Immortal Pride

The first few dozen chapters are very happy. The heroine is neither humble nor overbearing, smart and lively, a little savage, and quite lovable. After reading the entry examination in one breath, the logical flaws of this book began to appear, and I couldn't help but make a few comments about it. The same plot routine can be said to be joyful if it occurs in a family, but if it occurs in the arena, it is childish and distorted, because there is no family ancestor outside to uphold justice and supervise the fairness of the game. The heroine uses the simple scheming of ordinary people to play around with a group of high-level disciples with ulterior motives, just like playing house. But the problem is that they are not fools, and their parents are not fools either. The great monks can figure things out and monitor you remotely. Taking advantage of your ability to predict the future, the more you play and make profits, the more people will doubt you. You are just a young Qi practitioner, and your opponent is not a three-year-old child, but a monk who is three or four levels higher than you. She should be low-key and low-key, just play a normal person. There is really no need to play Huang Rong regardless of the situation. Huang Rong is very easy to beat, especially since the heroine does not have the support of Huang Yaoshi. There are also problems with the implementation of the behavioral policy. Since you plan to let your eldest cousin take the blame and make others mistakenly think that your eldest cousin is the child of destiny, then don't use your superpowers when your eldest cousin is not present. For example, in the entrance examination, if the eldest sister did not participate, how could you still dare to cause trouble during the exam? If you do something strange, other monks cannot see through it. If you do some calculations and find that the calculation is not clear, it will be like a fortune teller. Wouldn't this reveal the secret? At least the eldest sister will be excluded from the candidates for the Son of Destiny, because the eldest sister has an alibi. Of course, if you polish it a bit and provide more background explanations, these plots may not be rounded off. Just considering the fast pace and intensity of online writing, it may not be worth the gain. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. Those who haven't read it can still read it.

A novel with new ideas in the orthodox system of cultivating immortals. The heroine has a distinct personality and is a rare "rogue" heroine. Her spiritual weapon partner is also cheap and quite lovable. She has a pretty good sect and a decent family. The writing style is relatively light and relaxing, and many plots are funny and exciting. At least the first 400 chapters are recommended for everyone to read. However, one thing that people don't like is that this is a book without CP but with a male protagonist. Although the male protagonist Mo Chuan's scenes account for less than 1%, and he is not the most popular male, Mo Chuan's scenes all appear in important plots, and there are also many scenes opposite the female protagonist. Moreover, Mo Chuan's identity is not like that of male masters, relatives, subordinates, and friends who can naturally appear next to the heroine. The author's arrangement of Mo Chuan's roles is relatively rigid. It is basically a fun plot. Watching the plot, Mo Chuan inexplicably comes out to show off. When he comes out, he is "handsome" and "fairy". "After the disguise, he is ordinary, but the heroine is the focus of attention." The configurations are also all male protagonist configurations: ①The female protagonist had a crush on Mo Chuan in her previous life, she has had moments of being amazed by Mo Chuan in this life, and she has also been rescued by Mo Chuan several times. ②The heroine is the child of destiny and has great luck, and the hero is not weak at all. Before the heroine nb, Mo Chuan was the number one golden elixir. Although he was squeezed out by the heroine later, his cultivation level was not weaker than that of the heroine. He had a standard old-timer in his mind and held an immortal weapon in his hand. Anyway, he felt that he was on par with the heroine. However, it is true that the heroine did not fall in love with Mo Chuan, there was no love brain trick, and there was no sign of CP. It's just that Mo Chuan's poor writing made many people, including me, hate it. Seeing Mochuan, I felt like I was drinking a bowl of delicious fish soup. As I drank, I kept getting stuck on fish bones. The latest chapter of Mo Chuan being beaten off the cliff by the heroine is the only story related to Mo Chuan that I like. Unfortunately, it is too short. It would be great to write more plots of Mo Chuan being beaten by the heroine. But the author probably wouldn't be like this. It feels like there's a plot where you fall off a cliff and have an adventure. It just so happens that my favorite characters, the second brother and the master, were written to death in the later stage. I really can't stand it anymore.

The heroine occupies three caves by herself, and a small character was specially written to make a fool of herself to show that the heroine has foresight, which is quite speechless.

