Regaining Freedom from Tokyo

The writing is very good, especially the details and some metaphors. But the plot is a bit confusing. A time traveler only comes into contact with one female artist. It feels like the male protagonist is living in a social cocoon. Moreover, he is also very lazy in his career and his desire for material things is too low.

Not bad, come on. By the way, send me a few pictures of my dishes❤️

I have read the latest chapter of this book, and I would like to express my feelings about reading it. The author's writing style in describing emotions is very stable, and it is a plain but interesting plot. It has a single female protagonist, and you can completely trust the author in the emotional drama. It is slightly sweet and not easy to get bored. Judging from the current development, it is probably a single female protagonist. The author's writing style expresses how a normal person would behave when he traveled to Tokyo of that era. It is not obtrusive. Although the protagonist's past life is not introduced in detail, it does not affect the reading. The characters are established very steadily. This book has the feeling of a group portrait. The description of basically every character is not thin and vivid. As for the question, the protagonist needs to make progress in his career. The award has been given for too long. It's almost 300 chapters. I also hope that the relationship with Akina will make some progress. Some are too long. The writing may be a bit messy, but this book can be regarded as a good book among Japanese light novels. It is a pity that the author's update time was unstable at that time, otherwise the results would be much better than now.

Cai Cai~

Come on, be a person who warms Akina and her fans

I know about Shuiqun every day. If I have time, I might as well update more about Shuiqun.

La La La

There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. If I transform Hamlet into Harry Potter, that must be my problem. If you find this kind of problem, please be sure to leave me a message and remind me. If it is really severe OOC, I will definitely modify it, but if it is mild OOC and involves the outline and main line, I may not dare to change it. Anyway, thank you for your suggestions and support~

Old ghost, use your precious land to promote it

This book is as rambling and aimless as the main character! Sometimes a little delicate and artificial!

Emotionally, it has the delicate feeling of Japanese literature that soaks into the heart like the first snow, and the struggle process also has the trivial peace of reality. However, it feels a bit weak when it is too close to reality. In addition, the perspective is a bit narrow, and there is too little indirect foil. Specifically speaking of the content, there are too few media appearances, and the protagonist's journey is too subjective. It would be better to have more other perspectives. In addition, it can be seen that the author is laying out the layout slowly. More than 200 chapters are just the beginning. The progress bar is too short. It is heart-wrenching to read. I was afraid that I would finish it all in one go, but I finished it in one go...

If you see the author asking for criticism, just say a few words. These two sentences have no other meaning, they are just two sentences. As for what two sentences mean, it's just two sentences. Then here comes the key point. The content is good, the pace is a little slow, and the emotional details are very delicate. It feels like the comfort of the breeze blowing on your face when spring comes (of course, everyone has their own opinion) but... The update time is really weird... Finally, I want to cheat (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵)

Come on, author, update, work hard to finish writing, don't go to the palace

Sorry, I caught the flu again.

What you say will only break, not cut, you said that right?

Old ghost, don't cut it 😭😭😭😭

Don't you want to write it down? It's very beautiful. Don't disappear, ghost.

The innocent single heroine is great! It's also good to start a career by copying books! It's just a lack of long-term goals, no real ambition, and just making money, which is meaningless. After the relationship is established, there is no desire to subscribe. It is foreseeable that the author still wants to write many chapters, and his grades will inevitably drop, and then he will enter the palace~ When will he publish a new book? As long as you learn lessons and don't fool people, I am still willing to support you.

It's not the wrong book title, it's really so freeing

The writing about love is really good, but the writing about career is a mess.