The Doomsday Mage Summons the Undead

This score is acceptable, but don't cut it

The plot is good, but it's too watery. It keeps talking about moral values, and the ghost's internal chat can only last half a page. I don't even know what chat has to do with the plot.

Write more about the big scenes of the sea of ​​undead storming the army, and the crushing of the human sea tactics. This is the highlight. There is no excessive climax in more than 200 chapters. The following is so abandoned, when are there millions, tens of millions, and endless human sea tactics! ! ! !

To be honest, the author's beginning inexplicably reminded me of Summoner of Darkness in the Apocalypse. I was only a teenager at the time, and I could understand it from the beginning. Looking back now, Mohei still shocks my three views. It's so fucking shocking.

Too many soldiers are sensational and have gone too far.

I hope the author will not really write the protagonist as a villain or an image without basic emotions.

I read a little bit and it's pretty good. In the end of the world, especially necromancers, they should not be human. I am the only one who has the right to do it. The natural disasters of the undead are sweeping the world. In the mid-term, I turned into a lich. In the late stage, I turned into a god of death.

It's been a long time since I've read a necromancer-type novel, I hope it won't be disappointing. . .

I hope that the protagonist will be dehumanized as soon as possible, and there must be no female protagonist (this t* is a post-apocalyptic novel, not your 18+ romance novel***...)

When I saw Chapter 191, I couldn't help but write a paragraph. Evil thoughts affect intelligence. Just think about it. Is the commander constantly using his vitality to predict the future for his own wealth and enjoyment? Are you seeking great power for your relatives and friends? When you avenge yourself, you only ask the mastermind to take full responsibility and not kill indiscriminately. It is worthy of praise, but if you want to avenge tens of thousands of people who had their blood drawn, you can stand on a high ground and curse people and kill people. The commander who sacrificed his life for millions of people should be able to directly point at your forehead, curse and stab you several times...

You don't think you're pretty good at writing about daily life, so that's why you write so much about daily life, right? 😳

The title of the book, Bird Food, looks a bit wrong from the outside. The number one necromancer in all worlds. At the beginning, only these words can be seen from the outside. When you come in, you can see the corpse guard😏

For nearly two hundred chapters, the protagonist cannot leave a city.

When I saw the Skeleton Throne Suit I got in the safe zone, I thought I was making a deal with the protagonist to ask him to help prevent a demonic wave. Then the protagonist directly let the undead army kill, and along with it, a wave of upgrades took off. In the end, you wrote such a thing in a dozen chapters, awesome.

I hope the author will definitely write the protagonist as a villain, and it is best to keep up with the pace of the Great Love Immortal Lord _(:з∠)_ (Personal opinion, purely personal opinion: The definition of good guys and bad guys never lies in style, but in the result)

It's so awkward. To be honest, it feels so uncomfortable.

In the few hours before the fog disappeared, countless words of nonsense were said, and the plot was not advanced at all. The character of the protagonist was also made to be sympathetic and intelligent. The protagonist keeps thinking about killing the demon lord, but he can't find the demon lord, and he already knows that the southeast is the demon lord's target, so why don't you go to the southeast and hide and wait for an ambush, and just sit idle in the north and think about things, and you think you are annoyed by the many people coming. Once you collect all the undead army, all the trouble will be gone.

The end of the world, Summoner? Element detection! It's you, goddess Li Jiayu

Let's change the name. To be honest, when I was scanning the list for this book, I hesitated many times before clicking on it. If it weren't for someone else's strong recommendation, I really wouldn't want to click on it.

Completely eunuch, the group was disbanded.

Is there no humanity in the last days? For military generals at the end of the Tang Dynasty, you can just write down the generals at the end of the dynasty. Although the lower limit is not high, it is not impossible.

