Demon Slayer Thunder

Eunuch...

My heart is beating, love is like fire~

The current quality can be said to be the best among Demon Slayers. Come on, author.

Chapter 14 poisoned my buddy to death. Are Japanese women so proud during the Meiji Restoration era? After rescuing you, he would just show a cold face and ask someone to send you to learn swordsmanship? Then the protagonist is at a fucking loss to deal with it? What a fucking hardcore Asasi!

Is Butterfly Ninja the heroine? There's also Kanahu

Deleted some posts. Disturbing. It's okay to say that my writing is not good, but others will attack me personally. I am a very open-minded person. If you say something is wrong with me, I will change it if I think it is appropriate. Even if I don't use it, I will leave it there without deleting it. After all, it is my first time to write a book, and there are many shortcomings. If I open the next book, I will definitely make progress. Post it here. Oh, as for the group... Let's wait until it is put on the shelves (bald head)

Good guy, it's better to focus on your studies first. Update more when you have time. It's pretty good. Don't be a eunuch. A new eunuch loses popularity. A eunuch once will have a second time and a third time. Many old authors have reached the bottom like this and have failed to recover.

The protagonist is either being beaten or on the way to being beaten. At the end of every battle, he collapses from exhaustion. He collapses after the ultimate counter-attack, and then when he collapses, he can still see someone (referring to friendly support) at the last glance. The protagonist has a lot of talent, and if there is a cheat in the marriage, it almost capsizes.

Seeing 48, Tanjiro slashed Muzan's neck with a knife, and the protagonist's combat prowess started to go wrong. The combat prowess of the back was suppressed. It depends on what you can accept. After that, Muzan was beaten by Tomioka, then in the trial, and then in the train. Hey, it's obviously pretty good as written above. I think the protagonist's talent is unparalleled for Tanjiro. The way to defeat countless times after defeating once is a bit not to my taste.

Your emotional drama is written like a crazy person's sexual drama. It can be said that you have no experience and it is embarrassing as hell. It is very well written. Don't write it next time. Please

There are ten skill points for upgrading to level three. I don't add any to experience what it's like before killing ghosts. I insist on adding points during the battle. I'm sick.

If you want to be a eunuch, just be a eunuch. Why do you have to write a "letter"? Whitewash yourself?

Let me talk about my reading experience. First of all, I have watched this anime, but I didn't watch it seriously. I just skipped it and didn't memorize each character carefully. The biggest impression I had was the guy with three wives. The original anime has flesh and blood, and each character has a vivid story, but you don't feel this in your work. Animation is different from novels. Things that can be solved by a single picture in animation need to be pushed through writing and plot. Anime can be fast-paced, but novels cannot. Novels need plot and characterization to deepen readers' impressions. A character can be remembered by readers with his unique clothes and hairstyle in comics, which is why there are so many strangely dressed people in comics. But novels are not good, they need in-depth depiction of the plot to promote, and there cannot be too many characters, it is easy to steal the scene. You have too many roles, too complex, and they appear too quickly. I don't know who you are focusing on writing about. It feels like the author was moved by the work and started writing without thinking about what to write (the main line). In the end, it just followed the plot. Writing a novel as if it were a long day means that there is no central characterization and no room for readers to digest those characters.

Don't get involved in politics. This is inside the wall. If you report you, the book will be gone, and there will be a lot of noise down there. What's more, the books are all Japanese. There will definitely be many people down there who want to kill them all. Although they are timid in reality, they are not afraid of anything now that they are online.

Author, learn about it

In fact, if the protagonist doesn't know the content, he might as well just be a native. Even if you don't know all the content, it's good to know the general content.

Where is the author's home? I bought a few kilograms of fruit and wanted to pay you a visit.

Sure enough, hahaha, I knew I wanted a eunuch since I was not punctual last time, bastard🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿

Infinite City has been released, it's time for inspiration to come

Author, can you please give me an accurate word on whether you will resume serialization?

No, bro, haven't you updated yet? I'm so anxious to wait.