LOL: the Dark Goddess Covets Me!

I finally came across a better fanfic and just sent it like this?

The writing is good, but the main conflict is missing, or the conflict is not intense at all, making the protagonist's purpose unclear. For example, when the protagonist returns from time and space, what he wants to do most is to find Ahri. Does he still have time to kill a vampire spider in a tavern? I spent a lot of time at Guangming Shaobing, which was completely unnecessary. The protagonist's action trajectory has no logic. Before, for Blessed Light Island, there was basically no depiction of the protagonist having any memories of the place. He is a time traveler and is unfamiliar with the place. He can definitely take Ahri, his master, his younger brother, and the world runes to complete the journey.

Just one word, quick

In terms of strength, Darkin is not as good as Ryze at all. What I'm talking about here is strength, not strength and status. After all, a lone sacrificer with a heavy responsibility, an ascetic mage who restrains himself. It is definitely more dramatic and more sympathetic than the dark descendant who is too middle-aged. Disaster always slows me down! Every rune I find is proof that we have lived another day!

Darkborn

No, you've already written a fanfic, so if you don't like the plot, just change it? That's it, then why did I subscribe before?

Most of the existing dark descendants are either subordinates of the sword demon or friends of the sword demon, right? Lorri Zolani is really alone. The sword demon responds to her call, and a bunch of subordinates and old friends rush over to help. Ibaros, a veteran, can come to help the sword demon if he is not too far away. On the other hand, Zolani, except for Verus, who treats her better, everyone else is eager to eat his flesh.

One more long post to give some friends who don't know Runeterra an intuitive understanding. All vertical images are from Legends of Runeterra (referred to as lor), and they are all skinless images by default.

I feel like Darkin doesn't have any advantage against Foego. Although Foego is a clown, his record is really tough.

Support multiple heroines! Collect all the heroines Reksai and Belvis can also be considered. 😋

Darkborn

Dance of Death·Lunecia

Hello, I am Ruiz. I will open the back door for 50 yuan and send you to Fuguang Island to eat and drink.

Ahli

Ari Ryze

Ahli

Do all these scores qualify? Even if the next door is more cracked than you, it won't cut it... Sigh.

Let me spoil it. The protagonist will be injured by Buddha, and then merge with the source of life by chance, and then sleep for a thousand years 😃

I just read Chapter 9 and I thought it was pretty good. It was much better than the book Possessed by the Sword Demon. That was based on the defense.

I feel that the quality has seriously declined since it was put on the shelves. What I want to see is the battle and defeat after a thousand years. What I want to see is the sadness and loneliness of waiting for Ahri for thousands of years, and the suffering of endless twists and turns. I don't want to see two people who haven't seen each other in more than 1,000 years meet, so I just do it 😳😳😳. It feels a lot sloppy!

Now when I see the name Russell, I think of that small-minded person. . .

Syndra

Hey, I really liked this book at the time, but it's a pity that the author's mentality collapsed.

The first book that made me want to read the original version. I cut it and was very disappointed.

Zelan Maokai Fryego Hecarim Kalista

I hope it won't be as strong as the other book, Sword Demon. Anyone can step on the main character's batch of dishes. It's so frustrating.

I beg you guys to read more within 24 hours▄█▀█●

Uncomfortable (๑óò๑) Things like novels always disappear after a few days, ╯▂╰

Reposted from Station B Yueji

After reading 50 chapters, I feel pretty good. It's hard to find a good LOL fanfic these days. The last one was from a certain LeBlanc, but unfortunately it disappeared after a few chapters because of driving too fast 🙂 ps: I remember the information in the past few weeks said that the authorities have relaxed restrictions. Please drive the car for me.