It looks good, keep updating every day

There are always people who criticize the relationship between Mo Chuan and the heroine. Not to mention that Mo Chuan cheated the heroine in his previous life, and he also wants to cheat the heroine in this life, because he has a grudge against the heroine. And he clearly said that he would tell the heroine the truth as long as he was given 100 spiritual stones. He ate so many youth balls and didn't tell the heroine the truth. There was no hint at all. He believes that the heroine is not the child of destiny, but if there is no chance that people from the aristocratic family find out that they have exchanged garbage for it several times, won't they take revenge on the heroine? It shows that he doesn't care about the heroine's life or death. I really don't understand, can there be a handsome and wealthy person in the novel who can be a candidate for the male lead? You don't even care about whether you have any hatred or character? And if you really want to talk about cp, it would be better to work with both Xuanyuan You and the heroine. Xuanyuan You and the heroine have the same chemistry, he is a nice person, and he has a straightforward temperament. Of course, I hope that the heroine in this novel will have no CP, and can write about the world of cultivation after ascension, and then about the content of the ascension to the fairy world.

I hope Mo Chuan will eat shit. If he is the male protagonist, then abandon the story and the author should stop washing it.

This is a very interesting immortality novel. It is unique and unforgettable among so many immortality novels. The author's writing style is smooth and the characters are vividly depicted. Each one is vividly displayed in front of the readers, making people smile every time. It is a novel worth reading. Everyone is welcome to enter the pit. I also hope that the author will work hard and write more exciting plots.

I don't understand why Mo Chuan's male protagonist is so popular. He is essentially no different from other people from aristocratic families who compete for the opportunity of female protagonists. On the surface, he and his family prefer to do superficial things, create a good image and be helpful to others. In fact, it is equivalent to killing you half to death first, and then pretending to help you, and you still have to be grateful to him. Typical people have to count the money after being bought. Maybe the author described him as handsome, with an outstanding personality, and as a mysterious figure, which makes people think that the male protagonist is like this. None of these can change the fact that he has been plotting the fate of the female protagonist in his past and present lives.

This book is not witty, the characters are flesh-and-blood and grounded, and there are not many cliché plots. It keeps writing around the theme. The opening chapter is a bit ordinary. The subsequent plot is not about fighting with the uncle's family. After leaving the family, it becomes more and more interesting. Selling opportunities is the funniest, and the Destruction of the Sky Secret Tower is the most touching. Looking forward to the subsequent plots, yes two chapters a day are too few, at least three chapters are needed!

Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. It's an orthodox article on cultivating immortals, and strong women have no CP. The key is that the topic selection is relatively novel! In fact, in many fairy tales where the heroine is reborn or travels through the book, there will be content related to "luck" and "opportunity". However, most of them are a means for the heroine to obtain a golden finger or advance the plot. The author of this article has a bolder and unique vision, and the topic selection focuses directly on "the opportunity to plunder the Son of Destiny and the counterattack of the Son of Destiny". Although it is ultimately for the "road to heaven/ascension", this article still gives people a refreshing feeling that seeing something from a small perspective makes a big difference! 2. The writing style is very good, combined with the vivid and distinctive character descriptions, such as the thick-faced and sinister heroine, the congenial Xuanyuan, the powerful sects who have a masterful demeanor and full of inner drama, etc., So the story in the first 400 chapters is joyful, funny, and quite contagious! However, the shortcomings are also very prominent: 1. After chapter 400, the writing pace speeds up and the plot changes abruptly! The heroine, who has always been cautious and fearful of death, and always predicts when she goes out, has just tried her best to lead her disciples to break through the siege of many Nascent Soul Transformation Gods. The frightened bird leads a group of disabled people who have no ability to protect themselves. Before they can get out of danger, Goldfinger strikes again! In such a situation that is tantamount to "walking naked", the heroine miraculously has a big heart! As a result, due to the heroine's sudden and only carelessness, almost the entire army was wiped out. Even the master came to "take his place" and described the whole process in less than 30 sentences. Game over! What a dramatic turn of events! I almost gave up on the article! After that, the heroine became dark, and the writing style changed drastically. The focus of the writing was on how the heroine took revenge and killed her enemies, such as cutting them into pieces, grinding them into mud, lighting up sky lanterns with her soul, etc. (It felt unnecessary, venting hatred, is there any meaning!) If the heroine's image in the first 400 chapters was full of likability, but after the plot turned upside down, no matter how aggrieved and unwilling to hate forced her to turn black, her image was negative! I can really understand it, but I can't accept it! Even though the second brother was reincarnated and rebuilt, and the master was resurrected, the readers felt less regretful, but the work was still a failure, giving people the feeling that it ended in a hurry! 2. The author seems to be a bit erratic in his positioning of Mo Chuan! Starting from participating in the conspiracy to find the heroine, he approached the heroine again and again, with the intention of seizing the chance of the heroine and trapping Lin Wangchen to avenge his sister. Later, it was suddenly revealed that he was the dream lover that the heroine had longed for in his previous life. He was talented, good-looking, talented and lucky. He had all the conditions to be a male protagonist. He secretly did good deeds to save the family and was a good person, even throwing out the Fusang Sacred Tree to endorse him! There are many inconsistencies in his character image, which cannot be explained by "complex human nature". There is indeed a suspicion of forced whitewashing! (In order to appease the readers' anger, Mo Chuan was asked to save the heroine but was killed by the heroine? It's quite boring!) Putting aside personal preferences, I personally think it is a failure in terms of the character image of "Mo Chuan"! In general, the first 400 chapters are exciting, but after the 400th chapter, it is very helpless! I can understand that the heroine cannot win all the way to the end, I can understand that "revolution cannot be without sacrifice", and I can also understand that "the plot needs to have a twist", but I really can't accept the overturn! There is mixed praise and praise, let's take a look!

