Charming Halo: Start Traveling Under One Person

Well, this is the fourth new book I reviewed today. I'm going to sleep after reviewing this one. First of all, let me talk about the advantages of this new book. The setting and other things introduced in the first three chapters of the book are relatively complete and more in line with popular thinking. This is worthy of praise, and the author's golden finger design OK, OK, I feel pretty good. Well, the introduction is quite attractive. Let's talk about the settings. I also took a look at this setting, and I probably know what it is like. Well, the settings, I feel that the previous settings are okay, but I looked at them later, and when they are put together, they feel a bit bad. Ah, there is also the writing style. The level of writing style seems to be written by a newcomer. Although other aspects are relatively good, the writing style of new books in the same period is somewhat lagging behind. The author can improve it. The first book I reviewed today found that the writing style is okay, but again I found that the author is a new author, maybe she is relatively talented, you can refer to it, and there is this book. Let me say it again, it lacks fantasy elements, foreshadowing elements and some creative elements. Well, that's it. I hope the author will become a god soon. It's just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.