
In Konoha, I Want to Become Hokage
人在木叶,我要当火影
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 714k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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225Chapters
4.7kRecommendations
36kFans
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Aren't you an alien too? And isn't your technology indigenous?
The contrast between the beginning and the end is too great. It was very low-key at the beginning, but suddenly it started with the betrayal of the village. The transition was also very abrupt. Then he started acting weird. He killed Gamabunta, Jiraiya, and Minato Namikaze. He didn't kill the disgusting Danzo, but went to take revenge on Konoha.
I'm Shennong, and after reading over a hundred chapters, I'm speechless. A system with practically no presence, and this talk of health and wellness? What does the protagonist's habit have to do with health and wellness? He constantly suppresses his strength; his Observation Haki and physical abilities don't improve at all—he's just playing around. In a world where bloodlines reign supreme, he doesn't provide any cheat codes like those from One Piece. The more I read, the more toxic it becomes.
Forced conflict, killing mindless supporting characters is one thing, but the Third and Fourth Hokage were quite calm, and you didn't even offer a single explanation. Then you act all wronged, angry, and furious. From now on, you'll be constantly provoked, and eventually the entire ninja world will fight you, right? 💀
New chapter, spoilers for the plot, really... Spoilers ahead, I don't want to watch anymore.
Shennong persuaded him to quit The first fifty chapters were good, but the later chapters fell apart in an attempt to advance the plot. No wonder it wasn't popular. The plot of betraying the village already had flaws in its logic, and then adding the protagonist's suffering made it even more absurd. It forced the protagonist to kill his close friend, Minato Namikaze. In this plot
The writing is terrible. They were all powerful, yet Konoha treated them like this. The plot twists are especially disjointed.
The last time I saw such a disgusting book was the last time...
The part where the protagonist betrays the village was so forced, I couldn't bear to watch it. It's like a scene from a Qiong Yao drama from many years ago: someone is wronged, but I just won't speak up, I just accept it, I cry and make a scene, I go to extremes, but I just won't clarify things. They insist on waiting until they've investigated the matter thoroughly and the truth comes out before they come begging to me. The beginning was quite good, but I really didn't want to read any further.
The sudden defection from the village was too abrupt and felt incredibly illogical! I'm outta here.