There is a small bug, that is, the Fuso Secret Realm. Later in the plot, Mo Chuan was actually brought up by the spirit of the Fuso Secret Realm. Many of his opportunities were also obtained by the secret realm spirit for him. Then why did he go to the heroine in the middle to get some disguise skills in exchange for the Pure World Lotus? The woman's Pure World Lotus was picked from Fusang Secret Realm, and there are many in it. There is another question, which is a question. I don't know if the author will come around later. Mo Chuan is a member of the seven aristocratic families, one of the people who are to be liquidated by heaven, so why is his chance so good? It is true that his luck is a bit stronger than that of the heroine. It is not logical to say that the Fuso Spirit can only help him partially. In other words, why can this person get three tokens to enter the secret realm at a young age, and directly enter the center of the secret realm? This fact itself is a sign of bad luck! I hope he really dies after being killed by the female protagonist, and doesn't want to be resurrected later. This is really disgusting, it will be extremely disgusting. Although the author now says that there is no CP, many authors want to eat both sides, saying that there will be a male protagonist later. If there is a male protagonist, I would rather that the male protagonist is a master or something else, rather than a member of the seven major families.

Why is it frequently emphasized in the article that women are jealous? Isn't this an article about women?

I would like to ask if Mo Chuan is the male protagonist. If so, I will not subscribe. Also, besides taking advantage of the female protagonist, does Xie Siniang have any other uses? If this female supporting role only takes advantage, then abandon it in advance without equal return.

It's a good-looking book, well written. So far, the characters are vivid and interesting, the plot is smooth and natural, not procrastinating or complicated, and it always revolves around the main plot. It's a high-quality novel. I hope it will continue to be good. It would be perfect if there were more chapters every day. It's not too demanding. Just two chapters a day. I always feel that reading two chapters a day is equivalent to not reading it. If there are four chapters a day, there should be something, right?

Why doesn't the heroine have a serious name? She's always called her by her ranking. She's obviously the eldest heroine. If Xie Jiuniang is called Ranking in her own family and she's almost gone out, she can't also be called Ranking. Then shouldn't the eldest girl be called Auntie Xie😥

This book is quite interesting. The heroine was reborn without turning into a black man. She looked obscene and developed, and she tricked many geniuses. The geniuses who robbed her of opportunities in her previous life were tricked by the heroine one by one in this life. It's so interesting!

Although the author likes Mo Chuan very much, I have to say that this is the rare time I have hated a character so much since I read a novel. This is the biggest failure of the entire article. Throughout the entire article, I was constantly being fed at every opportunity.

As an experienced reader, my guess is: Mo Chuan is the male protagonist, either as a male protagonist or as a reserve male protagonist. Plot summary: 1. From the time when he started to take revenge on the family and sect that had enmity in the previous life, he was trying to clean up Mo Chuan and his family. For example, the dagger Mo Chuan got was not deceived from the heroine, but given by someone else. The Mo family has never participated in deceiving the heroine. (Copy of Tianji Tower) 2. Mo Chuan will appear in various important plots, and he will appear as a smart, intelligent and powerful image. 3. In Chapter 231, Mo Chuan was forcibly arranged to be the heroine's savior. Analysis: 1. The Mo family and Mo Chuan have no grudges against the heroine in the past and present life. They are in sharp contrast to the other supporting characters and families who deceived the heroine, and they have reached the moral height of being able to emerge from the mud and remain untainted. 2. Mo Chuan's personal abilities surpass the heroine in many aspects. (The male protagonist's standard abilities) 3. The only way to repay life-saving grace is with one's own body. Summary: Mo Chuan is the male protagonist! ! ! ! !

