Douluo's Current Heroes

Author, the male protagonist you wrote has the same double standards as you, and you also said that Tang San Wang has double standards. You and the male protagonist are no better than Tang San Wang. They are both double standards.

The protagonist's innate soul power is level 7. He has been promoted to level 2 in one year. He is stuck at level 9. He needs to have clear thoughts to break through this setting. I can only say that it is really poisonous. Most of the early training in the novel is just mindless accumulation of values. It is similar to leveling up when the experience bar is full. Only in the later stage do you need to start to understand something. Yes, and Douluo Continent itself is also set up in this way. If you give me an idea and you can't make a breakthrough, it's like a person who is stuck at 100 kilograms on the bench press. No matter how he trains and fitness, it is useless. Suddenly one day he figures it out, and then he can bench press 150 kilograms. This is outrageous. I was persuaded to quit because of this evil point (but I forgot why). Recently someone kept telling me that this book was well written, so I started reading it again, but I was persuaded to quit again. I can understand that the author wants to write something different, but the most basic underlying logic The collection cannot be lost. I know the author doesn't want to write mindless cool articles, but even if the current novels are not mindless cool articles, you still have to have some cool points (especially fan fiction), but what the author wrote in the past few chapters is true. There is nothing cool and toxic. Internet articles very much need bright spots and cool spots. The bright spots are used to attract readers. Yes, the fanfic itself has some highlights (blessed by the original work), and the book itself also has highlights in the character setting (the sexual transformation of Tang Wulin). When readers see the introduction and character cards and find the characters they are interested in, they will read it. At this time, it is necessary to be cool to retain readers. The coolness is not just a brainless pretense. The face highlights the strength of the protagonist (this is how low-level novels are written), the excellent plot and supporting characters, the description of the battle plot, the interaction between the male and female protagonists, the strategic confrontation, etc. Are all enjoyable. These are some of my experiences from reading novels for so many years. I hope it will be helpful to the author so that he can write better and better.

The author's military order guarantees that there will be no prison time

Let me prove that your propaganda works

If you dare to write about Dou San, you are still anti-Tang San. This is hell mode. After all, Dou San's Douluo Continent can be renamed Tang Family Continent. The will of the planet is Tang San's parents.

I don't understand, a Douluo fanfic put two original male characters in the protagonist team, and teamed up with the original characters for cp😅. Although it is not incomprehensible, Yun Qing estimates that the author's real-life friend, Wu Zaiyin, probably is the author's true spirit, or is still a friend. But you, the author, need to understand why some articles are written by novices, their writing is poor, and they reject them when they see a girl, but many people read them and still make a lot of money, because they cater to the market. Nowadays, novels are not considered works, they can only be said to be products. If you bring in two supporting characters for yy, you think what you are writing is a work of art 🙂. In fact, your writing style is better than many other novice fans, but the number of chapters in the more than 200 chapters of my novice novels is less than half of yours, and your popularity index is more than five times as high as yours. This is only obtained by you promoting it everywhere. You are really a clown. You want to write a long story, and you are a bit ambitious. It can be seen, but now. . . . .

Author, I have briefly read your book. How to say it? I feel that your writing style is a bit biased towards martial arts, and it feels like you are writing according to Douluo's world view. But Douluo's worldview itself is very imperfect, and the development of this world into modern society makes me feel very strange. His entire social structure is very problematic. It doesn't look like it's capital, it's not even close to being a republic, and it's even less worthy of socialism. This is more like the ancient social background and current productivity, but he doesn't mention the contradictions in between. As for the author, you have expressed your thoughts about the current hero, so let's do something more awesome, directly kick out the plot, and directly combine the three mountains of imperial capital and feudalism into one, create a Jedi sky, seal off the divine world, force the lower class to directly give birth to republican ideas, and resist the protagonist's government to complete the historical process and start a better future development.

I don't see the use of the protagonist's golden finger at all. The Taoist skills used by the protagonist are not as powerful as the Xuantian Kung Fu. They are really rubbish. They deliberately lower the protagonist's level. They also claim that if you level up too quickly, it will easily collapse. If you want to see such a powerful golden finger, are you afraid of collapse? Qing Shuiwen is better than you. Look, they have been saying in the comment area that there will be an explanation later. The most vicious thing about Douluo Wen is deliberately lowering the level. A person who cheats can practice at the same speed as the dragon set in the original book, or even slower. Do you want to laugh me to death? Is this just a genius? Do you know what a genius is? Using the fewest resources, rising to the fastest level, having the most solid foundation, becoming invincible at the same level, and having no one at the same level at all. This is a genius. But using the most resources to be at the same level as your peers, and then becoming invincible at the same level is really ridiculous. If the supporting character in this book had practiced the protagonist's skills, he would have surpassed the protagonist by more than 20 levels. It's really rubbish.

