Battle Through the Heavens: Xiao Yan, the Emperor's Son

This is unnecessary. In the original novel, Xiao Yan had no choice but to choose Fen Jue. This version of Xiao Yan starts with the same treatment as Gu Xun'er. The Xiao family is the first family to become an emperor in Dou Qi Continent. Their own inheritance is no worse than Fen Jue, so they have to do something like Fen Jue. Nothing new at all. Although the main theme has changed, the routine remains the same.

This Xiao Yan, okay, or maybe this time traveler is just a loser, with a nouveau riche mentality, and the charm of his personality is far worse than that of the original. No matter how many resources and powerful background, he is still the same loser.

The first part was good, but then we got some red-haired monsters and time-travelers to disgust people. If we don't have a villain, why don't we just write about some extraterrestrial races in the world? If you can't handle the new plot, don't try this and stick to the original.

It's quite outrageous. You have done so much and then you can't beat the soul clan saint who is also a time traveler. You are equally talented and have more resources than her. And then you are a 17-year-old Dou Zun, and you still have a Xiao clan with a Dou Emperor. If people hadn't praised you directly for the sake of being a fellow countryman, aren't you just insulting the readers' IQ? Why does it get more outrageous as you go to the back?

I saw this from other book posts, and I would like to share with you Tang San, the madness of the Chinese comic's combat power. A generation of god-kings, invincible in the world, unworthy of being anyone's opponent. Tang San, a milestone in the Chinese comic's combat power, has set a new low in the Chinese comic's combat power. The power is enough to shatter hydrogen gas, and the intelligence is close to that of Patrick. His long-term plan is more brain-burning than Teletubbies, the death of his wife is more tear-jerking than the Midnight Ring, his battle with the six god-kings is more passionate than Boruto, and his reunion with his family is more heartwarming than The Shining. No matter how weak you are, He is always beneath you. He has unparalleled talent and strength, stands at the pinnacle of hydrogen people, and is expected to be close to the working cell. He is more intelligent than single-celled organisms and more principled than Kohei Horikoshi. He is the sewer in Chinese comics and the Sunset Six in Gods. His power transcends the limits of human imagination, transcends great fruits, and transcends the concept of "weakness." No matter what, you can't be weaker than him. Seeing his wife's death from illness, one was in tears, nine were smiling, and one was laughing wildly. He is the only god from ancient times to the present who cannot even cure diseases. Here, I dedicate a poem to Tang San: A hundred kilograms of force shatters the void, and a giant cotton hammer fights unparalleled. The weakest character in Chinese comics is not you, the clown is actually you. The above is all my respect for the great god king Tang San. 😂😂😂😂😂

Jie Jie Jie, the Lord of the Soul Palace congratulates Chief Xiao on his promotion to Dou Emperor.

Complaining about a few minor bugs 1. Without the persecution of the Soul Palace, why didn't Yao Lao break through to Half Saint when he appeared on the stage? In the original work, after staying in the ring for so long and being tortured by the Soul Capture Palace for so long, he broke through to the semi-saint level as soon as he was resurrected. It stands to reason that Yao Lao must have a semi-saint when he appears 2. Where is Ancestor Fenyan? This person in the original work is also very confusing. He probably died under the persecution of the Soul Clan. If the Soul Clan is gone, this person should still be alive. Since Xiao Xuan is not dead, the Three Mysterious Transformers of Sky Fire are still in the Burning Flame Valley and have such a good relationship with Xiao Xuan. Then he should not be dead yet, where is the Nine Star Dou Sheng late stage 3. Byd Why did Dragon Island split again? Since you arranged that Tuoshe Ancient Emperor is still there, Xiao Xuan should also enter the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor's tomb. Then there is no reason for Zhukun to still be in the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor's tomb. How could Long Island be divided? 4. Since Xiao Xuan has become Dou Emperor, why doesn't he draw the source energy of heaven and earth? If it is said that attracting the source energy of heaven and earth will destroy that big formation, then you can at least write it down? 5. Judging from your attitude, Xiao Xuan must be willing to fight against the evil tribe outside the territory. Then why didn't BYD kill the remnant soul of the Demon Emperor on the Sacred Artifact Mountain? It doesn't take much effort, right? You are not sure that the sealed Demon Emperor is still alive, and you are not willing to deal with the remaining soul? Also, after Xiao Xuan became emperor, he still allowed these low-level evil races from outside the territory to run around? Any force may have extraterritorial evil tribes, which are also 6

If your book is related to the world of Zhetian, to be honest, you have been ruined. People of Zhetian always think that their emperor is extremely awesome, and other books are not as good as him as a saint if they practice to the top. If you write about fighting to break the world, write about fighting to break the world. Don't add other worlds. You can add their items, but you can't join their world. You have to figure out who your audience is.

What, harem literature is too vulgar? No man, I've already read the fanfic. I really like harem stories. It's so cool to see Xiao Yan take on all the heroines.

Author, you have to make it clear that you are a Dou Po fan, not a Zhe Tian fan. If you don't write about Infinite Streaming, then don't rely on other novels. If you write about Dou Po, just do Dou Po. Can you please stop making some messy stuff?