Games Invade Reality: the Almighty Master

Wasted my two coins, died from poison in Chapter 94

I saw 81 (paid chapter), let me tell you the author's current problems: ① Xiaobai feels that it is too high. It doesn't mean that you have to express the text in a very literary and strict manner, but a lot of what you say is expressed verbally, which is not good. ②This is a common problem in data writing, but the author is currently more guilty of this. There is a long explanation in the chapter of The Lord of the Rings. Although it is very detailed, it will give readers a bad feeling. It is best not to write it like this before it is put on the shelf. ③There are too many pretense scenes, and the important thing is that they are all vulgar pretense. In other words, once you do something, a bunch of people will babble, and a bunch of people here will shout "nb", and a bunch of people there will shout "nb," and they will be repeated by another subject. If you only have these things in your brain when writing, you will be finished. Intermediate level b is similar to the section where Jian Lai comes. It is preceded by a long period of preparation, with the sentence "Jian Lai", and then left blank. It is concise and powerful, giving readers room to imagine instead of expressing themselves verbally. These are the things that come to mind right now. Then there are also advantages for the current author. ① It is true that all members have traveled through time together, and it is also true that my wife has traveled through time together (meaning Ruyi), but the speech and time travel by you, the ultimate dog licker of a fat man, are very interesting. It cannot be said to be very innovative, but at least it makes me willing to continue spending money to reluctantly watch the follow-up. ②The relationship between roommates is quite realistic and I found it quite interesting. Above. Also, I don't mean to make things difficult for the author. I made a long review for you at that time, and now I've spent money to read it. I feel that you are like a cub I raised, and naturally I hope you can get better. I can feel that this is your first time writing a book, and you hope to keep up the good work.

Hiss~ This introduction is so interesting, Goblin, Wild Boar, Lizard Maid. I can't imagine it... So when it happens, I want to see if it's true🤪

Personally, I suggest that you change the high-dimensional civilization at the beginning to an unknown existence, or an unknown existence, and don't introduce it in advance to destroy the earth. Otherwise, do you think that in the context you wrote, there will be a harmonious situation like the author's, where the country takes over everything and the whole society works hard for one goal, saving mankind. How can it be like what the author writes, where everyone feels completely indifferent?

First of all, this fat guy is no longer a licker. I seriously suspect that he has a tendency to be a cuckold. Secondly, I really can't get used to the matter of Ning Xiaotong's whitewash. If it were a harem story, I would really abandon it. I feel like Li Zhiwei is about to become a harem. Finally, the people in the student union are too smart, especially Li Zhiwei

Let me make a small review: The game invades the world. It is a very common routine, but it has a different start. I personally think it is quite good. The weird and eclectic talent effects show that even if the author gives the protagonist all the tricks, he may not be invincible, such as the magical talent of 50/50 (which indicates that there may be even weirder talents, such as forcibly taking others away with one's own death and not being able to resurrect, or weird talents that take away other people's talents). I feel that this book follows the invincible flow. I personally like the invincible flow, and I feel that it is pretty good. What's surprising is that the author's writing style is still online, at least it's not a very straightforward narrative, it's even above the standard. I haven't seen any female protagonists so far, and I don't know if there are multiple female protagonists, single female protagonists, or no female protagonists (I personally like multiple female protagonists, but I don't reject book friends who like single female protagonists or no female protagonists, and I don't attack these book friends. I hope you don't make a fuss, just enjoy reading the book, and quit if you don't like it), but I like this book very much. My cousin has a good personality and doesn't cause trouble to the protagonist. She is typically soft on the outside but strong on the inside. My cousin is a big plus. Overall, this is a very good book that I think is good. It may not be as good as the masterpieces of the originator of a certain style such as Mechanic (Han Technician) and Chat Group (Squirrel Air), but I personally think this book has potential - at least it can be regarded as a good book that is not bad and worth reading. And I always feel that the author has the appearance of a great god, avoiding the lightning and poisonous points that should be avoided. If he writes at the current pace, he will not be able to become a god, but I think Huo Yi can still do it. I hope the author can get the opportunities he deserves (referring to recommendation or py transactions with other authors, etc.), And the book he writes can become a big hit. It's true that I have praised so many shortcomings... The author will update quickly. It's not enough to read. I may have kept the book and sent it away~ (and my cousin Ruyi Saigao!) The above views are purely the author's personal views and represent only the author himself. I do not exclude the opinions of other readers and do not participate in quarrels. After all, everyone has their own opinions. The above, I wish you all a happy reading~