Previously, a book friend in the book review section said that he wanted to add a character to the book. But he only gave me one name: Zhao Bin. I thought about it, and it just so happened that there was a role for him in the next plot. Then another book friend said in his post that he could open a character building. I just thought: Huh? This is not bad! It's like interacting with everyone! So, the character building is here! ................. Tell me about the arrangement. You can post the characters you want to guest star in this building. It is best to be more detailed, such as: name, personality, approximate age, appearance, likes and dislikes, experiences, etc. It would be even better if there is a biography of the character! The more detailed, the earlier you can show up! I will follow the direction of the world plot without affecting the world plot. We will choose the opportunity to put suitable characters into the book to appear. Then, because everything still has to be dominated by the world plot. There may be some slight changes in the actual arrangements. Please pay attention to this and please bear with me. In addition, except for the characters. Undead, for example, the names of the undead's advanced options, skills, and equipment. For example, everyone is complaining about the ghost commanders, ranging from the oldest to the tenth. You can also give it a name. For example, when I read the comments before, there was mention of Sad Wind. I think this name is good, it suits the boss of the Black Warrior very well hahahaha. Then everyone will be able to see it tomorrow. For example, favorite equipment, interesting props, skills, detailed information, etc. As long as you like it, you can post it and let everyone interact together. I will read this pinned post every day. Then make a comprehensive selection based on the direction of the world plot, the level of detail of the characters and other information provided, as well as book fandom, number of likes and other factors, and then arrange to appear in the book. Okay, that's it. If you have better opinions, we will add them in the future! Looking forward to your comments.

It's good in every aspect, except for the author's naming skills. . . But fortunately, I don't often use the summoning word. A good book of fairy grass 👍👍

(Written by a fan for a group of friends) Parallel Earth Server No. 6265 Has been opened. Global gamification begins. The surviving chosen ones, please kill the corpse beast as soon as possible to deal with the future demon crisis. Rewards will be left on the body of the dead corpse beast, please pay attention to the chosen ones to obtain them. The fog of war zone division has been opened. The three major modules have been opened, please check it yourself. Fight for yourself! Fight to continue the fire of mankind! I wish all the chosen ones: prosperous military fortune! Han Feng had just hung up the phone with his grandma. At this time, it was 10:30 in the morning in China, but it was indeed 7 in the morning at Han Feng's place. Hearing the system prompts, Han Feng quickly jumped aside and picked up a gun in his hand. After checking around and finding that there was really no one there, Han Feng was about to call his teammates out to observe the situation. Put on the equipment, and the four-person team is ready to go out and explore. There was deathly silence in the corridor, and Han Feng and others could not help but slow down their steps. The four of Han Feng are in a residential building. This is a safe house for them, where they live after work. At this time, Han Feng was rushing to the front. He thought of the novels he had read on a certain Chinese website before, and thought of his grandmother... Han Feng walked cautiously towards the stairs, and suddenly there was a sound of tapping the wall. At the entrance of the stairs, two corpse beasts were leaning against each other. They looked like a couple preparing to go out to work. Their mutated, thick palms were tapping the wall. As if sensing the aura of a living person, one of the corpse beasts stood at the corner of the stairs, motionless. Han Feng turned the corner and found the terrifying thing in front of him, and immediately opened fire. The chest of the male corpse beast was suddenly bloody and bloody, but it was not dead immediately. It stretched out its hand to grab Han Feng. Han Feng hid backwards. His teammates behind him heard the gunfire and immediately responded and shot the male corpse beast to death. The female corpse beast from behind rushed over, brandishing its sharp and slender nails. Because the male corpse beast was tall and burly, no one noticed the female corpse beast behind him before he fell to the ground. After the tall male corpse beast fell to the ground, the female corpse beast behind was revealed. She jumped out from behind the male corpse beast and scratched Han Feng's arm with her slender nails, leaving scratch marks. Han Feng felt the pain and immediately shot, hitting the thin corpse beast in the head, and then shattered her body into pieces as if to vent his anger. Please name the chosen one: "Han Feng." Congratulations to the chosen one: Han Feng, who is the 6666th chosen person in the global theater to kill the demon species. Wish you good luck in martial arts! May the glory of mankind be spread forever! Although the two corpse beasts encountered were eliminated, more and more corpse beasts in the building were attracted by the noise and approached a few people. Han Feng's scratched arm was simply bandaged and was not taken seriously. The four of Han Feng have reached the second floor. They started walking down from the fourth floor and have already eliminated more than a dozen corpse beasts. Since the pills are not enough, they plan to use cold weapons to fight the corpse beasts hand-to-hand. Putting on the military spurs, Han Feng saw the corpse beasts gathered on the first floor through the gap in the stairwell. On the first floor is the landlord's flower shop. All kinds of expensive potted plants have been overturned to the ground. A corpse beast can be vaguely seen eating the "dragon blood tree" in the center of the shop. The landlord named it this place, saying that it was the treasure of the store and could not be sold for a lot of money. Han Feng tried to beat the ground, making some weak noises, trying to attract the corpse beast near the stairs to go upstairs. Unexpectedly, all the corpse beasts were attracted, except for the little corpse beast that was still eating the "dragon blood tree". In the critical situation, everyone hurriedly opened fire and killed several corpse beasts that were vying to go upstairs. However, after a long and fierce battle, their bullets had been exhausted, but the little corpse beast was still unscathed. All the companions were killed, but the little corpse beast remained indifferent and continued to eat, making a clicking sound. Han Feng and others also discovered something strange, and the four of them gathered on the second floor to think about countermeasures. What they didn't know was that Han Feng's wound under the bandage was still starting to turn black... To be continued ...

