Two Cities: I Am Building a Mecha in Pi City

What can I say, I didn't see what I wanted to see. I came here for Two Cities + Mecha. What I wanted to see was the collision between the author's imagination and different worldviews and different mechanical systems. But the actual situation is that the story of Two Cities is mixed with a few mecha chapters, and my interest suddenly disappeared. I've watched a lot of Twin Cities fan fiction, but if it only tells stories, it's really not that attractive.

The writing is very good, the writing is mature, and the plot is also interesting. I will keep it for now.

The writing is quite good, but there are some things that are not very good. I think the writing is good because the book is really good, and the writing is not good because there are indeed some not so good things in the book. Overall, the writing is quite good, but it is a bit not so good.

I drew it myself, don't spray it if you don't like it.

After reading the novel, I can only discern two words: stingy, or of course, deliberate suppression. The three foundations of science and technology are energy, materials, and information. In terms of energy, the protagonist has obtained a nuclear energy reactor. It is difficult to develop in a small direction, but it is not enough to go to a large one, one meter or two meters. The materials include all kinds of magic steel. If it doesn't work, the most basic steel will be fine. The weakest point is the weak defense, and there is no shield. For information, artificial intelligence chips are enough. All technologies are complete, including energy weapons for attack, and electromagnetic technology. It can easily complete a small aerospace warship of twenty or thirty meters. Heroes below the demigod level, two or three aerial battleships, equipped with cannonballs seven or eight times the speed of sound, killed one by one. If there are not enough resources, the protagonist's current strength is either to cooperate or to go it alone. If it doesn't work, just threaten with force, and you will only participate in big events. When you have the strength, you will be a big event, just start a wave of mechanical craze

Completely different from what I imagined. I thought I was going to ditch Hextech. Play with pure technology, not magic technology. In the end, he was still a traitor playing with magic technology.

Source Plan·Unlimited

At the very least, you must learn to copy books, just like in The Super God Mechanic. You must have your own territory and your own power, which can be used to forge equipment and build a mechanical army. At the same time, the machines in hand are also of various kinds, instead of always just mechas and mechas. Battleships, robots, giant structures, super instruments, these are all machines.

The author should probably write more about exploring technology, changing Pi City, and causing shock to all parties. Didn't he write about satellites and telephones before? I was full of expectations, but you passed it by in one stroke. And the protagonist seems to be a bastard in the back, running around, and sometimes being very promiscuous. When he goes to meet someone, he can just talk for a chapter or two. And everyone came here because of the title of this book. What they want to see is the life of an inventor who brings modern and future technology into Pi City, who can build mechas to fight monsters, and who can create things to benefit the masses. Rather than watching a bastard, you can simply write one or two chapters, but the more you read, the less interesting it becomes.

Caitlin Gilaman

The protagonist is so promiscuous. He dares to go to Zaun with a broken pistol.

The appearance of Caitlin from the Twin Cities is hard to describe, and it directly ruined my fantasy of a female police officer. It was so 😍😍 in the game. . . . This is the one in the Twin Cities 😰😰

At the same time, I watched the four main characters in Piltover, Delmar, Nok, Ionia, and one who came out of the void and walked around with Kai'Sa. Now I sometimes have confused memories and think they are in the same world.

Reference images selected by the author.

Ka'Sa

I found a beautiful policewoman fanart in the Daily Smile of the Pocket League of Legends

After two more chapters, I bought an ice cream and met with Seraphine. The conversation we just had was gone. . . . . . .

We need to see the musculaturer! The path of a mechanic with a weak body is wrong! ! !

"Run forward, I will let you run for 5 minutes first" - Caitlin

Giant mechas are really not practical. From the production process, we need to solve the problems of leg support, material problems, rotation problems, joint flexibility problems, and air obstruction problems. If these cannot be solved, we might as well just use battleships and airplanes. Of course, the giant ones are not very cost-effective, but small and medium-sized ones are still ok. The one about three meters is actually very suitable.

I have a little question before I read it. The policewoman is a lesbian. How did she become the heroine?

This book is actually very well written, and the plot flow is not ridiculous. The author has a very thorough understanding of the original background setting. Unfortunately, the background world of League of Legends is too niche. This is also related to the fact that League of Legends does not produce many anime movies. It is a pity.

Update the author...

In fact, there is another reason why there are not many orders. The fighting scenes are too rough. There are many standards for strength, and there is another kind of fighting wisdom. How a three-piece suit counterattacks a four-piece suit is the details of the battle. If the description is rough and many things look blurry, then it will be almost uninteresting to watch.

My personal opinion is that it is a cool article. The writing style is okay, but the author is obviously not too smart, which leads to a low upper limit of intelligence in the book. The high-IQ characters and plot basically rely on the intelligence of the overall character to set off the protagonist's intelligence. The result is that there is basically no complicated plot, and there is no in-depth description of any field. In summary, it is a cool article. As a recreational activity, the quality is sufficient.

I felt pretty good after reading this book. Why are there so few people following it?

Finally there is a female police heroine fanfic 😭😭😭, support the author! At the same time, I would also like to express my own opinions. I feel that there are many technological lines that can be climbed in the later stage, such as the floating city of the Grand Arcanist in DND, or fighting in space, launching rockets, and super science fiction in Liu Cixin's "Poetry Cloud" and "Three-Body Problem", especially the high-tech civilization in Shiyun. You can use an entire galaxy to arrange all the combinations of all Chinese characters. Otherwise, in the later stage, I feel that the Dragon King's combat power is too high and will not be easy to defeat.

Build a stellar suppression weapon, Jayton 😁

Come on, give Zhang a monthly ticket to encourage him.

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