I saw Chapter 94, tell me your feelings. Overall, it is a good novel. As the author said, this book is a short novel with a lot of pretense and cliches, but it is undeniable that it is still good. It can be used as a way to pass the time. As for the data, some people may think that the author cannot grasp the calculations in the later stage, and errors may occur and conflicts between the previous and later settings. But in fact, as long as it is not too obvious, ordinary readers will not have the patience to calculate and pay attention. Most of the descriptions of the data are actually another kind of refreshing performance, that is, the refreshing points brought about by the improvement of the characters. Having talked about the advantages, the next step is definitely the shortcomings, or what I personally care about. In Chapter 80, a reader named Wei Hua's speech expressed my point of view very well. I'm actually very curious about this question, why is it necessary to create such a female character and have such a high proportion of scenes? Li Zongheng doesn't mind, that's because he doesn't mind. Ye Nan's character description is that he accepted this little girlfriend because of the big guy's words in Chapter 94? As for the other characters, I felt they were okay after watching Chapter 94. The cousin is even more lovable, but I really don't like the character Ning. The author may have really made a mistake about Bai Yueguang and Green Tea Bitch. Ning's past life was disgusting. Although she has not done anything in her previous life in this life, she has already seen the disgust from the fact that she took away all Li Zongheng's money and left him only 100. You can't say that it is a voluntary explanation. If someone gives it to you, you can accept it with peace of mind? This is not the performance of Bai Yueguang. In view of this, my current evaluation of this book is: regardless of the above shortcomings, it is a good and refreshing novel. It's a bit toxic to me personally, so I can only withdraw it now. Keep up the good work, author! 🙂

Isn't this Zhao Lulu's talent too strong and disgusting? Absolute control, unlimited resurrection. The protagonist is so strong that if he hadn't been talented, he would have been almost made into a slave. Then doesn't she control whoever she wants? Moreover, Zhao Lulu wanted to control the protagonist into a slave, and she almost succeeded, but the protagonist didn't kill her? Isn't that nice to talk to?

The emotional drama in this book made me start to doubt the author's mental state. What kind of mentality did he write with? My three views were shattered into eight petals.

The Mouse Knight's C-level skill can reduce physical damage by 80% and is free of physical control. The protagonist's S-level talent only reduces physical damage by 50%. The pressure on the protagonist is too harsh. Make the protagonist look like a waste

My roommates are a tauren and a cuckold. The author is in a bad mental state

I have read more than 150 chapters, can anyone tell me what use Li Zhiwei has besides being a diatribe... Isn't it possible that the rbq succubus will be taken away in the end, Guigui I don't even dare to read it.

Please select gender: male/female, I want them all, I am pregnant with my own baby, no paternity test is required

This protagonist will quit if he continues to be cheap. The writing is so cheap.

This is a novel about a pervert who pretends to be cool. Please read with caution.

More updates? No more deleting books. The writing is still very good, but if I keep reading intermittently and haven't asked for leave, it won't be long before my reading plummets, and I won't be far away from becoming a eunuch. If you have anything to say, you can just say it, let alone give me a note asking for leave. If you want the eunuch, just say it.

There's something wrong with this book. Food and grass contain poison. It's so weird. It gets even weirder when I look at it again 🙂

121 Photos are also very poisonous. It feels inexplicable. You said that you killed all the students in the school for no reason, and the school didn't care. Although it was resurrected, there are no school rules. People who don't deal with you kill people inexplicably like you and don't bother you. What if President Li doesn't give you the 60 million? The agreement is high. The test is enough, so you want 10 times now, and you are so confident that she seems to have taken advantage. It feels very intellectual and does not feel any sense of relief. It is very scary to write the protagonist's character like this. Just to see the power of the ultimate move, I will kill all the students in the school. Think about the reality for yourself. I will treat you and treat you. Can you feel comfortable

Uh-huh, uh-huh, I took advantage of the limited exemption and read 98. When I saw this interpersonal relationship, I thought it was really perverted. I don't want to read further. I feel like this way of writing is like drinking poison to quench my thirst.

I don't quite understand why I'm so open and honest about my three S talents. It would be fine if I just say one or not say no.

The article shows the author's melancholy heart, which is really perverted!

I heard that a monthly ticket can be used to improve your skills