Although I haven't been chasing you, I will give you a monthly ticket and a recommendation ticket

I dream back to those days, and I really like this kind of apocalyptic writing. Come on, author

Adapted by the book friend "Twenty-Four Bridges" (A fanfic written for group friends) Parallel Earth Server No. 6265 Has been opened. Global gamification begins. The surviving chosen ones, please kill the corpse beast as soon as possible to deal with the future demon crisis. Rewards will be left on the body of the dead corpse beast, please pay attention to the chosen ones to obtain them. The fog of war zone division has been opened. The three major modules have been opened, please check it yourself. Fight for yourself! Fight to continue the fire of mankind! I wish all the chosen ones: prosperous military fortune! Han Feng had just hung up the phone with his grandma. At this time, it was 10:30 in the morning in China, but it was indeed 7 in the morning at Han Feng's place. Han Feng, 25, was an Air Force special forces soldier. He retired after serving for three years. In order to let his grandmother live a better life, he chose to come to the Middle East to become a mercenary. Hearing the prompt in his head, he didn't believe it at first, but as a soldier's vigilance, Han Feng quickly hid in a nearby bunker and picked up the G36C short assault rifle leaning against the wall. After checking around, he found that there was no one around. Han Feng was going to call his mercenaries to gather and then go out to observe the situation. As a mercenary team composed of mechanized infantry, it is already very powerful in the Middle East. As the captain, Han Feng has six people under his command, including machine gunner Qian Kai, driver Su Ming, assaulter Sun Mu, blaster Zhao Siyuan, sniper Lao K, and medic Li Tingxue. At this time, Qian Kai's irritable voice came from the headset: "Boss, I just fell asleep, why did we suddenly gather together." "Shut up! You are the only one who talks nonsense." Li Tingxue scolded, "Hey, you are right." Qian Kai's cheap laughter echoed in the headset. When Li Tingxue first joined the team, Qian Kai began to pursue her crazily, but Li Tingxue never gave Qian Kai a smile, but Qian Kai always maintained a shameless style, which made Li Tingxue helpless, and even beat him several times. Later, she gradually got used to it, but she still didn't look good every time she faced Qian Kai. At this time, Han Feng's serious voice said: "Okay, don't be poor, gather quickly." As soon as he finished speaking, there were explosions, screams and the roar of unknown creatures downstairs. Han Feng immediately ran to the window and looked downstairs. In the dilapidated earthen houses and messy streets, people were chasing and biting people everywhere. Under a shabby shed not far away, an arms dealer who was about to shoot was knocked down by several figures. The gun in his hand opened fire randomly. Passers-by running around were accidentally hit by stray bullets in the abdomen and legs, and lay dying on the ground. Breaths, shouts, cries for help, and the explosion of guns and ammunition were heard endlessly. Even the most stupid person knew that something was wrong, and picked up weapons to resist the biting monster. Looking at the scene, even Han Feng, who had been on the battlefield for a long time, shed a cold sweat involuntarily. Even the rising sun did not bring him a trace of warmth. In less than a minute, the team gathered together and looked at the tragic scene on the street. The eyes of the few people who arrived at this time were full of surprise and fear, because they clearly saw a monster with a broken chest and still running, until it knocked down a person who was still shooting. It kept biting the person's body, and they could even hear the person's last scream before death. It was only then that everyone who was in shock understood why the boss suddenly gathered