
The Day Time Broke Down
时序崩坏之日
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 485k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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162Chapters
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There are many niche books that I particularly like, but I am worried that I will become a eunuch because of my low grades. I am a student and can't give much help. It's so uncomfortable ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ )
It's not that I didn't update, it's that it was locked again. Oh, what a fate 😢 I am also very helpless.
Tell me about my current opinions, speculations and suggestions
The current world view is very attractive. In the first few chapters, it was true and false when I was not taken away by Zhang Erbo. It was intended to control the protagonist's mind and resist the protagonist. I know that there is a grand world view but can only glimpse the tip of the iceberg. The most attractive thing is that I can't wait to read and learn about this world. Later, I thought it was just a story about an organization fighting monsters and war. It also brought out the social contradictions and the underlying oppression of arcade machines on the bottom. The upper level is partially ignorant, which also shows that the information, knowledge, technology, and technology of the upper and lower levels are too separated, which is very cyberpunk. However, what is different from reality is that this world still has the threat of casting, so the company's position has become unpredictable again. Whether it is the same as the ruler of reality, or it can truly resist the pressure of casting when faced by human beings, or both, it all depends on the author's subsequent development. If the current concept of the time pillar is fabricated by the company, then there is something to be said. For example, if the time pillar is bred by human emotions in time, then the company's behavior will undoubtedly make the time pillar more and more cruel. In the end, the protagonist will raise a flag to resist similar to this setting, which is undoubtedly excellent. I think that if you want to write well, you should focus on the change of the protagonist's mentality, the discussion of the problem (this discussion is to tell stories to make readers think rather than discuss) and work hard on the time cylinder.
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