Siheyuan, I Am He Yuyu's Classmate

Everything else can be written, but it's okay to be a time traveler without a golden finger, but at first I didn't know the plot and almost starved to death. Is this really the ability of a time traveler? You might as well just write a localized protagonist, which won't bring any sense of involvement anyway. At least a localized protagonist won't arouse readers' high expectations for the protagonist! You will only look like a coward who is a time traveler!

​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: I've just subscribed to a chapter and asked here! The author's writing style is quite good, but I don't understand why he wrote such a book? First, pig's feet have neither the skills of the previous life nor the golden finger, so isn't the identity of this time traveler unnecessary? Secondly, this is the worst pig's trotter in the Siheyuan fan fiction. After traveling through time for a year and a half, there is no one left to eat grass!                                                                                                                                                                              There are so many fanfictions about the Siheyuan, because the people and things in it seem to have exploded the three views now, so whether you go through it, torture animals, or jump out of the Siheyuan to build a country, it is quite refreshing for readers to enter it! You have nothing, why are you just writing about filial piety for people to read? In my opinion, this book is like a modern social animal who travels to the world of courtyard houses and continues to be a social animal, and by the way, some short stories about family life happened! There is really no motivation to watch! If it weren't for the author's excellent writing and narration, this book would have been thrown to death!

The life described by the author is like a fairy tale world. The people and things around him have become beautiful. There is no sloppiness or filthiness. It is like a pool of stagnant water with no waves. The ups and downs in the world are only sweet. What is the meaning of writing like this?

Each character is written in turn. It's too detailed. Pig's Foot and his family are enough. It's written in turns. There are also the third uncle and his family, the second uncle and his family, Silly Zhu and Damao's two families, their natal family, the first uncle and his wife. It's so fragmented that I'm almost numb...

The writing is good, and I will give you the monthly ticket. I have read the drama "Siheyuan" and also read the fanfic. But there are no people like you who enjoy hardships and live hard. To be honest, sometimes I would like to travel through time when my mind is empty, but after thinking about it, I would be worse off than dead without Goldfinger, especially in the countryside. I have seen with my own eyes adobe houses, people who eat a pound of noodles for a meal, lived in a dark house with no electricity on cloudy days, and walked on a dirt road with three pounds of mud after it rained. It is only because of the comparison that I know how good life is now.

The writing is good, but reading the novel is not exciting and not attractive enough. The time-travelers without golden fingers are not much different from ordinary people. It might have been more than ten or twenty years ago.

In the early stage, a hundred or ten pictures are fine, but the later they are, the worse they are. Are you writing novels or classical Chinese? You are trying to be clever and superfluous.

After seeing your profile, there is only one way out, writing. There is a kind of writing that is not good but safe. If you fall in love with literature, don't think about becoming famous and starting a family. Just support the whole family.

After seeing just over 100 photos, I suddenly realized that the protagonist has become less and less present. There are too many descriptions of the lives of other people in the courtyard, and the description of the protagonist has been too compressed.

It's new and has a bit of a flavor of that era. The salary is wrong. The author said that he asked the old man. I think you either asked the wrong person or you heard it wrong. My family has a single household and has lived in a large state-owned coal mine since the age of four. My dad is the chef squad leader and works part-time at a small stove. My dad has two brothers, a material supply station and a welder. The parents of my classmates and friends all work in the same company. They know a lot about household registration, income, succession, and work-related injury compensation. First of all, The salary of an apprentice is about 18 yuan, and the difference is very small. After one to three years, the formal worker is a first-level worker. At this time, the salary is more than 30 yuan, a few administrative positions are less than 30, technical positions are about 33, heavy physical positions are a little higher, and the salary of each level of technical positions is 17% higher than the previous level. Succession must start from the apprenticeship. The maximum apprenticeship period is one year. If it is a non-technical position, there is no apprenticeship. It starts from the first-level worker, and the seniority is not inheritable. Another point is that there is no overtime pay in state-owned enterprises. There is a bonus for completing the task, which is shared equally by everyone.

The first part was pretty good, but the second part felt like it was basically a running account. Maybe the author wanted to try something, but it was obviously unsuccessful, and instead it felt like it was all in pieces!

First of all, let me talk about the advantages of Chapter 260 when I fully ordered it. The book is good, the writing style is smooth and in-depth, and the shortcomings of the chronicle are above average. The timeline is too messy. It's too bad. From chapter 100 onwards, the introductions of many chapters do not match up with the time and background of the characters. They are inconsistent and not rigorous. For example, the jokes and other characters are not satisfactory. After all, this is a fanfic. The timeline must be clear (to be honest, I am actually planning to make a table to clarify the birth and age of the main characters). What to do during the time period, but as soon as I thought about it, I forgot about it. First, I was lazy, but it was a bit like looking for trouble, so I didn't do it.) The author did not have a clear time plan and the writing was messy. It looked terrible and gave me a headache. I came up to complain about this. I hope the author can see 😁😁 and I will continue to support you 🤝🤝

The more I read similar novels, the less interesting they become, so I couldn't help but participate! Whether it's good or not, I'll try to make it more interesting as written! Generally speaking, it is a single heroine, and we do not encourage people who are not married to have children! It's neither moral nor responsible!

The writing is quite immersive. Unlike other novels where you eat meat and seafood every day, you don't feel like you are living in that era at all.

There are so many contradictions

So well written. The writing is good. Realistic portrayal. In the courtyard again. Can be ranked first

I have read more than 200 chapters. The first part is okay, but the second part contains too much life insights and is too preachy.

I read about 100 chapters for about eight hours. I usually read novels at a glance and read ten lines at a time. When listening to books, I have to read them at double speed. There are few online articles that make me so immersed in reading. I still haven't finished reading the last chapter. I don't follow books. See you next month.

The writing is still a bit exaggerated! As a time traveler, my children don't have enough to eat and I don't need money to go back and read to my brothers and sisters!

The writing is messy and looks laborious

Now I know that writing a book is not easy. I was so angry after reading the book that I started trying to write it. It cost me thousands to tens of thousands, and before I knew it, it was hundreds of thousands! Thank you for the encouragement and support!

The writing is ok Good luck to the author.

It's both detailed and concise, and the writing is good. Keep writing and I'll follow along.

I have read many Siheyuan novels, and this one is the most satisfying to me. Big cheers for the author!

The final chapters were so poorly written

It seems to be the only one that is not a systematic text.

It's okay to write. I've given you the recommendation votes. I hope to update it twice.

Overall good and unique. But it's too fragmented and incoherent; it's too abrupt, like publishing a novel in a foreign country, being a teacher, and giving my sister and Lou's "tips" to look awesome.

New book released "Siheyuan: Silly Zhu's Not Silly Begins from Marriage" Silly Zhu is no longer stupid, and even got married and lost his daughter-in-law. What should the uncle Yi Zhonghai do? What do Widow Qin think? Can the Third Master Yan Laoji scheme against Silly Zhu? Xu Damao and Silly Zhu are fighting? They are all small people, struggling hard in a special period, just for the most basic requirements of life. Are they demanding too much?

The story of an ordinary family, a reasonable yet slightly exaggerated journey of hard work and growth, we are all dream chasers! This book is well prepared and contains many manuscripts, ensuring that reading is enjoyable and enjoyable without being mindless!