It is said to be a CP-free novel, but the author's description of Mo Chuan is very marginal, and his behavior in the plot is very unpleasant👎🏻

I really hate those who give other people advice on writing. Whether or not there is a CP or an emotional line is the author's own business. You can read it if you want to, but don't read it if you don't want to. Tell others what to do, otherwise you can write it yourself.

I don't want to say more. The Mo family must die. Mo Chuan also crawls for me. He is pretending to be a good person here. It's disgusting.

Mo Chuan's character design is really a big failure. I didn't plan to continue reading after reading the comment section. I skipped through it and couldn't stand it. It was obvious that he was a villain in the front, but he was forced to whitewash it in the back... It's really disgusting.

The heroine's parents love the heroine, but not much. I really don't like her parents at all, so I skipped the chapter where I met her parents. Obviously, her parents are very wealthy, but they did not arrange enough training resources and caregivers for their 5-year-old daughter before leaving home. He hasn't been of much help since his return and has been sucking up the heroine's resources. I still like to see the heroine's life in the sect.

I used my unlimited reading coupon for this book, and I have been able to read the latest 433 chapters! I am really sad that I almost missed a good book because of some unreliable comments in the comment section! This book is non-CP and has a very independent and self-reliant heroine! Obviously the author has repeatedly reiterated that there is no CP, and the heroine does not have any idea of ​​forming a CP in the whole story. As a result, a lot of people made up the CP on their own, and then criticized the author based on it, saying that the heroine was dehumanized and the male supporting character was whitewashed. I felt really speechless and simply baffled. People are divided into groups, and things are flocked together. It's impossible for a good heroine to be surrounded by a bunch of garbage. . . You can't just say that a man is a CP when he appears. The strong and the strong can cooperate normally, but they don't have to have sex! Okay? Mo Chuan himself also has great luck. You can tell by looking at the fact that he carries his grandfather with him (although it may not necessarily be a grandfather, but it may also be a grandma~). If it were a male channel, he would indeed be a genius male protagonist. But, this is a female channel! There is still no CP article, so each one is excellent. The author handled it very well! Although the heroine wants revenge, she has a bottom line and self-awareness. She knows that she is the sword of heaven, and the sword is not that easy to use, so she has to leave a way out for herself and reduce the number of blows as much as possible. This is why she did not kill Mo Chuan. Wouldn't killing people with great luck reduce her own luck? Of course it will! The heroine is smart, so she won't do this. Otherwise, would she still have the last laugh? This is not wisdom, this is exactly a wise approach.

I want to see the emotional line! Not only because of Xiaojiu's experience in her previous life, I feel that God owes her a beloved man who truly understands and loves her, but also because I always believe that a truly powerful heroine has enough ability and mind to cultivate immortality and fall in love, and men will never affect the progress of her ascension! If one has to rely on cutting off love to reach the top, it would seem a bit inferior. I hope that Xiaojiu can enjoy a complete life in this life, both in career and relationship.

This heroine has a very altruistic character. Fortunately, the heroine has a golden finger to replenish her health. If the author himself were like this in reality, he would definitely be severely sucked by his so-called relatives and friends, and he would fall to the bottom of society, with a complete mismatch between his living standard and his ability to make money.

This article is very interesting. After the heroine was reborn, she was no longer a saint. She was dark-hearted and thick-skinned, and she had no baggage. Every time she found an opportunity, made money, or even abused a scumbag, I enjoyed reading it. It was very to my liking. It's rare for a female major in fairy literature to look good and write well, but she's still a little thin now.

Well, let's write a short review for Ah Jiu. Recently, the names of female videos have entered a new routine. It is too difficult to find your favorite works behind each of the very similar names. After repeated trial and error, this book is quite good. The writing is fluent, and the characters in the work are not nc, not virginal, and not childish. Based on the above points, in my opinion, the work is passed. Secondly, there are no big bugs in the content (in fact, I think the heroine should become a disciple as soon as possible). Although the golden finger is a bit big, it is still acceptable. In general, I never expected that two-thirds of the books I am following now are about cultivating immortals. Come on Xiaojiu, wait for you to grow up! 😜😜

The sudden death of the master and a group of people in the wasteland was too abrupt. It was so relaxing and relaxing that it became very depressing. I couldn't stand it any longer, so I had to give up. . .

The master is dead and can no longer be pursued. I feel that Master Fu died for the sake of death, and Xuanyuan's ancestor can sense the location where he disappeared, but her master cannot sense the location. He clearly showed himself to be very rich during the thunder tribulation, but in the end he didn't even have a life-saving magic weapon.