Martial Arts Longevity: I Have a Progress Bar

It's not good for the system to directly send secret medicine. It can be used as a proficiency panel directly. Changing things out of thin air is too novice.

Is this a different kind of drug-taking novel? Many proficiencies are written as drug-taking abortions, which makes it uncomfortable.

The protagonist makes a medicine and asks a god. Is the author a great god? Abandon

There are so many people practicing martial arts, and secret medicine is necessary to break through the realm. There are not so many secret medicines. Martial arts in this world will be cut off sooner or later. This setting is unreasonable.

I was just wondering what kind of gods are there in the world of warriors?

The further you go, the more rubbish the protagonist becomes.

Everything else is fine, but the plot is too cliche and the plot is too tight.

Is it really a cool article about leveling up, or is it a cover story about one level, two levels, and three levels, especially the level 6 or 7 level where you also write a leapfrog challenge?

Don't treat the protagonist as a patient who always takes medicine. Cultivation is about absorbing the vitality or spiritual energy of heaven and earth!

Good guy, after what you wrote, one person came and another came.

Those who have been poisoned come to my place to drink Meng Po soup, one bowl per person, don't jump in line!

I basically skipped through the routines you wrote.

It was too poisonous and he died in Chapter 26. In fact, there are hints of it from the beginning of the plot of Lijiazhuang. The protagonist's character is inexplicable. He hides his cultivation while trying to show off. It's so awkward, the protagonist behaves like a 250-year-old.

Why don't you reopen it? It's too bad.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. There aren't too many bad points at the moment. The author shouldn't care too much about other people's opinions, and keep up the good work ✊

I don't know what you think. It is clear that the killing is decisive. Maybe my heart is not as kind as yours

It's just a piece of shit. The only magical power of diamond body protection that attracts me is that I haven't seen how hard it is yet. Gone.

Forcibly creating a conflict and then passing it off in one stroke, the author's writing skills still need to be improved.

Kneel down at the beginning. Can a person who is exhausted and exhausted just resurrected be able to practice martial arts? A warrior still needs secret medicine to maintain his strength.

The first chapter was so toxic that I couldn't stand it anymore.

Shouldn't the first drawback be getting robbed when visiting a grave? In ancient times, people in the countryside were buried in their own land. If they went to their own land, they would be robbed😅