Players in an Infinite Game

Your Qin Empire failed to maintain its momentum from the very beginning. It's absurd that it could have managed to operate for hundreds of years, conquering the entire world, annexing lands, allowing powerful clans to grow stronger, establishing incredibly long and terrifying grain routes, implementing the inhumane Legalist laws, dealing with the Little Ice Age that lasted for over 200 years, and…

Judging by the difficulty of the protagonist's game trials, the death rate for ordinary players would probably be off the charts. It's not simply a matter of adding attributes to pass; for example, in the first two dungeons, even if an ordinary player has exceptional attributes across the board, they're doomed if their skills aren't good enough to exploit the bugs.

This is way too much of a pressure on the protagonist's level; it's completely unnecessary. He's already capable of creating his own small world and he's only a first-tier newbie? That's ridiculous.

It's so discouraging, the difficulty is insane, and you only survive because the protagonist is the protagonist.

What was that in the beginning? If it's a time travel story, why bring up Qin Shi Huang and Fusu? Why not just create a parallel world? Why start padding the word count in the very first chapter to disgust people?

I couldn't even finish the first instance; the protagonist is so stupid, he just survives because of his plot armor. Goodbye.

Authors these days only care about completing their works to sell copyrights, without considering the logic of the stories.

I saw someone comment that it was written like a children's game. The part about developing skills was fine, but the part about teaming up with someone you'd only met once to act as a babysitter was unbearable.

I've read up to chapter 137, and it feels quite bland. In terms of combat power, the protagonist is currently at Tier 1, has a small world, and a Tier 9 contract item 😅. Don't you think that's a bit strange? Also, I feel that your writing is a bit too bland, almost purely narrative, and the interactions between the characters are a bit stiff.

Writing novels requires logic... Some things can't be explained by forcing them together. Novels need logic, but reality doesn't...