Walking Through the Red Mansion in Jiayu Village

If you feel something, open a post and chat a few more words, and the author will read it as a fan. When I look at the characters in Red Mansions, I feel that there are two negative characters worth exploring, one is Jia Yucun and the other is Sun Shaozu. Both of them are handsome, generous, and well-mannered. One is good at writing and the other is good at martial arts. What they have in common is that they are indifferent and bad-tempered behind the scenes, but they both have abilities. Jia Yucun was born with a round waist and a thick back, a broad face and a square mouth, sword-shaped eyebrows and starry eyes, a straight nose and a straight cheek. He had a prosperous official career and became a minister. Sun Shaozu assumed the position of commander. He was tall and strong, skilled in bow and horse, and able to adapt to various situations. If the time-travel drama is written from the perspective of positive characters, this is the proper fate of the protagonist. For this book, the author chose Jia Yucun as the male lead because he has a deep understanding of him. In the original Red Mansion, Zhen Shiyin's family of three all have a deep causal bond with him: Zhen Shiyin gave silver to save Jia Yucun from the end of his life, Feng gave it to his maid and later became Jia Yu The village's head wife, Zhen Yinglian, was abducted, and the case fell into the hands of Jia Yucun. The novice monk of the Hulu Temple knew everything, and was feared and expelled by Jia Yucun, which paved the way for his subsequent liquidation and dismissal. It can be said that Jia Yucun has been successful and defeated by the Zhen family throughout his life. Good fortune and misfortune depend on each other, and the cause and effect are deeply buried. My positioning of Zhen Yinglian as a fan, even if the Zhen family is impoverished, she is still a country eunuch with an innocent family background, not a humble maid, maid, or concubine. Even the name Xiangling should not appear. Eliminating all the injustice and bullying imposed on her by the fate of the original novel is the fate she deserves. Furthermore, I never thought that Red Mansions fandoms should be dramas about boys and girls. A man cannot lose power for a day. He must be powerful. Age is not a problem. The sense of security that women always want has nothing to do with age. The age of people like Jia Yucun and Sun Shaozu is an advantage. Isn't the uncle loli drama a highlight?

Yin Xiangling was only three years old when he first met Zhen Shi Yin Xiangling in Hulu Temple during Jiayu Village's election ceremony. Xiangling was 12 or 13 years old when she was sentenced in the Hulu case for the second time. 9-10 Years have passed. Xiang Ling and Qingwen are the same age. At this time Qingwen was only 3 years old, and Lin Daiyu was still a baby. How come you, Qingwen, are already about 10 years old? When Lin Daiyu enters the Jia Mansion, isn't Qingwen about the same age as Li Wan?

This book is at its peak at the beginning and gets worse as it goes on. It's not that the author didn't write well, it's that the author didn't intend to write it well. The writing style of this book is good and the writing is quite solid. There is nothing to criticize except that the male protagonist is too young. But looking back, it won't work. There are a series of useless chapters. You are writing about the Red Mansion. If you don't rush to Beijing to start the plot, you will end up with useless chapters. Also, you should write about a bitter and resentful background 10 years ago, not now. What's even more embarrassing is that you are chased by enemies across the country later. With this plot, to be honest, others are better than you without any brainless reference. If you have good writing skills and good skills, if you don't write a good plot, it's really better not to write.

There is a problem with the age setting When Lin Daiyu was looking for a teacher when she was five years old, Jia Yucun had already dismissed from the prefecture. Daiyu is eight years old and Jia Yucun is only seventeen. Impossible, absolutely impossible.

At Jia Yucun's age, he is still too old to be the father of most Jin Chai, and he still wants Jin Chai

Big cut! Big cut! You entered the palace and became the steward.

In Dream of Red Mansions, Jia Yucun is at least 20 years older than Lin Daiyu. After being dismissed from office, he taught Daiyu who was about 6 years old. Specifically, Dalin Daiyu should be around 30 years old. The age of this book has been changed, and you are not a teacher or student. You will be treated as the protagonist, not Jia Yucun, but the adopted son of a collateral line of the Jia family. The author named Jia Yucun and then changed his age. In fact, this is not a good way to deal with it, and it is easy to persuade some people to quit.

It doesn't matter if you are older, but the author please distinguish the time and the time period clearly. It's impossible for Jia Yucun to be just how old Lin Daiyu is

The author's age is too ridiculous, I don't want to read it

Driving too fast and speeding? Go in and study subject one? 🤓

Yucun seems to be teacher Lin Daiyu. Teacher-student love?

It's awesome, I update it every day, and there's another poem at the end 😃

I'm looking forward to seeing a pear blossom crushing a begonia. It's quite picturesque.

Very well written! It's just that there are a little few updates and it's not enjoyable enough to watch. Come on, the author, please code more.

Shouldn't we accept Jia Mu, Lai Mu, Concubine Zhen, Mrs. Wang and others when traveling through Jiayu Village? 😁

Jia Yucun definitely has the ability. He is a good starting point. He can write about it and I look forward to the author's performance.