everyone. Fortunately, it was in time, otherwise it would be easy to be trapped in the room without knowing the situation and be defeated one by one. Because we just completed the mission last night, everyone has just rested, and their current mental state is not very good. They are still confused when this kind of thing happens again. However, as time goes by, the will gradually loses its confusion, and everyone looks at Han Feng. Han Feng looked at several people and said quickly: "Did any of you hear it just now?" Several people looked at each other, Qian Kai asked doubtfully: "What's wrong, boss, I was sleeping just now, and I didn't hear anything." Su Ming also echoed: "Yes, boss, I didn't hear it either." The other people also answered "I didn't hear it" and "No". At this time, the silent old K suddenly said: "Boss, I heard it, it was like a voice coming out of my head, something like global gamification, monster crisis, doomsday, etc. I thought I was hallucinating and didn't remember everything." "What?" "How is that possible?" Qian Kai's voice and Li Xueting's voice sounded almost at the same time, "Is it true or false? Could everything that just happened downstairs..." Zhao Siyuan also exclaimed in disbelief. "Well, it should be about the same. Although I don't know what the situation is, Old K is right. This kind of sound did appear. I was afraid of something happening, so I woke you up, and the scene you just saw happened. So be prepared now and don't relax, otherwise you may die at any time. You don't want to be eaten by those monsters or become one of them!" Han Feng said seriously and lowly. Qian Kai and the others looked serious and said in unison: "Yes!" Although Qian Kai was always carefree, he was still very reliable when he became serious. Because of this, he was only verbally criticized every time, and there was no actual punishment. Han Feng quickly glanced around and said: "Su Ming, you go through the back door and drive the car downstairs. Sun Mu and Li Tingxue, you two will follow and protect yourselves. If something goes wrong, you three will break out and be ready to respond. Lao K, Zhao Siyuan, Qian Kai, you three will follow me. The four of us will leave from the front door in a while. Now we have checked our equipment and are ready to go!" Everyone packed their backpacks and checked their ammunition. After Su Ming and the others walked down the stairs at the back, Han Feng and the others cautiously moved down the stairs facing them. The corridor that was noisy just now was now deathly silent, and Han Feng and others couldn't help but slow down their steps. The four of Han Feng are in a residential building. This is a safe house for them, where they live after work. At this time, Han Feng was walking in the front. He thought of the novel he had read on a certain Chinese website before, and thought of his grandmother, "Damn phone, there is no signal at this time! I hope the domestic army can react!" Han Feng patted his satellite phone at the corner... Han Feng walked cautiously towards the stairs, and suddenly there was a sound of tapping the wall. At the entrance of the stairs, two corpse beasts were leaning against each other. They looked like a couple preparing to go out to work. Their mutated, thick palms were tapping the wall. As if sensing the aura of a living person, one of the corpse beasts stood at the corner of the stairs, motionless. Han Feng turned the corner and found the terrifying thing so close in front of him and exclaimed: "Fuck, what the hell!" He shouted, but he was not slow, and he immediately opened the safety and shot. The chest of the male corpse beast was suddenly bloody and bloody, but it was not dead immediately. It stretched out its hand to grab Han Feng. Han Feng hid behind him. Qian Kai heard the gunfire behind him and responded immediately. The MG36 squad in his hand fired wildly with a machine gun, completely smashing the upper body of the