Super Cool Magician

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁

The writing is quite good, but there are some minor flaws that are caused by excessive translation accents that cause a sense of dissonance. Some suggestions: 1. Fantasy is a niche category. If the story is not attractive enough to attract readers, it is impossible to sign a contract. No matter how wonderful the story you write, you can only entertain yourself. The obvious problem with the story in your book is that it is not attractive. 2. The characters are a bit flat, which gives me the feeling that the protagonist cannot give me the sense of immersion I want. 3. The world view is too ordinary. I remember reading a novel about witches before. I think you can learn from it. Finally, I would like to reiterate that your writing style meets the basic reading standards of Qidian readers. If you want to sign a contract, you'd better read more books that are at the top of the monthly ticket list and Sanjiang's books. To construct a story framework that is enough to attract readers, you need to have a good storyline, a hook that catches people, distinct character labels, and an ups and downs rhythm. If these basic points are met, it will be close to being signed and put on the shelves.

Perseverance is admirable. Come on, I wish you sign as soon as possible!

I believe that works, even if they are fictional, should embody authenticity. So any character in a book should have a name, instead of just calling them by their identity or a few words. I hope my work is more authentic than Tolkien's.

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