Little Red Riding Hood Is Challenging the Dragons

Let's talk about the bad points first: it's very unfriendly to those who don't know the second world. I'm completely confused as I haven't watched The Night of the Full Moon, and I'm forced to join a force at the beginning. The author doesn't really think that the readers have any strange habits. He likes the feeling of being threatened and forced, and it's based on the strength of the protagonist at the beginning. It's simply... Hey, I've only written this much, and I really don't want a fan of a work I like to be like this.

All cards come from the game Full Moon Night Guys, here are the in-game images of the Full Moon Night cards that appear in the book. There will be long-term updates here in the future.

It is recommended that the author open a single chapter to briefly introduce the world view and related settings of the Night of the Full Moon game. Otherwise, for readers who do not know about the Night of the Full Moon, some parts may be a little unclear. For example, I still don't understand what the so-called trial is. Is it some kind of weight that will attract the gaze of the God of Death?

Although I really like the full moon night, it's a pity that you don't have much to do with the full moon night, and then you started off with a disgusting Midas. What do you mean?

NND Why is the heroine not a little carpenter?

Let's not talk about the combat power. After all, the map has been changed, but did you make the protagonist so humble? (Take it as a dog😃) I thought the system was failing, but I didn't expect a "mastermind" to appear. When I accepted this setting, you gave me the final blow. I wondered if this was a single wear, and it also came with a "gift"? The subject matter is niche and writing is not easy. Take care, author!

It's really a tear-down. First, the first five chapters describe how difficult it is for the protagonist to live in a world of full moon nights, and then in the sixth chapter, he is forced to be a dog. I thought this was a fanfic, but this is what happened. You really have to suppress it first and then suppress it, right?

What I hate the most is fanfics that change the setting without changing the plot.

Seriously. Just write Little Red Riding Hood properly, but you have to add the tyrant Midas and the unknown gods. Do you know that this is very messy? If you write about gods, it is equivalent to locking the upper limit. No matter how strong you are, you can't compare with him. How can we enjoy watching this? The second thing is the donkey ears. We are here to see a new story arising from the collision between dragons and Little Red Riding Hood, not the story of Little Red Riding Hood and the night of the full moon. Do you understand?

The Riddler flavor is too strong, especially the chapters about the battle between Midas and the protagonist. To be honest, it was more Riddler than the Dragon Clan 🤣

The writing style is okay, and there are some poisonous points, but it is relatively small and acceptable. However, the audience is too small, and it is very extreme. Only people who have played Night of the Full Moon and watched Dragons can understand it. The plot is obscure and difficult to understand. It can be expected that the results on the shelves are average, and the probability of eunuchs is extremely high 😴

The writing style is relatively clear, which is average among Dragon Clan fans. The expansion of the world view is quite creative. The main characters and Xia Mi are very interesting in drawing cards in their heads. The author's explanation is also okay. Although being "threatened" by Mr. Daye may be considered a poisonous point, the flaws are not concealed. Recommended reading

Everything was just Lu Mingfei's fantasy before he went crazy. Kassel College is actually Kassel Park. The so-called train is just a green train during the smuggling process. The scene where the students in the entrance test classroom are dancing wildly is the collective emotional collapse of the colleagues after learning that they were deceived into Myanmar. Nono is the team leader of Piggy, and a group of professors are the trainers. Caesar is a European stowaway who loves to brag about being a noble. Fingel is Lu Mingfei's roommate. He has been tortured for several years and is often beaten for failing to meet the standards of his business. Chu Zihang is Lu Mingfei's fantasy. The eldest son of his own school was also imprisoned like him to comfort himself. On the first day of freedom, someone ran away and was shot dead by the security guard. The Dragon King was beaten several times later because he was trying to escape and was finally discovered. He was locked up in a small dark room and tortured. Therefore, Lu Mingfei's fantasy scenes were all dark and closed places such as underwater tombs and abandoned subway stations. The subsequent trip to Japan was about the transfer of personnel in the Kassel Park. The bumps in the plane were the jeep with the windows covered. The Japanese branch was also Lu Mingfei's fantasy in the new park. The diving was about a few people who had just arrived in the new park and were unskilled in business and were imprisoned in a water prison. There was a fire in the back and they were all scenes of various people escaping and being shot. Cowherd There are Lu Mingfei and several people in the shop. They were spotted by the boss because of their beauty and were forced to serve high-ranking officials. Uesugi Eri is a mute girl who was imprisoned. Herzog is the park manager. When he raped Eri, Lu Mingfei caught him. Lu Mingfei accidentally kidnapped the manager and started to run away. Therefore, there will be an abstract scene of two people fighting and traveling throughout Japan. In the end, he was rescued and returned to China, but he was already crazy. The only conscious part was in the mental hospital. Because he was treated with drugs, Chu Zihang disappeared because he was the only character imagined in his experience in Myanmar, but he started a new delusion, that is, the Nibelungen and subsequent experiences.

I don't know what the setting is at the beginning. I finally saw a night with a full moon. As a result, the protagonist was used as a dog by a four-legged lizard at the beginning. If the file had not been deleted, the protagonist's strength before time travel would have been enough to kill it.

Suggestions Chapter First of all, I think the plot is reasonable, so I won't make any comments. I mainly give the author some suggestions on writing issues. I have now finished reading the second Qinling Dragon Song, and I feel that there are two serious problems: 1. Too much montage technique is used, which leads to serious fragmentation of reading. Especially in one chapter, the three perspectives of Fenrir, Ye and the protagonist are constantly switched back and forth, which greatly affects the reading experience. It is recommended that the author use montage techniques as much as possible in the future to ensure the continuity of the plot in chapters 4 and 5. 2 The description of the fight is too detailed. I know that the author wants to write the fight well so that readers can have a sense of the picture, but the author believes that your fight plot is too long and smelly. You can read it (starting with Guhuo Bird). Although this book is eunuch, the fight scene is the best book I think I have written. The author can refer to it. Finally, I hope the author can finish this book. After all, there are really very few people who can play with the full moon night.

Come on, you are really ecstatic about being a double cook for me.

Full moon night. . . If you follow the game completely, this intensity is too high. I just don't know what mode the author plans to write. I personally only play the classic diary, and I can't understand the later stuff. So I would like to ask if the author can write about that aspect?

It's so funny that it can't break my defense

This update is too slow

You guys also update randomly, right?

Good guy, there are still people writing Full Moon fanfics these days. I wish you longevity.