male corpse beast. The female corpse beast from behind rushed over, brandishing its sharp and slender nails. Because the male corpse beast was tall and burly, no one noticed the female corpse beast behind him before his body was broken. After the tall male corpse beast was broken into pieces, the female corpse beast behind was revealed. She jumped out from behind the male corpse beast and scratched Han Feng's arm with her long nails. However, the desert MCCUU camouflage uniform had no effect and still left a few slender scratches. Han Feng felt the pain, and immediately blocked the gun in front of him and kicked hard, kicking the thin corpse beast a meter away. However, the female corpse beast reacted very quickly. As soon as it was kicked out, it opened its mouth and charged forward two steps, biting the muzzle of Han Feng's gun. Han Feng violently pulled the trigger, and the corpse beast's head was hit to pieces in an instant. Please name the chosen one: "Han Feng." Congratulations to the chosen one: Han Feng, who is the 6666th chosen person in the global theater to kill the demon species. Wish you good luck in martial arts! May the glory of mankind be spread forever! Although the two corpse beasts encountered were eliminated, more and more corpse beasts in the building were attracted by the noise and approached a few people. Han Feng's scratched arm was simply bandaged and was not taken seriously. The four of Han Feng had already reached the second floor. They started walking down from the fourth floor and had already eliminated more than a dozen corpse beasts. The ammunition was not enough after last night's mission, not to mention that a large part of them were still in the car. They were not prepared to use cold weapons to fight the corpse beasts hand-to-hand. Changing the magazine, Han Feng saw the corpse beasts gathered on the first floor through the gap in the stairwell. There is a flower shop on the first floor. All kinds of precious potted plants have been overturned to the ground. A corpse beast can be seen vaguely eating the "dragon blood tree" in the center of the shop. I heard that it was named by the owner of the house, who said it was a treasure of the shop and could not be sold for a lot of money. Han Feng tried to beat the ground, making some weak noises, trying to attract the corpse beast near the stairs to go upstairs. Unexpectedly, all the corpse beasts were attracted, except for the little corpse beast that was still eating the "dragon blood tree". In the critical situation, everyone hurriedly opened fire and killed several corpse beasts that were vying to go upstairs. There was a bang at this time, and it was Zhao Siyuan who fired a grenade. Because the stairs were too narrow just now, Zhao Siyuan did not use the grenade launcher on the rifle. Now that the terrain is wide, this killing weapon finally came in handy, solving a large group of corpse beasts and reducing a lot of pressure. However, after many fierce battles, their bullets had been exhausted, but the little corpse beast was still unscathed. After all the corpse beasts were dealt with, the little corpse beast remained indifferent and continued to eat, making a clicking sound. Han Feng and others also discovered something strange, and the four of them gathered on the second floor to think about countermeasures. Old K: "Boss, something doesn't seem right. Since that thing didn't attack us." "Whatever, I still have one in my hand and stuff it in its mouth. I don't believe any carbon-based creature can resist this thing," Qian Kai gasped. What they didn't know was that the wound under Han Feng's bandage had begun to turn black… To be continued …

How to say~

The writing is good, the protagonist has an IQ and a bottom line, and is very stable. The plot is okay, the writing is quite fluent, and the supporting characters are well-cast. My suggestion is to read more, as it's not enough.

Hope it goes on sale soon!