I plan to write the novel Douluo: Today's Heroes to more than two million words, and I want to write the emotional drama and plot carefully.

Well, your publicity is useful (otherwise I wouldn't have noticed this book). I'll wait and see when you update it to about a hundred chapters, otherwise I'll always find it unsatisfying.

To be honest, in the end, the protagonist doesn't have to engage in any hypocritical trial, and there is no need to talk about justice or anything, just fight and it's over. The protagonist and Tang San are simply conflicting interests and ideas. Flaunting the protagonist's justice is the same as flaunting Tang San's purity. So let's fight vigorously until the avenue is shattered and one of them is destroyed. Let's bring this book to a final conclusion!

After watching too much fantasy, if you like to see the protagonist and skip it, you will find a completely different world. From this point of view, Douluo San is not that unbearable, although compared with Dou Yi, if I talk about it too much, I will shed tears. But at least every supporting character, big or small, has personality, characteristics, and flesh and blood. Regardless of the Shrek Seven Monsters, Ling Zichen, Mo Lan, Ya Li, Yun Ming, Chen Xinjie, Long Yeyue, Cao Dezhi, Zang Xin, Wu Changkong, even the villains Qiangu Dongfeng, Qiangu Dieting, the cutscene characters Guan Yue, Dong Zian, and Leng Yaozhu sisters, they all make people feel like they are flesh and blood people. Of course, the shortcomings are also very obvious, whether it is the sloppiness of the fighting (the protagonist has various strange skills, the supporting characters can only get an A), the protagonist's stupidity, and the unclear logic of the ending, they are all flaws. But what I remember is only Ling Zichen's suicide cannon, Chen Xinjie and Long Yeyue's centuries-old love and hate, Guan Yue's moment of becoming a god, Cao Dezhi and Zang Xin's emotional excitement, etc. Perhaps these supporting characters, these normal people with flesh and blood, are the ones worth watching. Just complaining and fighting, apart from reducing inflammation, nothing can be done.

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I quite like the character of Xu Xiaoyan in the original novel. I can understand why you said that there are several protagonists and you don't want to accept her. If Le Zhengyu was with her, it would be understandable after all. But if you create an original character and pair her up, or even be promoted by the protagonist, you really can't accept it. But I also wish the author to write better and better

If you are not the author, you really know how to write, and you have absorbed five hundred years of soul bones.

The protagonist is too weak. After more than 100 chapters, I have been barely reaching 50 by level. Moreover, the protagonist is still a kind of scraping meat shield. He only relies on one counter-injury to burst out. The feeling of winning the battle is slowly grinding, and then he wins, without the refreshing feeling of fighting. Moreover, 50 is a character who exerts his power in the later stage. In the early stage, he has the weakest suppression power at the same level. It is difficult to think about what the protagonist will do in the later stage.

I'm not the author. What do you think? Why do Dousan Tangmen and Shrek want to be destroyed? They didn't mess with the protagonist. If you say that Shrek and the Tang Sect are not behaving as an organization should, then the Spirit Transferring Pagoda and the Holy Spirit Cult are even more heavyweights, and the Federation colluding with the Holy Spirit Cult is not a good thing either.

Personally, I think Tang Wulin might not be able to accept it as you write. It feels like it's all deceitful love😓. It's a bit like Tang San. Killing your father is for your own good (I'm not trying to clean up Tang San). At least it needs to be explained clearly, or let Tang Wulin see the true face of what Tang San did to Tang Wutong, and then decide whether to kill him or not, otherwise it will feel very abrupt.

I like Wu Lin Niang😍, damn, the original protagonist Nianghua is simply the heroine with the most perfect personality😍

The protagonist's behavior and thoughts in the later stages are hypocritical and double-standard

The plot is too straightforward, and the writing style is a bit immature 😭 which is a pity. If the author's writing style were better, this book would definitely be much better than this.

Why is Nianghua Wulin not big-breasted😡😡😡

How can I put it, I feel that the writing style after Shrek Exploded was too rigid, as if every word and deed had to explain the reason, and it seemed a bit distorted. How should I put it, the description was a bit too pretending to be a gentleman (especially in the emotional scenes), and I personally felt it was a bit formulaic (please don't comment if you don't like it, just my personal opinion)

No, you can have two wives, but Huo Yuhao can't? In the original work, Huo Yuhao said that he had to choose both or neither. If he gave up on Qiuer, he would be worse than his father.

The rest of the writing feels like the protagonist has a double standard. 😥

This is the best Dou San article I have ever read.

Aren't you going to give Gu Yuena a boost? Now it really becomes a vase

Huo Yuhao is really miserable. The ice silkworm and the butterfly ended up being eaten by spiders.

It feels like the last few episodes of Naruto these past few days are purely daily. When will I, the tang thief, torture me?

When will the Great God Circle appear, and what will be the ending of Tang San and Xiao Wu?