Capturing All Things as Pets in a High-Martial World

Author, take a longer-term view; you might as well grab some air and raise an air friend.

Can we arrest the people too? It reminds me of that manga with the pet system where they attack everyone they see. 🙂

The idea is good, but the writing style isn't quite there. Ultimately, it's not suitable for writing about power struggles, intrigue, or interpersonal relationships. You could focus more on pets.

He got killed, but instead of leaving for another city, he knew people here wanted to kill him, yet he wouldn't leave. He just stayed, killing enemies and then harming himself. Turns out, there were other people above him, so he was basically fed experience points... After seeing this, I'm not reading any further.

In the early game, have your first pet capture the ground, so no enemy can fight the protagonist on the ground. In the mid-game, have your pet capture the sky, so no enemy will dare to fight the protagonist in the air. In the late game, capture a planet, making the protagonist invincible on that planet! Finally, capture the universe, making the protagonist invincible throughout the universe!

The cheat system is basically unlimited. Seven pets in just over ten chapters. A ton of talents. What's the point of playing? It's definitely going to be a disaster.

Shouldn't the protagonist's development involve going wherever there are more resources? Why is he always thinking about the paltry sums in the county? Is even the most talented person as talented as the protagonist? What's there to be afraid of? He can develop his career in a bigger place and then come back to deal with the Lü family, right? He always likes to cause trouble and associate with troublemakers; he's so brainless.

This protagonist's journey is truly over. What a hellish start! Forget about cheating; unless you're a GM, you wouldn't survive three seconds. The enemies are already powerful enough to reach the starting village, while the protagonist is still being raised like the Calabash Brothers saving their grandfather, allowing him to grow stronger step by step. And what does the protagonist do?

The previous incarnation is constantly being padded out; the time travel isn't the goal, it's just to make a lot of mindless plot points make sense, like the cheat abilities, character traits, and so on. Why even time travel if the previous incarnation is so padded out? And that's not the main point either. These two elements are happening so frequently it's nauseating.

Seeing 196, the protagonist is being suppressed too much! Nearly 500,000 words and the pets are already at level 6, while the protagonist has only just reached level 9, and the other prodigies are already at level 7 and 6 in their 20s!