didn't expect there would actually be a book)

The new Lu Mingfei begins to rush to the battlefield! ! !

The idea is good, but the layout of the plot is not interesting. Many of the climax plots that should be written in detail are written like ordinary novels, which is difficult to write. It is recommended that the plot of the dragon fight should be extended. Don't start with the fight, then everyone starts fighting, and then the fight ends. This is not interesting. After watching the battle plot, there is no impression in my mind. So the battle process between the protagonist and the dragon needs to be extended, such as what moves the opposite dragon used, what effects they had, and what impact it had on the scene. Then how did the protagonist respond, what moves did he use to deal with it, and what was the effect. Then write about how the protagonist seizes the opponent's weaknesses and what kind of damage is caused. Some psychological activities and environmental descriptions should be inserted into it. Then the dragon on the opposite side struggles for a while, and finally, a very important point, what about the protagonist's light skills? As for the description of the scene where the protagonist kills his opponent, why do I have no impression at all after reading it?

No, why doesn't that professor know what Ultraman is? Lu Mingfei's world has a tokusatsu drama called Ultraman, right?

Conclusion, a new book by a newcomer, the author is not sure and slipped away

Is there Lu Mingfei who came back from Puella Magi Madoka Magica as a magical girl?

Now that you're already Ultraman, why go to the academy to play house? You're almost losing your star rating